Pet Spotlight + Support Group IV
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Thanks! ANd yes a colore, etc would be nice. well i would like something dark as it's a dark sea story. So maybe sea with moonlight or dark greenish
Hello there! I've recently fixed up a pet profile that had previously gotten denied a nomination and wanted some input ^w^ The reason was for the credits. I've edited them a bit and am hoping they should be fine now. Any suggestions or recommendations are very very welcome! This is the first pet I've been serious about for nominations so I'm very new to this lol Thanks in advance! Garrick Ollivander
How about this?
I took the liberty of coding it into a backdrop. Full code below:
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Draugr,
The old Norse definition of a "draugr" is "a ghost, spirit, dead inhabitant of a cairn".
Often the draugr is regarded not so much as a ghost, but as an animated corpse of the decease inside the burial mound.
Characteristics:
- Has superhuman strength.
- Can increase his size and weight at will.
- Their bodies are said to be blackened and swollen with decay.
- They smell horrible.
Need to kill a Draugr? First, it is not easy!
Iron weapons can injur them, but will not kill them.
To do that you must decapitate them.
Once it is decapitated, you must burn the body and scatter its ashes in the sea.
Only then will it stop haunting you.
Draugr are noted for having numerous magical abilities. they can Shape-shift, control the weather, and see into the future.
A poem:
"Do you know what kind of fellow Draugr is?
You better believe he is not all that rare
When a storm cracks, he howls before the ship wrecks.
And if he gets a hold of you, he won't let go.
When waves hit over the gunnel, Draugr is now at the helm of your boat."?.
Mare (Minion),
Old Norse legendsays that a Mare would slither into ones bedroom when they are asleep.The mare would then paralyze their victim, usually starting at the feet and slowly moving towards the chest.
When it reached the chest, the mare would cause the sleeper to have nightmares.
Sometimes the sleeper would feel as if they were suffocating and some suffocating deaths were attributed to Mares.
Mares were also known as mara.
A Prayer:
Here I lay down to sleep;
No nightmare shall plague me
Until they have swum through all the waters
that flow upon the earth,
and counted all of the stars,
that appear in the firmament,
Thus help me God the Father, Son, and Holy Ghost.
Amen.
credits:
Minion info by: listverse.com & scarystudies.com. (Edit by & )
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I also changed the color of the bg to black, the better to match the main image. We can also add a color to the content boxes, if you think the white is too stark a contrast.
Oh how lovely. The only thing I would change is that you need to credit JK Rowling/Harry Potter for the Ollivander character and setting. You say it's a fanpet, but you don't say what it's a fan of.
Also I found a minor typo: 
Ollivanders needs an apostrophe so it's possessive: **Ollivander's
The way some people spell makes me wonder about their pronunciation. My CW shop, and my ping group
Truuuue true! I didn't even think of crediting that! Lol Thank you for that! And the typo catch! :3
It's okay. I forgot to credit myself the first time I did up a pet, so you're in good company. ^.^
The way some people spell makes me wonder about their pronunciation. My CW shop, and my ping group
Lol that sounds like something I'd do honestly. Got those edits fixed. I'm planning to wait a bit and see if there's other suggestions before readying him up. I heard editing the page once they're nominated can extend the process I think?
Oh wow looks awesome! Thank you so much for your help!!!
Now to get nominated & chosen
Hey dude, if you need to chat more pets that's getting ready for Nominations, here's the place love.
So I got some pets that I think are ready. If someone could just glance at them and give the nod or correct that would be great.
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Hi! Just my opinion on these~ The only thing I saw on Shekinah was that in the story, I think it should be a break line between each paragraph. Some don't have one and some do, and I think all should be the same. Such a pretty profile.
I liked Impressionist but I had trouble trying to read the story. I think the text should be darker, at least for these eyes. Really liked the background.
I loved Abra best. The profile was my favorite, tho I really liked the others too. Nominated for you. :)
Mizu is great! I love the overlay and all the pics esp. She has been nominated so you're all set.
I have Firesong ready. Please look him over and let me know what you think. Thanks! :)
Thanks so much!! I wasn't really able to replicate the Subeta art style but it definitely looks like her. I really appreciate everyone's nice words ^^
Love the profile and story! It looks like the top of Firesong’s overlay is cut off though.
Thank you. I will fix that ^^ <3 Or try to find where to fix that in the coding ^^ I love Firesong.
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Screenshot This is what I see and how it is supposed to look. Can you please send me a screenshot of what you see?
Welcome and thank you. <3 Looks great! All of yours are nominated so you're ready. :)
That’s what I see as well. On closer inspection, zooming in, I can see that the flames aren’t cut off. The black drop shadow is aligned with the top of the flames, creating the illusion of a flat edge, so I mistook it for the top of the image being cut-off.
Now I can see that it isn’t, so I think you’re all good otherwise!
Yeah NP. Congrats on another pet finished :D
I got Impressionist text bigger. bolder made it look odd. does it look readable to you?
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it's been years. i never thought this pet could actually be spotlight ready and yet, dovahpug is done i thought maybe i should at least drawing him a new art but the old art i did when i was like 14 makes it only funnier. the most elaborate shitpost of a pet now if any of my pets could actually win after months of nothing that'd be nice u.u
