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Jan 2, 2015 11 years ago
Pureflower
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I will slot you now. :) I've got an idea for the setting description already and I can come up with a generic name for the minion that you are more than welcome to change.

I will be more than happy to proofread an existing story. I'll give you a slot but note that it is a piece for proofreading. You can go ahead and just link me to the pet, you don't have to fill out the form.

I don't have a standard price for proofreading but my sketches (which are the most basic story I offer) are 600k. Does this sound reasonable to you?

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Jan 2, 2015 11 years ago
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Oh awesome, thank you so much^^ I have a few stories which are in need of some correction but I think I'll start with Cletus because he is the most finsihed pet of mine and I plan on entering the PS with him (maybe) xD

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Jan 2, 2015 11 years ago
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Awesome, thank you! I'm excited :)

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Jan 3, 2015 11 years ago
Acone
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English isn’t my native language so I would be more than happy if you could write a story for me. I have some nice? ideas but I don’t have the skill or vocabulary to put it in a story. I can see that those slots are filled but I hope it’s okay if I leave this here… You can slot me when there is free space and you don’t have to hurry with this. ^^

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Pet Name: Reyuura (http://subeta.net/pets/Reyuura)

I would like to connect the story to those 2 artworks and the poem that you can find from my pet’s profile.

Setting: “She kept a log of every dream she had, every night. She never knew that one of them may come true...” Reyuura is a dream catcher and is now flying in dark, gloomy and misty place (known as nightmare world) looking for nightmares to visit and then he writes them in his journal (he carries Dream Journal and charcoal sticks with him (treasure)). She needs nightmares or she will die, that's the only thing he does. She doesn’t remember anything from his past, not his family or who she is. She is deep in thoughts again and finds a page from the journal that he has never seen before. The handwriting doesn’t look like her own. And so she starts reading it… (and then comes memory about how she became what she is now)

Personality: Revengeful, furious, lonely, intelligent.

Optional:

PoV: Third person, but the memory part in first person. The memory part could also be written in third person because the handwriting isn’t hers so someone else could have written that. You can decide which one fits better. :)

Physical traits: She is slim and moves really fast and quietly (see the picture of my pet).

Likes/Dislikes: Visits dreams and writes them in her journal. She is often deep in thoughts thinking about everything.

Other characters to include: Reyuura as human when she was a 17-year-old girl (see artwork) and her father who then disappears. Reyuura was raised by her father and he is the only family she has left.

Preferred Length: Standard but if you have to make it longer, you can change the length.

Anything else?: The memory/ dream journal entry that Reyuura wrote (or someone) as a human in short:

  • this dream is clearer than ever, it feels real
  • Reyuura and her father are in library and they are “dream catchers” looking for some important book (my pet’s minion Glaurung)
  • library would be mysterious, not much light, candles, shadows… it’s quite late
  • then some men with dark hooded cloaks appear and Reyuura hides behind the bookshelves
  • Reyuura hears that they are looking for her father because he is a dream catcher and they want to capture all of them (or something like that) and then they take him away
  • Reyuura stays silent until they are gone because she knows she can’t do anything, tears start falling, she feels anger inside her
  • she finds the book somewhere (from that room/somewhere from the library) and some ink creature appears from the book (see my pet's minion) and drags her into a world of undending horror
  • entry ends here and Reyuura remembers everything, her father, how she woke up as a dragon from this place and how she must collect other’s nightmares into her journal

(I know that Reyuura as a human is girl but my pet is a male… I’m going to change the gender some day to female.)

Also, if you have any better ideas/changes to make the story more complete/better, feel free to tell me about them. :)

Jan 3, 2015 11 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Cygne. I tried to tie in the existing story while giving Cygne a unique story of her own, but if you want any scenes for the flashbacks to be different or if you want additional scenes just let me know.

As soon as I have an open slot, it is yours. :)

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Jan 3, 2015 11 years ago
Acone
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Great, thank you! :) I can't wait for it because you seem to be a really talented writer.

Jan 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

Oh the draft looks great :'3 However I have a few small changes in my mind and I shall snail it to you in a bit (hopefully my computer adapter will arrive so I can type them out from there)

Also may I get on your wait list again? ^^ I would be interested in commission another story for Kath from you, since the lady who is supposed to write for her hasn't responded to me for a bit. But I will ask her to see if she wants to drop it first!

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Jan 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

Here is the updated draft. I tried to include all of your suggestions but just let me know if I missed anything. :) It is always a little trickier working from an existing story but hopefully these changes to the flashbacks are closer to the character ideas you have for the Queen and Princess.

I've been getting a few requests for a wait list so when this story is done I'll go ahead and add you to it if you haven't heard from the other writer.

Here is the first draft for Katos. Let me know if there is anything you would like me to change.

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Jan 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Its perfect! :) Nothing I can think of to change.

If you have a slot open, may I claim it?

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Pet Name: Nykyrian

Setting: night time, in a busy city.

Personality: He likes seclusion, and he doesn't like getting close to people. He's an assassin, so he's fast and soundless. He blends in with the shadows to stalk whoever he is after.

Physical traits: Nykyrian, nightmare darkonite

Likes/Dislikes: He likes weapons, spends time collecting and maintaining them. He also enjoys all kinds of music and movies. He dislikes having to socialize, he enjoys his job as an assassin because it means not having to socialize too much.

Preferred Length: Standard story

Jan 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

That will be 1.5 mil Lot .

I'll be glad to give you another slot but I'll have to move you down the list. I try to complete my requests in order so nobody has to wait more than a week on a request if I can help it. :)

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Jan 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Oh, that's fine :) I don't mind waiting.

Jan 5, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

Aw yeah, it is definitely trickier D: I still see a few that needs to be changed, mostly names and all. But I can do that myself, if you don't mind. I don't want to give you too much trouble :P How much do I owe you?

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

I'm still working out how I price my complex stories since this was the first commissioned one I've done. :D The base slot is 5 mil but since the original story was over 4k words and the changes included, would 7 mil sound reasonable? I put up Lot for you.

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

Ah that sounds great! Can I pay you in CSC? :0

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Pet Name: Ereden

Setting: Middle Earth, Ereden and Aragorn (both rangers) are tracking down an orc pack that is on its way to the shire to find frodo and the one ring. they find the pack and kill them all, just before aragorn is called away to meet frodo at the prancing pony. they part their ways and ereden goes on to rule gondor until king theoden, taken over by evil, kicks him out and takes the throne.

Personality: Aggressive. independent. loyal. no sense of humor.

PoV: You can choose this yourself.

Physical traits: eradan is a man, a ranger, but wears elvish armor. he has hard and aggressive facial features, brown hair that goes down to his shoulders, brown eyes that are almond shaped, and facial hair like the kind in the bottom middle of this image

Likes: swordsmanship and archery, tracking and being outdoors

Other characters to include: Maranwë, his minion, a horse he would be riding to get from place to place

Preferred Length: No preference, just write until it's finished. :)

Anything else?: This is a story based in the lord of the rings world, if you haven't figured that out yet. :P

Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

And I'd also like to get another slot when you are free again :3

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

I love LOTR so this should be fun to write. :) I will slot you now.

CSC is fine. Does 150 sound good? I will also put you on the wait list since I am full at the moment. :)

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

Ahh that's perfect :3 And great thank you! <3

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Skula

I was feeling ambitious over the weekend so here is a nice batch of drafts. :)

Here is the first draft for Aridine. I opened with some description of Butterfly House and moved into her position as Guardian. I will be more than happy to change the name(s) I gave her minion if you like and to make any additions or changes you want. :)

Here is the first draft for Reyuura. I tried to include everything you wanted but if I missed any details please let me know. I did do a combination of 3rd PoV when she is in the present and 1st PoV for the journal entry because I felt that would work best.

Here is the first draft for Nykyrian. I wrote him up as a more subtle assassin rather than a flashy sort who wants everyone to know this was his work. I thought that would be best with his hatred of interacting with others since he wants seclusion, not fame.

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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I would love to commission you for a story! may I be on the waiting list if possible? >w<

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