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Pet Name: Mockinjay
Setting: The Hunger Games universe, obviously. The story told from the Mockingjays point of view. I do love the song that I have used on her profile. Its beautiful to me.
Personality: Serene, curius and free spirited.
PoV: I would love 1st person
Physical traits: Golden feathers, long tail feathers.
Preferred Length: Standard
If you need more info or have any question, dont hesitate to comment or ping me. ^^ I tend to be online a lot. ^^
The first draft for Nezumi. I decided to focus on Nezumi's rescue of Shion and also a flashback to when they first met. Please let me know any changes you would like. I also updated Val's story to make it clear it is taking place on Valentine's Day. :)
The first draft for Ziggy. I had a lot of fun writing this one so I hope you enjoy what I came up with. :D
As for the three pets you asked me about, I think Rainthia, Cinetico and Symbela are great the way they are. Some pets, especially those with large TCs, can work very well with a summary story like what you have. Whether you want to connect them to the clan is totally up to you. When I'm doing a series of connected characters, I like to have a few "outsiders" because they give me a focus when I want to write but feel like working on something different. This is very much a personal preference, though.
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You did that and others in a weekend! Totally impressed!
Love how you've incorporated the other kids, really like it thank you so much!
The only thing I would get you to change is at the start where you have Loco sharpening his claws on the carpet change it to the couch or a chair as the house is fully tiled and this will give inspiration to other stories as they wipe out a fair bit on them when playing tag lol.
Thank you so much for writing these! In looking over Nezumi's story I'm realizing what a complex task I assigned you D: No.6 has such an intricate plot that despite fantastic writing skills (and dedication to make it through writing in someone else's fandom!) I think I'll need to find a No. 6 fangirl. Thank you so so so much for attempting this and please accept my sincere apologies that I'm being so picky about it. u/////u Would you set up a trade so I can pay you for both stories?
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When I get into writing mode, I can get a lot of writing done. :D I changed Loco's clawing to a corner chair. If everything else looks good, I have Lot and this was a long story at 3 mil.
I'm sorry the story wasn't what you were looking for. It's always a risk with fan pet stories when the writer doesn't know the original firsthand. Please let me know if you would still like the copy. (I won't be insulted if not, but since you are paying for both, I feel I should ask.) I have Lot for you and these were two longs for a total of 6 mil. (I am also fine with 100 csc and 1 mil if you would prefer a split payment.)
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Thank you so much for your hard work ^-^ Best of luck on your continued writing ❤️
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Pet Name: Loco
Setting: Obviously similar to how you wrote about Zig ;)
Personality: A little pigheaded sometimes and can be pushy, can play too rough with the others (I don't think he knows just how strong he is), is really agile, can be really affectionate if he thinks the other kids aren't watching.
PoV: Which ever you feel is best
Physical traits: Loco actually looks like a Luchadore Wrestler in the sense that there is a break in his colouring so that it looks like he is wearing a mask (then he's all white up to his back) where it could be imagined as a cape. He is extremly strong (which is a bit scary when cutting claws and he did when he was young bite through the webbing between my thumb and finger!) with a lean body, he is also the largest of all the cats. Added some pics: [URL=http://s288.photobucket.com/user/SongSparra/media/Picture%20028_zpsg5nxulet.jpg.html][IMG]http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll182/SongSparra/Picture%20028_zpsg5nxulet.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Loco when a kitten with that ferret toy, [URL=http://s288.photobucket.com/user/SongSparra/media/DCP_0731_zpseymuuq5w.jpg.html][IMG]http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll182/SongSparra/DCP_0731_zpseymuuq5w.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Christmas, Loco at the back near the TV Cabinet to give you an idea on his mask/cape like coat lol, [URL=http://s288.photobucket.com/user/SongSparra/media/DCP_0843_zpsitxggqcv.jpg.html][IMG]http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll182/SongSparra/DCP_0843_zpsitxggqcv.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Loco bottom left, this was more for you to have a chuckle lol.
Likes/Dislikes: He loves the end of his nose scratched and will often climb up to my shoulder while I'm at the computer to nuzzle into my hair, he is also a bed hog and sleeps close to my chest in winter. He loves his toys, (stuffed mice, a ferret type thing (included a photo) and 4 fluffly balls off some old ugg boots which most mornings I find staggered up the hallway brought in from the back (cat's room, yes they have their own room with toys etc) and have occassionly woken freaked out to find them IN the bed, I think it's because he's bored I'm asleep! He also plays catch with himself picking up the small toy mice or felt balls, throwing them into the air and catching them in his paws, many an acrobatic back flip and manoveres are performed while he does this (it's awesome to watch!)
Other characters to include: As his name suggests, he is mad at times lol. He will just suddenly take off from the back of the house (kitchen is in the centre and then it's like a doughnut with all the other rooms in the outer ring so the kids can run in circles chasing each other) when he's having a funny 5 minutes and circle the house (often leading to pile ups into furniture when hitting the lounge room due to speed, cornering, and furry paws plus tiles... you get the picture) often leaping onto the TV cupboard and doing what looks like a back flip onto the door arch!
Preferred Length: Again I don't mind. I think it will end up being what you can do with the little I've given you to be honest.
The first draft for Mockinjay. I decided to focus on a District that didn't get much attention in the novels/movies in order to give her a unique story. Please let me know any changes you would like.
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Pet Name: Kahrmuh
Setting: Universal. Galactic. Atebus (between Coda Caves and Galaxan Wastes).
Personality: Elusive yet constantly present. Bearer of the 12 Immutable Universal Laws. Sometimes conflicted.
PoV: Completely up to you. I have no preference.
Likes/Dislikes: Loves the wide variety of fruit from the Ikumoradeekanox tree. Spends a lot of her free time feeding the trapped minions in the Galaxan Wastes and sometimes she donates food to Charity. Most of her days are spent training to defend the darker forces in the universe.
Other characters to include: Kismet the Constellation (minion)
That looks fantastic! :D Thank you! If I were to request anything, it would be the story being more from the mockinbirds (the bird-not Katniss) perspective. If that would work, and is not a terrible idea? lol
An updated draft for Mockinjay. Sorry for the confusion. :D I think a story from a mockingjay's point of view is a great idea and I switched the setting to the first arena. I hope you enjoy what I came up with. Please let me know any other changes you would like.
First draft for Loco. I decided to emphasize certain parts in bold for this one since Loco seems like the type who would speak in bold, if that makes sense. xD Please let me know any changes you would like.
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That is beautiful, I love it! Thank you so much. ^_^' Exactly the kind of story I had in mind, sorry for the confusion as well. Somehow I didnt think to specify the character. I didnt think of it also referring to Katniss in the later books. ;)
I was a little thrown off by her physical description including golden feathers. xD I have Lot for you and this was a standard story at 1.5 mil.
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I cant blame you. xD I shall go bid asap! Thanks again. ^_^
First draft for Kahrmuh. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
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WOW! I love it. Like totally love the story for Kahrmuh. There is no way I could have drafted or even dreamed up this storyline. This is perfect. :D
That is totally FANTASTIC! I had a good chuckle with some of it and as I got to the part of Loco standing up on my shoulder the real Loco did just that LOL! Love it, Love it, Love it!!!!
I'm glad you like it. :) I have Lot for you and this was a standard story at 1.5 mil.
Maybe he wanted to read along to make sure I got his character right. xD I have Lot for you and this one was a standard at 1.5 mil.
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okay I will swing by and pay in a bit. Didn't want you to think I forgot as I was away all weekend.
I see you still have some slots open, can I nab one?
Pet Name: Imaginary (clicky linky)
PoV: I don't care, whatever moves you.
Setting: Abandoned imaginary friend. Think "Jessie" from Toy Story II. I don't have an actual story fleshed out, I've kind of hit a creative wall with this character.
Personality: Loving, lonely, sad.
Physical traits: Small pink plushie, a little care-worn but obviously well loved, once upon a time.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes: cuddles, other toys/friends, and playing. Dislikes: being left alone.
Other characters to include: None.
Anything else?: That's pretty much it.
If you need anything else from me, please let me know. I don't want to limit you by saying "I want this kind of story" just let me know what you come up with and I'll pay whatever.