Aww how cute haha. I know how it feels when you FINALLY get an old pet ready.

Very minor mistake in the text:

"He yips at passerbys with as much ferocity his little body can muster. They shrug him off, go about their day.He begs for a share of townfolk’s meals, snatches tidbits off unwatched plates. Some coo after him, fret that the poor dear goes hungry."

There's a missing space between the two sentences.

He's adorable! He's been nominated so you're set. Some of mine have been waiting years for Spotlight! It's random once they have been accepted, so you never know. There has been a couple times that I nominated someone, and they won the next day! lol

Hey guys~ I'm back with my pet Jean Marzena! I think she's done -- I just got her faeling CW approved and stuck in her treasure, which was the last element needed! I could use a proofread and a sanity check, though. Thank you in advance. <3

Never got my license for the sanity check, tho I'm pretty sure you're doing okay~ just breathe. lol :) Sorry can't proof the story for you, headache going on. But someone has nominated so you're set for Spotlight. <3

Read through the story and profile (very action-packed; love it!) and I don't see any glaring mistakes. Perhaps this sentence (second-to-last paragraph of story) could be broken up into two or maybe have a comma/semi-colon added?

"Getting herself enough line to make it to the ground was difficult, what with her opponent swinging her about like a fly-fishing lure, and the moment she did Jean dodged around the nearest large tree, anchoring her line on something that wouldn’t be so easily moved."

Aside from that, the story flowed well. Anyways, good luck!

Thank you both~

Hello! I believe I have finished my last two pets, if anyone could please take a look. If these get nominated and accepted, I just have to wait for them (and my 3 others in the queue) to win and I'll be with done the achievement. Thank you!

They’re both very sweet pets. I identify so much with Ziva’s obsession with her purple duck stickers hahaha. Nominated Gigi, good luck!

very cute profiles! Couldn't find anything I'd change. Best of luck!

Hey all I'm new to making profiles (Only been at it about a week and not even a full week of actively working on it) and I just finished

This profile is really cool and I love the aesthetics! You've done an excellent job organizing information and making it easy to follow, and I certainly enjoyed reading about Athena and learning about all the things associated with her.

A couple things I would suggest: For easier navigation, I would put the button links on the top or side of the profile, rather than the bottom. I missed these initially because of the size of my screen. All images need to be credited, including the background and the ones in the section about Minerva. If they're public domain because of their age, that can be noted in the credits section!

Those are the only things I noted, and they're more for housekeeping/pet spotlight eligibility than anything. Amazing profile!

Thank you! I work on a pretty big screen so it's hard to know what will or wont show up on smaller screens

I agree with . The profile is awesome. And that was the first profile you ever coded? Amazing! And they are right, every image must be credited. But also where your info came from, etc. Every piece has to be credited. I don't mind the buttons at the bottom. My screen showed them right away.

It has been a while since I have last tried my hand at this, so hopefully I'm doing it right. After much tinkering, I think I am finally done with my pet, Beside. If anyone could help me figure out whether her profile is looking good or not, that would be great.. any constructive feedback would be great as well!

What a pretty profile and cute story about flowers withstanding the change in seasons! I love the warm purples (and your HA is lovely to match). The TC is so pretty too. I'd love to see six more items to fill up that last row.

"The seedlings shook their leaves, and chirped a chorus of 'no's." I think you're missing an apostrophe here. Also, your user link under the pet image isn't clickable. It might be stuck under an invisible box or the pet image itself. You can change the z-index in your coding to adjust it so that your username is layered over it. Or perhaps move it elsewhere.

Thanks for taking the time to give me all the feedback! (And the compliment as well, that's very sweet.)

You're right about the z-index, I might have fumbled around too much with those numbers; layering the pet image down did the trick.

TC also holds six more items.. I didn't realize that it could look empty, so that's on me. It's a relief to have the profile go through someone else's lens.

As for the apostrophe, maybe my English is going down the nearest drain - I'm not quite sure where the punctuation error is. Do I need another apostrophe? 😳

I think you need an apostrophe to close the last word. So, from 'no's > 'no's.' Of course, I'm not an english major either haha.

Anyways, everything looks great and your pet has been nominated by someone already. Congrats on finishing and good luck winning! :)

I think

Looks good. Already nominated ^_^

That story is amazing! I loved it. :)