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Jan 29, 2015 11 years ago
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Thanks for letting me know on the profile. I know how crazy life can be with school and the wait is no problem. I have you slotted for Gifre's character and I think I'll be able to get you a draft by the end of this weekend. :)

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Jan 29, 2015 11 years ago
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Amsonia

I love it! Thank you so very much! :)

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Jan 30, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

Hello! :)

Pet Name:Froseti

Setting: Dense forest inhabited by fairies and dryads

Personality: noble with a gentle voice but still very kingly . does that make sense? He is known as little prince

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PoV: Third is fine

Physical traits: [URL=http://subeta.net/pets/Froseti] link [/URL] , the flowers are very important since they are what gives him a kingly appeal.

Likes/Dislikes: He doesn't really do much but ensure humans do not find him or any of the other forest sprites. The fairies are his messengers as he sends them out to find out news of the outside world. Hates getting dirty.

Other characters to include: see below?

Preferred Length: willing to spend up to 2.5 mil

Anything else? Froseti is the only spirit born without a home, something to latch onto. For example my pet Alturas is a redwood tree spirit and resides within these trees as his home. Froseti has nothing but a meadow and fairies for done strange reason.

This could possibly be an origin story.


Jan 30, 2015 11 years ago
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Sounds perfect, thank you!

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Jan 31, 2015 11 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Vasilisa. I think I got the timeline so everything makes sense in relation to the other girls. :D Let me know any changes you would like.

Here is the first draft for Gifre. I decided to let someone else do the dirty work but make it clear that he would have no problem with killing the women he takes an interest in. Let me know if you would like any changes.

I have you slotted and I hope to have a draft for you by Monday. :)

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Jan 31, 2015 11 years ago
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Omg...wow, you nailed him perfectly :O I don't see anything that needs editing, you got his personality across wonderfully <3

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Jan 31, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

Awesome. :D That will be 3 mil on Lot .

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Feb 1, 2015 11 years ago
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Oooh that is wonderful! You are so talented <3 Here are a few changes I'd like to request

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he queen has named her Chrissanthe, and she is sure to be a blossom to glorify Everfrost.”
Can it be that "the queen has named her Chrissanthe, after the king's own mother? ;p [/quote]

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She could no longer stay at the Academy as long as she liked to perfect her routines.
How about adding that she had a sudden love for children too? And her mom always wished she'd teach at the academy (because she worries that Vasi will be too tired)

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When Amalia got the acceptance letter to Karanova Academy it was one of the proudest moments of Vasilisa’s life.
Lia wasn't accepted, she just got in because Vasi asked grandma to give her a place xD And perhaps more visions of the ghost queen in modern Vasi's life? o3o Not sure if you can find any places to fit Cygne in, but if you can, I think it would be great to hint that Vasi recognises her and her peppermints :P

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Feb 1, 2015 11 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Froseti. Please let me know if you would like any changes.

Thank you ❤

An updated draft for Vasilisa. I made the desired fixes and I tried to add in a few more scenes from the past along with a very brief present scene about Cygne. If there are any particular parts you would like more past scenes for I can certainly do that. I'm trying to be careful not to mess anything up on the timeline, past or present. :D

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Feb 2, 2015 11 years ago
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Oh yes I love this way better :3 But I meant to say if you can include more of Amalia's past in the book Vasilisa was reading? o3o

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Feb 2, 2015 11 years ago
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Hey! I was hoping you might be able to do another story for me.?

Pet Name: Amsonia

PoV: whatever; doesn't matter

Setting: She lives in a nature sanctuary. There are normal trees but what are closer to her are mushroom trees. Similar to this: Click me.

Personality: gentle, smart but so aloof you wouldn't know it.

Physical traits: Very much like her subeta pic.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes: She loves to sleep. You will see her on top of mushrooms (smaller ones) or even sleeping under one in her favorite pile of leaves all cupcakes, but favorite with edible flowers

Other characters to include: faerie

Anything else?: I want something with a faerie in it, an adventure. Like Amsonia finding some or a friend. I don't know. You can bounce some things off me first to see what I like best? If you want. I just wasn't sure about this part.

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Feb 2, 2015 11 years ago
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An updated draft for Vasilisa. I did a passage like what you would read in a history book and tried to give it the feel that the author is opinionated and doesn't have all the facts right (all too common in history books).

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Feb 3, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

oh its so great so far!


Feb 3, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

I'm glad you like it. :)

Are there any additions or changes you would like me to make or would you like me to set up a lot?

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Feb 3, 2015 11 years ago
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Ooh I love that <3 But one more change I PROMISE ;o; Cathyrine was not the kings daughter, she's just the child of a very powerful lord in that country ^-^

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Feb 3, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

would it be possible to give hin one or two more speaking parts? Nothing in particular, it just deems like he talks least. C: how much will it be ?


Feb 3, 2015 11 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Amsonia. I tried to give it a fantasy adventure feel with a few mythical creatures included. Let me know any changes you would like.

An updated draft for Froseti. I felt like toward the end there was a real lack of dialogue, especially between Froseti and the other spirit, so I tried to increase it there. I am just over the word count for a standard slot but I don't mind pricing this one at 2 mil since I know you set 2.5 as your upper limit. I set up Lot for you.

An updated draft for Vasilisa. Easy enough detail to fix. :D I decided to make it a land exchange so there could still be the (sort of) truce between the two kingdoms. I also managed to work in how Cath is from the other kingdom but not the king's daughter. I ran close to 4k words on this one so I set up Lot and you have the option of 7mil or 150csc.

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Feb 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

Oohhh that is perfect!! I will go offer now, thank you SO much :'33

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Feb 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

thank you for the lovely story for Froseti! would you hate if I asked for another story? cause i have three options, but if not i understand :'D

Juli-us Required:

Pet Name: Juli-us

Setting: Typical woodland area

Personality: Very active, well kept, typically cheerful and friendly, hard to anger

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PoV: third

Physical traits: Okay, Juli-us is a doe who identifies as a buck. He prefers 'he' 'his' pronouns, and keeps his 'buck' status by attaching antler like branches atop his head with spider webs. He enjoys running to keep muscle bulk up. one | two | three

Likes/Dislikes: He keeps hydrated, so water is a big thing for him. Dislikes...well he doesn't hate much. Though he will sometimes beat himself up (emotionally) after a while of being ridiculed for his life choices (considering he will never have kids :c)

Other characters to include: well the rest of the herd c: He has a few good friends, one male and others female who accept him but not many. In fact if he wanted to run with the males, he would have to run beside them, out of sight.

Preferred Length: same budget as last time 2 - 2.5 mil

Dimitri You can fill out as many or as few of the optional fields as you like.

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Pet Name: Dimitri

Setting: The cold forests of Northern Europe

Personality: has a very 'sasuke uchiha' attitude... i.e doesn't talk much but when he does he is pretty arrogant (at least he has the muscle to back it up). once he opens up however, he is quite kind to friends despite his appearance. He tries to avoid all human contact because of his 'power'. If he is threatened by anyone he becomes blood thirsty and violent.

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PoV: 3rd

Physical traits: Dimitri is my version of the European myth of the Black Shuck. Legend has it that it takes the form of a large shaggy wolf with huge red eyes. It is said that if you meet the gaze one, you are guaranteed to die within the year.

Likes/Dislikes: His best friend Nora.

Other characters to include: Nora, the white shuck unlike the black shuck, whoever meets the gaze of the white shuck will be granted perfect health for as long they live.

Preferred Length: 2 - 2.5 mil

Anything else: i'd like this to be a rather dark story

Valdis Required:

Pet Name: Valdis

Setting: The same fae forest Froseti resides in, when humans still lurked.

Personality: Quick tempered, extremely active, rather sassy in her actions.

Optional:

PoV: third

Physical traits:overall appearance is sad look another wolf , she CANNOT speak, her tongue has been cut out when she was still very young. Eyes are seemingly hollow but she can see. She doesn't walk on the ground, but rather floats a few inches off from it. Still moves forward by 'walking' though.

Preferred Length:2-2.5 mil

Anything else?: Valdis is the spirit of fate insert sparkles here . She is a living embodiment of a willow wisp and will lead people to their fates, including sudden death via falling off cliffs, getting bitten by a snake etc.

if you did all of them i'd gladly pay 10 mil c:


Feb 4, 2015 11 years ago
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I usually keep it to 2 per slot when the shop fills (all 5 slots) but I'm only at half right now so I don't mind taking on 3. :) What I'll do is work them one at a time though, since each is a unique character. I'll price each according to length unless you would like to pay for all 3 together. (My standard price is 1.5 mil for a story up to 1,200 words and 3 mil for up to 2,500 words. For reference, Froseti's was just under 1,400).

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