hey i think

Majestic already is nominated ^_^ He looks adorable and the profile is great! <3

Love him. Such a cute profile and nice story. :)

I think

TY :D

def thinking left-aligned, also sent u a few more suggestions :3 (also nominated!! :3)

Thank you and thank you! :D

5.29

Story, profile, and TC done! I'd love some feedback while his overlay gets finished! TY :D

extremely cute story!! ;v; and the tc and profile are good too!! lmk when the overlay is done and i'll shoot ya a nom!! :3

Hi all! I think I finally have a pet ready to be nominated but I wanted to get some opinions and suggestions.

Hi! Jaxie is really cute. One small typo in the story: 'accustom' s/b 'accustomed'. I also think you should have something for a background to add interest and color.

The Archivist I believe is ready! he's based off jonathan sims/the archivist from the magnus archives!

Hi! Nice pet. I think '(pet overly done by me (spoookles))' s/b much simpler and overly is misspelled. You need to credit the background, and I think all the credits should be together. :) I also think it would be nice if you say on the profile that he's based off Jonathan Sims/The Archivist from the Magnus Archives. Maybe after the credits. pet overlay done by

ohh thank you for catching that! i can't put it in the credits because if i try to edit that part of the code it makes the entire credits section disappear but i updated it with what you suggested!

Oh, you caught me before I finished. lol That's fine, just put the background credit with the story credit and add the based on after that. Then I think it will make more sense and look nice. Add spacing between the story and the credits too. It will read better.

story could stand to be a lil longer but it's cute as is! two things

1. agree with Chrys about adding a bg
2. make sure to credit those lil pixels!! :O

it looks GOOD!!! i'd maybe expand upon the writing a bit + maybe add a few more things to the tc but i really like it!! the overlay BANGS. maybe add some text styling to 'tell me your story' for Emphasis? :O agree with Chrys about crediting the bg, and make sure to credit yourself for the writing!

Thank you so much for catching that!! I'll keep an eye out for a background.

AH yes the pixels! I follow a tumblr site that mass posts them, but I'll try to find the OG creators if possible. Thank you for the feedback!

Awwww I got a denial, almost missed it between the spam dance notices

Withdrawl's pet spotlight nomination was denied for the following reason(s): • Inappropriate content

And why is my only thought -no, really? LOL. Oops. I guess recovery from addiction isn't a good show case, ah well. He's set aside with Florissa as too cool to have the trophy. ^_^

edited to correct the typo in Weekend's link

After what feels like ages of neglecting my pets (and spurred on by the post saying the spotlight queue was running dry!), I thought it was time I worked on a couple of pets....

Firstly Weekend - I know the second person storyline isn't the most popular, but I couldn't make it work any other way! I'd appreciate any thoughts on it / changes / improvements please (including any problems you might have found with the page coding)

And secondly Deduction - I started the story years ago, tried adding to it, and ran out of inspiration(!). So do you think I should end it at "He knew at once that this was the case he would leave the flat for – this would be at least a 9.9" or do you think I should try and continue it to make a 'proper' ending? (again, comments / thoughts / anything about the entire pet profile are welcome please!)

it's been quite a while since I had any pets that were finished enough to be spotlight-worthy, so I may well have missed something obvious from the page / credits!

Weekend isn't showing up. But Deduction is cute.
I like the ending as it is, Raven followed and watched carefully, if she could be of any help, she would do whatever she could.

it leaves it open showing Raven's dedication and to continue on another pet's profile or the story elsewhere.

sorry, I typo'd Weekend's link (for some reason I added an extra E o.O) The correct link is Weekend

I hadn't thought of ending Deduction's story where it stands at the moment - that could actually work well :D

Thanks :D

Awww I think recovery from an addiction shows hope! That should not be denied for 'Inappropriate content'. Ugh.

I loved both pets! Agree with Thundercracker on the ending with the story. Both pets have been nominated, so best wishes for Spotlight. :)