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Jun 10, 2024 1 year ago
Faune
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Chemukh is done <3 Any feedback?

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Jun 10, 2024 1 year ago
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Looks great! I nominated her.

Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
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Night

thanks :D

Chemukh looks great!

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Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
Kinnoyu
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Oberon

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I recently got a warning on this pet because the font had been too big and covered up some of the pet color information. Can people check and make sure they can see it fine now? Also any suggestions? Is the text hard to read? I also changed the treasure chest so that it's a perfect rectangle and there's no missing spots. Any suggestions welcomed! If not, then he is good to go!

Also just want to check with others again that this story is safe; I know there's a bit of "self harm" and kind of drug use, should I put a trigger warning at the beginning?

Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
Faune
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The pet color info is visible for me. Personally I would use a hover opacity variation so that when the viewer hovers over the text box the background of it is more solid and the text is easier to read.

I'm not sure about the TW. If they didn't flag you for it in the initial feedback then you're probably in the clear. But maybe someone else will have better input.

"I've found it is the small things,
everyday deeds of ordinary folk,
that keeps the darkness at bay.
Simple acts of kindness and love
"
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Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
Kinnoyu
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Oberon

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How is it now? I was able to manipulate it and add a hover to it. Does it look better now? I did it for the TC as well, should I not have done that?

Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
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I think it's easier to read now! For the TC I would either leave it w/o the hover or make the opacity 1 when hovered so the details of the items are clear.

"I've found it is the small things,
everyday deeds of ordinary folk,
that keeps the darkness at bay.
Simple acts of kindness and love
"
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Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
Kinnoyu
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Oberon

I put it back as it was, thanks for all the advice!!

Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
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Absolutely! Such a cool concept and story, looks like he's already nominated.

"I've found it is the small things,
everyday deeds of ordinary folk,
that keeps the darkness at bay.
Simple acts of kindness and love
"
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Jun 11, 2024 1 year ago
Chrysariel
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Khan

Love the profile! My only note is that exp pet is a horse not a dog. But its still cool. :)

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Jun 12, 2024 1 year ago
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Oberon

yeah I realized that after I had named it haha let's just say he got that dawg in him

Jun 12, 2024 1 year ago
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Khan

lol! It still works. :)

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Jun 14, 2024 1 year ago
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Madame">https://subeta.net/petinfo.php?petid=5879077]Madame Vastra

I would like some feed back on this page first. I'm rubbish at spelling. I'm from the UK.


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Jun 14, 2024 1 year ago
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hellooo!

this is the second pet page i've made... and this time i learnt CSS to code it myself! which has been fun (i'm unemployed currently, so i've got so much time on my hands hahaha). i'm nowhere near a coding master, but i've learnt a lot.

i'd love to know what you think of DESPOT! my glutton of a villain

been wanting to write about him for a while now. so happy i got to do this. also had a great time drawing him and his minion (i love griffins!) both pet and minion have character exposition at the bottom of the page. might tweak the story slightly if i need to over the next day or so (i'm going to do a few more read-overs) but other than that, i'm finished

your link didn't work, but i found Vastra on your page! your spelling looks good to me (profile looks so cool too!) there was only two instances where a comma could be added (but commas are often subjective haha, so it's up to you!)

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Jun 14, 2024 1 year ago
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This is what the profile looks like on my laptop: Image The page itself doesn't scroll vertically or horizontally, I think there's something with the code that can make it essentially fit to the screen it is being viewed on. It looks like a really cool profile though! Also here is the link to her profile Profile. Your link above doesn't actually go to her profile.

OMG that profile is amazing. The art?! The story?! Just so good all around. I absolutely love what you did with the profile and how you used the art. I'm invested and can't wait to learn what happens with this mysterious stranger! The art even hovered can make a few words tough to read fluidly, but I didn't really have an issue.

"I've found it is the small things,
everyday deeds of ordinary folk,
that keeps the darkness at bay.
Simple acts of kindness and love
"
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Jun 14, 2024 1 year ago
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Not sure why it did that it works on my PC. Maybe I need to find the scroll code. I can’t actually code myself.

I changed the link too


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Jun 14, 2024 1 year ago
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OMG That art! Do you do overlays? I did have a bit of a hard time with the story being blocked on the edges. Difficult to read. But overall fantastic. <3

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Jun 15, 2024 1 year ago
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thanks so so much for the feedback, guys! i really appreciate iiiit!!

super happy you enjoyed the story :,) i love writing (and villains!) so it means a lot!!

do you mind if i ask what your resolution is at? and how heavily is the text cut off by the images? so happy you like my art!! i don’t currently offer any service art on subeta, but i have been thinking about it

my macbook is 2880 × 1800px, and that resolution looks fine with my page, but i can see that anything smaller than 1680px might allow the images to overlap too much…

the changes i’ve made so far (to try help the issue) is pull down the hover opacity from 0.3 to 0.1. the images are now barely visable when you hover making reading a lot easier. and i also moved the top right image more to the right

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Jun 15, 2024 1 year ago
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If you'd like, I'm happy to look at the code and see if I can figure it out for you! Alternatively you could ask the creator of the profile, they would probably have a quicker answer than me! My resolution is 2880x1800 if that helps!

Please add me to team - would totally love to have art by you! Granted I have to save up again after spending all my csc / sp on pet slots lololol The opacity change worked like a charm! It's very easy to read for me now :) I'm also 2880x1800

1000 posts hit! I was going to make a new board but figured it was best to ask the OP / admin in case it's important to have each new board created by the same person / group :)

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everyday deeds of ordinary folk,
that keeps the darkness at bay.
Simple acts of kindness and love
"
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Jun 15, 2024 1 year ago
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Maya Lopez

that creator is no longer on site :(


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