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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Absolutely. :) I will add you now. You can post the form now if you want which will ensure you get the next slot as soon as one opens.

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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I really love the story. You included every detail I wanted and added some new details like Blackstone Guild. Things make more sense now. :D The story feels "just right" and I don't feel like anything has to be changed.

Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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I'm glad I got the details just right. :) This was a long story so that will be 3 mil on Lot .

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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Its great ^^ The only thing I would change is his name in the story from "Ny" to "Nyk"

Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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That's easy enough to fix. :D His nickname in the final copy I send you will be Nyk. That will be 1.5 mil on Lot .

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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It's so cute! Could you set up a trade and let me know how much I owe you? :)

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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It is a long story so that will be 3 mil on Lot .

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Jan 6, 2015 11 years ago
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fantastic. thank you so much. i can't wait! :)

Jan 7, 2015 11 years ago
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If you don't mind, may I claim another slot? ^^

Form 1 Pet Name: Tavali

Setting: Somewhere in space, or on a space station/foreign planet?

Personality: He's a space pirate. He likes to explore and discover new things, have new experiences. He's good at thinking quickly, especially to talk his way out of trouble. He also does bad things like stealing/taking over ships and stealing cargo and stuff, mostly from governments and merchants. He's considered a criminal and wanted on some planets. He's a really happy person, loves what he does and doesn't think he'll ever get caught.

Likes/Dislikes: He really hates staying in one place for longer than a week or two. He also likes to collect old maps and old books.

Preferred Length: Standard story or long story, whichever you prefer :)

Form 2 Pet Name: Savitar

Setting: a warm beach on an island

Personality: He's lazy, loves to just hang out on the beach, sleeping in the sun and surfing. He doesn't take life too seriously, he's a very laid back person who doesn't worry a lot.

Physical traits: He has blue and beige fur, and lilac coloured eyes.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes - sunsets, sand, large waves, light rain. Dislikes - days when the water is calm without waves, people disturbing his peace. Hates having to wash all the sand out of his fur at the end of the day, but he really likes being clean.

Preferred Length: Standard

Jan 8, 2015 11 years ago
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ok sounds good! ^_^

Pet Name: My OCs, Kei and Rei (would you be ok with writing stories for my OCs even though theyre not pets?) >A<; theyre both Ne-Co species, more info about them here, Kei and Rei are peaceful Ne-Cos and they have no interest in hurting humans or drinking their blood

Setting: in Kei's room, curtains closed, usually dark room since Kei usually likes to stay at home and work on the computer, his room is really simple and clean with just a bed, desk, laptop, very minimal

Personality: Kei Rei, I have their personality on their pages and more art/refs under images

PoV: third person

Physical traits: see links above ^_^

Likes/Dislikes: Kei doesnt like to go out much unless he has to, he enjoys working on the computer (coding, programming, etc.), Rei is more outgoing and he's a good friend of Kei and brings snacks over for them to snack on and usually sits on his bed reading romance mangas (he has a soft spot for them) LOL sometimes Rei would try to start conversations with Kei and try to see what hes doing on his computer, Kei hates being distracted while working but eventually he gets used to Rei's company

Other characters to include: Rei has a "pet" called a nen, if youd like you can include it as well, but its not necessary

Preferred Length: any length is fine with me, Im just hoping it wont be too short XD but maybe like a typical day story for them?

Anything else?: I think I covered everything, hopefully its not too confusing ;A; if you have any questions let me know!

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Jan 8, 2015 11 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Ereden. I tried to include every detail of his character but if anything is missing please let me know. :)

Sounds like an interesting project. I have you slotted and I will try to have a draft for you within the next week.

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Jan 8, 2015 11 years ago
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ok, sounds good!! ^_^ thanksss C:

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Jan 8, 2015 11 years ago
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Oh my god, I absolutely love it. I was right in choosing you. Not a lot of people know the details of LOTR well enough to write a story like that inspired by it. I love it.

Jan 8, 2015 11 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Savitar. I live in the Midwest so I had to brush up on surfing terms for this one. :D Let me know if you'd like anything changed. Also, I have many ideas for Tavali and I should have a draft for him by midweek.

Here is the first draft for Kei/Rei. I tried to include all the details you gave me and some of the lore/backstory about ne-cos. Let me know if I missed anything or if there is anything you'd like me to add.

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Jan 11, 2015 11 years ago
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Its lovely! ^_^

Jan 11, 2015 11 years ago
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My friend showed me the story you wrote for her and wow it was really cute. I would love to order 2 please (it says you accept 2 requests per slot correct? :3) I just had a quick question: I would like the story to involve 2 of my pets but I want the general plot of the story to be the same for both, the only thing I want different is the perspective. So basically the two stories would be tied together since the same events would be happening just that they would be told from 2 different point of views. Would that be ok?

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Jan 11, 2015 11 years ago
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That will be 1.5 mil on Lot . :)

Yes, 2 stories per slot. I can absolutely write one story in two perspectives (same events but through the eyes of two unique characters). I'll put you on the waiting list and you'll have a slot as soon as I get the forms.

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Jan 11, 2015 11 years ago
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oh man Im loving the story!! A I was actually thinking that one of them would be living alone (in this case, I think it would be interesting if Rei lived alone, but maybe like Kei's neighbor, which is why he comes over so often since its lonely at home) maybe if he was abandoned by his parents or they passed away, if you could fix that, I think that would be great ^_^

Also if you can add a few things for Rei, Rei is the popular type and he gets along with people well, but he chooses to stay with Kei instead, even though ne-co's seemed scary, Rei is usually nice, so maybe the students think hes different and more approachable, hes the cool type for girls c: as for Kei, hes the opposite and doesnt really like to talk to people, so he likes the distance anyway xD

Another small thing for Rei, maybe instead of naruto, it could be a romance manga like vampire knight? Im not sure if you heard of it, but its a popular romance manga and its also about vampires, I think that would be funny since theyre almost treated like vampires xD I just thought it would be funny if Rei had a soft spot for romance, i think he would be the type of guy who treats all girls the same though, since he hasnt found "the one" yet

I apologize if its all confusing, and sorry I didnt mention about their parents either >A<; I was actually thinking of having them both living alone, but you wrote the part about the parents so well, and I thought that maybe Rei envies Kei a little because his parents are so accepting of him ;v;

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Jan 12, 2015 11 years ago
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An updated draft for Kei/Rei. I think I got all the changes. My manga knowledge is pretty limited but I did make the change to Vampire Knight and hopefully the description makes sense since I was getting it from a summary. :D I made Rei's parents into a landlord and tried to work in how he is somewhat jealous that Kei has his parents, but not in a mean way. I was actually going to do a scene in the first draft where Rei interacted with some girls but I didn't know for sure if it would fit his character. Let me know what you think.

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Jan 12, 2015 11 years ago
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Ok awesome! :) These guys are just my OCs, they aren't based off any pet species. I just have pets named after them so I could put their story somewhere ^__^

Character 1 Pet Name: Koan

Setting: A large, fancy outdoor shopping center or a large indoor mall with expensive stores/brand name stores. In either case, I would like a very high end shopping center type feel.

Personality: Koan is basically a lazy, rich kid with too much time on his hands. He doesn't work because of his family's money and has no desire to separate himself from their financial support. He's kind of a pushover because he's too lazy to argue and because of his laid back attitude he gets bullied sometimes by people that are jealous his social status. He can also be dense when it comes to common sense things since he has servants taking care of everything for him. For example, he doesn't know how to cook an egg or how to do a lot of common chore-type things. He does, however, know how to use his credit card really well. He also makes a point to never wear the same clothes twice (hence the shopping setting, he shops a lot).

PoV: 3rd person

Physical traits: Here is a portrait of him - Here. He has long blonde hair that he typically has tied back in a pony tail with long bangs that cover his right eye. His eyes are a green that make the girls swoon. He's also pale since he spends most of his time indoors. Clothing wise, he wears high end fashionable clothing with the color schemes of various shades of red, black, gray, and white.

Likes/Dislikes: Koan always has to have the latest and greatest tech gadgets. He likes having lots of cool headphones and even got one specially made with his initial engraved into it (as seen in his portrait). He also likes to read comics, mostly by Marvel, and has quite the collection of not only comics but also figures as well. He enjoys taking naps in random places and has some secret areas he uses when he doesn't want to be disturbed (Kyeran however knows all his places). His dislikes include, physical labor of any kind, wearing formal clothing such as suits, violence, and the other rich kids that are in the same social status as him (they are all snobby, brats that use their influence for everything. Koan just uses his parent's money xD)

Other characters to include: Kyeran

Preferred Length: Long story

Anything else?: The world in which I have set them in is a place inhabited by both humans and demons. Koan is a human while Kyeran is a demon. Demons are not usually found among humans much, they are usually found in the underground/black market area of the world. Koan's parents at first were against the idea of having Kyeran live with Koan because they were concerned about the family image but then they had the idea of using him as a status symbol. So basically "We have a demon that we were able to tame and you don't have one" type thing (even though that's a lie since Kyeran isn't "tamed"). As long Koan and Kyeran don't tarnish the family name, Koan's parents couldn't care less what he did with his time.

Character 2 Pet Name: Kyeran

Setting: Same setting as stated above

Personality: Kyeran is mischievous, a trouble maker and all around meanie. He likes to annoy people (especially Koan by poking him in the head a lot) and has no problems aggravating the problems of others. He isn't "evil" per se, he just likes to pull pranks on people and laugh at them. He's selfish and tends to steal Koan's wallet a lot to buy unnecessary things. His language is a bit rough and he tends to call people "Idiots" or "Stupid" or "Dumbass" a lot. Despite all that, he does have one redeeming quality. He is overprotective of Koan. He will never admit it but Koan was his first friend as a child and one of the first humans to not be fearful of him and totally ignore him, because of this Kyeran protects him fiercely although he says it's because Koan is his source of food and money (which he is but that's just a plus). Kyeran's presence also tends to deter potential bullies as mentioned above.

PoV: 3rd person

Physical traits: His portrait - Here Kyeran has the gray skin color that marks him as a demon but if that wasn't obvious enough he also has two sets of horns coming from the side of his head and pointed ears. His hair is black with turquoise streaks that goes a bit past his shoulders. He has various facial piercings, the most notable being his lip ring and also an inverted cross earring hanging from his left ear. His eyes are a bright turquoise that almost seem to glow. He also has a pair of small fangs that are visible when he smiles his mischievous grin. Clothing wise, he wears punk/j-rock fashion with a black and turquoise color scheme.

Likes/Dislikes: As mentioned earlier he likes to pull pranks on people, he especially likes to trip random passersby. He has to do all his trouble making on the super down low however because he's supposed to be a "tame" demon. So he usually does pranks that are made to look like an accident or are set up so the blame is directed elsewhere. He's gotten quite good at being able to do this without anyone suspecting him. One of his strongest dislikes are children. He can't stand the sight of them, the sound of them or anything related to them. Because of this he greatly enjoys making them cry. He will take their candy and leave them there standing crying. He will pop their balloons and stomp all over their sandcastles when they aren't looking and walk away satisfied.

Other characters to include: Koan

Preferred Length: Long Story

Anything else?: N/A unless you have any other questions~

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