thats ok! I think you did well even though you dont know too much about manga, I think it looks perfect!! ahhh I really want to commission you for another story LOLL you write really well >w<

Here is the first draft for Kath. I tried to keep the last few lines of dialogue close to those in Amalia's story but the rest from Kath's point of view. Let me know any changes you would like. :)

I wasn't sure if you wanted to do this story in exchange for a profile or a new story so I didn't put up a lot yet but I do have a saved, coded copy. (Also let me know if you would prefer HTML for the paragraph breaks since the story will be posted on another site. I'm using scode now but that is easy enough to change.)

I'll pay for this one separately since I have some more characters in need of a story ^_^ also no need for coding since I can do that on my own c: it would be great if you can still put spaces between paragraphs so I know where to break when coding it xD thank you so much!!

Sounds good. This was a long story so that will be 3 mil on Lot .

offered >w< thank youuu~

Wow that is so great! I see a bit that needs to be changed, so I'll mail you :3

and i will post our forms here ^_^ we decided to go with the 2 long stories, but if you happen to write into a complex story, we dont mind adding extra sps or throwing another profile in since we love to hear stories of our OCs >w<

so we were thinking of a story of our 2 main characters: Ryouji (fiores) and Seiji (mine) and 1 supporting character: Chiasa (fiores); we would like our stories to overlap at certain events but also include their own individual events that happened; if you can make parts of the story humorous, that would be great! (esp on parts like ryouji's brother complex for seiji)

Pet Name: Ryouji, Seiji, Chiasa

Setting:fantasy/ice kingdom for ice dragons

Personality: check the personality section on his page ^_^

PoV: third person (seiji's POV)

Physical traits: the wings in his design arent actual wings, I think theyre epaulets? if thats what theyre called LOL just a shoulder piece, and the back of his vest? is longer and trails behind him (im so bad with words, sorry >A<) you can see references in the images section ^_^ I dont have an accurate one just yet (his horns is supposed to be white though!)

Likes/Dislikes: seiji likes talking to the commoners, he thinks its interesting to hear out their experiences and stories, he gets along with them really well, he doesnt like it when his brother treats him like a kid though, it gets irritating for him, but during serious times he actually looks up to his brother deep down

Other characters to include: Ryouji (older brother), Chiasa (Captain of the guards) inside her mind, she thinks Seiji is a brat and troublesome to deal with xD

Preferred Length: as much as you can and Ill be willing to pay extra if it goes longer than a long story xD

Anything else?: we were thinking for the plot, maybe they could start off the day by greeting people (Seiji's favorite part of the day, this can be an overlapped part), since Ryouji is king he has other duties to attend to, but Seiji prefers to continue talking to families and hearing them out, (Ryouji asks Chiasa to secretly "keep an eye on" Seiji while he takes care of other duties) and this has happened many times so Seiji knows Chiasa is secretly keeping watch, but he would pretend like he isnt aware and then somehow try to escape from her supervision, but after escaping from her, the conflict arises when Seiji notices that the fire dragons (who are from another kingdom) are causing trouble to a family of ice dragons, and he takes out his rapier (you can see it under images) and fights them off. After knocking them out, Chiasa caught up to Seiji, asked him what happened and takes care of the fire dragons. Their convo might go something like this:

Chiasa: how should I tell ryouji about this... Seiji: maybe you dont have to tell him? innocent look Chiasa: you know I hate liars, Im reporting this

they go back to the castle and Chiasa reports the incident to Ryouji (overlapped part)

then comes the scene of Ryouji hugging his little brother probably going "you know I dont like it when you fight! what if you got hurt? awww my poor little brother! sorry for yelling at you, its good that youre safe" stroking his brothers hair LOL (just an example but you can make it really funny XD)

and then all 3 of them discuss and try to find out what the fire dragons are up to

sorry if its a little too specific, if you have your own ideas feel free to incorporate them into the story >w< I just wanted to get the general idea of how they act around each other, also we dont have a name for the ice or fire dragon kingdom just yet, you can make one up and use it as a placeholder ^_^

And here is my form~

Pet Name: Ryouji

Setting: Fantasy/Ice kingdom for Ice dragons, minor mention of a Fire Kingdom

Personality: See his charahub page for his personality~ His main thing other than his calm demeanor is his little brother complex. He dotes on him constantly. He will often get angry at Seiji and/or discipline him but will quickly apologize because he can’t be mad at him for longer than a minute. He thinks everything about his little brother is adorable and has thought that way ever since Seiji was born.

Chiasa’s personality is on her Charahub page (see link below) but I want to stress her distaste for liars, cheats and traitors. She particularly hates traitors due to her backstory which you can read if you want on her page xD

PoV: 3rd person (Ryouji’s POV, mildly Chiasa’s POV when needed?)

Physical traits: Ryouji is pale with green eyes. His hair is pure white except for a streak of ice blue in his front bangs. (References on his page.)

Likes/Dislikes: He likes to spoil Seiji and has done so ever since Seiji was a baby. He doesn’t like it when Seiji gets into fights or does anything that would put him in harm’s way. He tends to have Chiasa follow Seiji around a lot even though Chiasa is supposed to be protecting him. He doesn’t have too many hobbies because his royal duties keep him very busy so his only real pleasure is spoiling his little brother.

Other characters to include: Chiasa (Captain of Prince Ryouji’s personal guard)

Preferred Length: Same as what Serene said xD

Anything else?: I think Serene covered the extra stuff in her form.

Hi there! I was wondering if you still had slots available? c:

An updated draft for Kath. For some reason I got to thinking there were two dance competitions but it was easy enough to change the bus ride to a short one. :D With adding Kath's full name I didn't know if you wanted first and last but I put her full first name right at the beginning and I can add the last if you like.

A draft for Koan. and A draft for Kyeran. I think I got most of the requested details but just let me know if anything is missing or if you would like any changes.

For the new stories, I'm thinking since Ryouji and Seiji are more main characters they could work well in complex stories but Chiasa will likely be better for a long. (This is usually the best way to go for supporting characters since they tend to be not quite as developed as mains.) I was thinking of ordering another profile if you and would be interested in another exchange. We could do the two stories here (Koan and Kyeran-2 long stories) as payment for the first and Ryouji's if complex (Chiasa's would be separate) or Ryouji's and Chiasa's if you would like two long for the second profile if that sounds good. I will be glad to do another story or two for along with Seiji's.

Here is the first draft for Tavali. I had a lot of fun with this one. :D

I do have one slot left. If you would like to post the form now I can slot you immediately or if you need time to fill it out I can add you to the wait list. :)

@ Pureflower Thanks so much! here's the form

Pet Name: Woodcraft

Setting: House, Craft Table/shelf in Kid's room

Personality: Extremely happy and likes to keep his little simplistic mind busy, likes to help out where he can. Not the sharpest tool in the shed though, kinda dumb.

PoV: Third Person

Physical traits: He is a small wooden skeletal raptor, glued together with crummy wood glue. He has a set of ribs that weren't cut out right so every now and then it falls off and can be put back on.

Likes/Dislikes: Woodcraft likes to build and put things together, often makes a horrible mess. He's obsessed with tape, thinks in his dumb mind its far superior to glue somehow, plus... Glue apparently has a funky smell he dislikes. Good with a craft knife he often uses it in his owner's stead since its a kid who isn't allowed to use it. (this is how the kid gets around his mother's rule of not handling sharp things.)

Other characters to include: The kid (his owner) and Blocko (a few lego blocks TAPED together that woodcraft talks to and claims is his pet dragon. Blocko is an inanimate object)

Preferred Length: Somewhere between a standard story to long is fine. If you go over I don't mind.

Anything else?: The kid originally wanted a t-rex skeleton craft kit but got the raptor one instead.

Just want something cute and maybe a bit silly, thank you again for doing this! <3

[edit] Sorry! Decided to have Blocko held together with tape not glue even though the blocks connect on their own. No more edit I promise!

Im definitely up for another exchange! I can always get more stories >w<

Aaah both drafts are awesome! There's a couple things I would like to point out though, they're super tiny xD

1. I found a little typo here - "It was so easy to make Koan blush. How did humans ever find a mate with their faces giving them away lie that?" "lie" should be "like" yes? xD

2. And towards the end where you mention Koan sleeping, could you put a note in there either about how often he sleeps or how long he sleeps? Because he takes lots of naps and when he sleeps, he sleeps xD

Everything else was spot on! I loved the flash back scene and how you added demon lore and such. Very well done ^__^

I was thinking I can pay for Koan and Kyeran's story separately so you could do the complex story with Ryouji/Seiji in exchange for this first profile. For the second profile, I believe me and wanted stories for a couple of our other characters :3

If you still have a slot available. :)

Pet Name: Fredrika. Her actual name is Fang-hua Rweekew..., but that was too hard for a child to pronounce.

Setting: The high mountains of the Orient.

Personality: Fredrika is a dream guardian. Her unconditional cheerfulness,and a clear and precise mind, free of doubt, allow her to keep the dreamer's mind free of evil. Fredrika has a beauty and dignity resulting from a body and mind that are synchronized and joyous. Always playful, she unintentionally frightens mountain travelers on occasion, with her exuberant leaps and bounds from the high peaks where she lives.

PoV: Third person, preferably from a child's perspective.

Physical traits: here and here

Other characters to include: Shen, the Kirin is her firend and frequent companion.

Preferred Length: Standard to long. Whatever makes a good read.

An updated draft for Kyeran. I fixed the typo that got away and added a bit about Koan's crazy sleep needs as well. I can set up a lot for these two together so you don't have to pay twice but I will wait to do so until ever detail is just right. :)

I'll wait to fill out the form for the second profile until I catch up with the drafts for Ryouji/Seiji just so I'm not trying to do too much at once. :D

I have you slotted. I actually have a working knowledge of woodwork terms from past experience so this should be fun. I even know what wood glue smells like. :D Just one quick question for clarity...Woodcraft himself is the wooden raptor built by a not-so-bright kid but he also crafts things right? So the story should be from Woodcraft's point of view but the kid should figure heavily in the story?

I'm full at the moment but I should have a slot or two opening up by tomorrow and as soon as it does, it's all yours.

For some reason I'm not getting pings but luckily I checked the thread. c:

Woodcraft is the dumb one, his creations are well, terrible. His heart is there though! Woodcraft is indeed the raptor, the kid there's nothing too special about him. The story doesn't need much of the kid, could just be some grand adventure finding a component to build a mess with to building Blocks.

Ah that is perfect! You can go ahead and set up the trade, I'm ready whenever you are ^^

That sounds good! Take your time C:

It would be awesome if you can add in her last name too :3 other than that it's actually a boarding school but Lia got special privileges so she can go home :3

Sounds good. That will be 6 mil for 2 long stories on Lot .

That makes sense since Lia's mom is so well regarded and the dancers would be that much more focused on their studies with less distractions. The final copy will have Kath's full first and last name. I set up Lot and you have the option of 7 mil or 150 csc.

Awesome, thank you so much :) I offered the CSC, and I'll be back for another pet for sure :3 I just need to figure things out for her!