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Feb 4, 2015 11 years ago
Faeflower
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Amsonia

I sent you a message with a few things. It is absolutely lovely! I <3 it!

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Feb 4, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

a price for each one would be perfectly fine! :)


Feb 5, 2015 11 years ago
Pureflower
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An updated draft for Amsonia. I added a bit of dialogue with one of her gnome friends and also had her interact with Saya a little more as they were journeying. If everything looks good that will be 3 mil on Lot .

Here is the first draft for Valdis. As soon as I read her form I just knew where I wanted to take this story. I have ideas for the other two as well but this one I just had to start in on. Let me know any changes you would like.

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Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
Faeflower
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Amsonia

I actually do have a couple things. XD I am mailing you. But I love everything you have added. I am so sorry I am a pain in the booty!!

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Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

nThis is amazing! I love each story you includes! I hope her not talking was not typo much of a challenge :o


Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
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An updated draft for Amsonia.I like my stories to be just right. :) I think I got all the requested changes but just let me know if there's anything else.

I actually liked working with a character that couldn't speak. I had to find ways to give her personality without relying on dialogue. I like a challenge xD. If everything in the story looks good, that will be 2.5 mil on Lot .

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Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

payment sent n_n


Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
Faeflower
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Amsonia

Oh no it is great. Your stories are so wonderful! Do I owe you more than the 3mil? for the changes.

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Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Yes, 3 mil. I don't charge extra for minor edits. :)

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Feb 6, 2015 11 years ago
Faeflower
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Amsonia

Ok. I will go offer. Thank you so much! :D

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Feb 8, 2015 11 years ago
Pureflower
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Here is the first draft for Juli-us. I didn't know if you preferred his name hyphenated in the story or without the hyphen but that is easy enough to change back. I've never done a gender identity story before but I tried to really capture his personality and struggle to fit in yet be himself.

Here is the first draft for Dimitri. I'm a huge Dracula fan which was where I got the inspiration for the forest name and dark setting. :D

Here is the first half of Gamzatti's Story. Here is the second half of Gamzatti's Story. For some bizarre reason when I try to post the full story to one pet, I keep getting errors so I decided to do it this way. :) Let me know any changes you would like.

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Feb 8, 2015 11 years ago
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Do you do proofreading? I have quite a few of my pet's stories almost done but I always love a 2nd set of eyes to go through them.


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Feb 8, 2015 11 years ago
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I'm willing to do proofreading and have taken a few such requests in the past. I usually charge about 300k per section for stories with multiple parts or just 300k for the piece if the story isn't very long. I also don't mind doing 2-3 pieces per slot as long as they are under 2k words each.

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Feb 9, 2015 11 years ago
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Riya

Ahhh that is wonderful ^-^ A few changes:

Can you make Solor a Warrior instead? And Nikiya just as Nikiya, no lady title for her :P

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Feb 9, 2015 11 years ago
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Here are the updates: One and Two.

If that looks good I have Lot for you. The story was a complex but under 3,500 words so you have the option of 5 mil or 100 csc. If you want to just add the 200k for the edits, that will work well. :)

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Feb 9, 2015 11 years ago
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Offered, thank you so much! It's perfect c: I may be just back for Myrtha and Gingery's stories as well xD

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Feb 9, 2015 11 years ago
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Mallius

I love Dimitri's story! :D With Julius's (the way you spelled it is perfectly fine btw) story, I get a little confused with Jana and Jesa's part, quite possibly because of their names :x


Feb 9, 2015 11 years ago
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An updated draft for Julius. I changed Jesa to Jessica and tried to clear up some of the dialogue between the three to be less confusing. I actually gave all the does names that started with J because it shows that Julius is different from the bucks but proud to be different by essentially having a "doe" name. I can certainly alter the names if you prefer.

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Mar 2, 2015 11 years ago
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Hi, I would like a rather long story and I'd offer a pet profile in exchange c: You can check my profile and the pets I linked there or these links for examples x x x. The pet in question would be this. I'd like the two sections I've written to be rewritten and the other sections to be fleshed out. The length of each section would be up to you.

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Mar 2, 2015 11 years ago
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I would love to do an exchange :). I've given her existing story a look-over. So just to make sure I know what you're looking for, you want a complete write-up for the five sections based on the ideas written/noted in each. I'll go ahead and slot you as well.

I can also send you ideas for the pets I'm currently seeking profiles for once we have the story details ironed out. I have three pets I'm actively working on that need profiles and I'm happy to let you decide which interests you the most based on my rough ideas.

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