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big, huge spiders always remind me of dark forces. But they make me weak and run away in real life too. :P Umm..I'm not 100% sure really. Maybe supernatural feel, kind of like the dementors on harry potter? Or other things of those nature.
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I hope you're not getting tired of me yet xD I would like 2 standard stories if that is okay ^^
Long story 1
Pet Name: Kansen
PoV: Kansen's POV
Setting: 5 years after the "event" that happened to Lili. She's better at controling her powers, and is now trying to find her mother (She did ru off with some creepy dude c:)
Personality: Still the same as before, just a bit more mature.
Physical traits: Her hair is longer, some of her scars have faded, but other than that she is still the same
Likes/Dislikes: ~
Other characters to include: Wes, her mother (?), Gail
Anything else?: Nope, just a tiny sequel I guess C:
Long story 2
Pet Name: Emilia
PoV: Corvo's POV
Setting: Just a short while after their escape from the asylum. they fleed to somewhere safe (uknown loaction). Jess and Alliser wonder about her well being. Staying safe and hidden with her protector.
Personality: Still the same as before
Physical traits: She has cleaner clothes now ^^'
Likes/Dislikes: ~
Other characters to include: Jessa, Alliser, Corvo
Anything else?: Nope, just a tiny sequel because I fell in love with this story and must know what happened next :>
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The first draft for Didymus. I needed a reason for the shadow creatures to come into existence but if you would prefer the tree spirits to have more involvement, I can certainly edit. Please let me know any changes you would like.
The first drafts for Kansen and Emilia Additions. Working from existing characters is like catching up with old friends. xD Since I know the baseline of the story, I can use it to build a future for the character. I hope you like what I came up with for both of them.
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Ahh yes catching up with new friends <3
Both are amazing! C: I love them!
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I have Lot for you and these were two standards for a total of 3 mil. :)
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I would love to commission you for another story, if you're up to it!
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Pet Name: Adelyn Mae
Setting: A cozy little cottage in the woods.
Personality: She is a very sweet and charistmatic 2 year old. She is curious about the world around her and is always learning new things. She is very close with her family, particularly her mom.
Likes/Dislikes: She is obsessed with bunnies. She is a nature lover and enjoys exploring the woods.
Other characters to include: Mom and her little brother Ethan.
Preferred Length: Standard to Long story. :)
Anything else?: Her obsession with bunnies started when she was 3 months old. She was given a stuffed bunny from her Mom for Christmas and instantly fell in love with it. She takes her beloved bunny with her everywhere. It's her "comfort item". If you could include a part in the story about her losing her bunny but later finding it, that would be great!
The first draft for Adelyn Mae. Prepare for a cuteness overload. :D I kept her speaking parts pretty minimal since speech is limited at that age. Please let me know any changes you would like, including name changes.
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Ohmygosh! I absolutely love it!! I giggled a lot while reading it. You really captured everything so perfectly. dies from the cuteness It's perfect, I wouldn't change anything.
I just filled out my form and then hit the back button D: Form gone. Please put me on the wait list whilst I fill out the form again? ;-;
[EDIT] please consider attempting either of these (or both of these) ❤️
St. Valentines
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Pet Name: St. Valentines
Setting: Riverside (works at volunteer co-op)
Personality: Endlessly sweet but a little (lot dim) A clumsy puppy at heart.
Optional:
PoV: 3rd
Physical traits: Sweetheart coloring …. I’m thinking human with a heart-ish shaped birthmark over one eye.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes= Sweet things, making people happy. Dislikes= Seeing people sad, making people sad, confrontation/violence, confusing details.
Other characters to include: Luffles the isn’t exactly a character but rather a stuffed animal they carry around.
Preferred Length: Long story (but I can pay for complex if that’s the way the story flows)
Anything else?: Nicknamed Val, this pet is genderless, so I’d prefer no gender pronouns. ^-^ I'd also like to see their derpiness in a cute way?
Nezumi (fan pet to consider)
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Pet Name: [ur=http://subeta.net/pets/Nezumi]Nezumi[/url]
Setting: Outside the corrupt-at-the-core-utopia of the city No.6. It’s a ramshackle construction of people struggling to survive. Dystopia I suppose you could say. Lawless, no formal chain of command.
Personality: Hard to pin down. Distant, and arrogant to most people. Tough. Bitter towards No.6. Softer towards Shion, and shows it though actually communicating (talking, arguing, scolding etc. ) and smiling.
Optional:
PoV: 3rd
Physical traits: Headshot part of background image for his profile. Full body: HERE
Likes/Dislikes: Loves Shion (other main character). Hates No.6. Likes: Singing, acting, drama, classical literature. Dislikes: Anythig hurting Shion, being seen as weak, losing things precious to him
Other characters to include:
Personality: Kind. For a brilliant kid pretty clueless about dealing with life. Physical Traits: Headshot: HERE Full Body: HERE
Likes/Dislikes: Loves Nezumi. Loves his mother. Hates the thought of losing Nezumi. Likes: People, animals, cardigans, children, storms, science Dislikes: The corruption in No. 6, thinking of the potential destruction of No. 6
Preferred Length: Long story (but can pay for a complex one if that’s how it flows… and accept a standard one if that’s doable?)
Anything else?: Basic History:Shion was in the genius science kid class at a young age. Harbored and patched up Nezumi (at age 12) when Nezumi escaped prison. Nezumi saves Shion in teenage years when Shion questions the city’s corruption out loud (not in public) and is labeled a traitor for it. Nezumi and Shion live together outside the walls of the city after escaping No.6. Nezumi wants the destruction of No. 6 for the elimination of his people and his own imprisonment. Shion doesn’t want people to die/suffer and still cares about No. 6 in his heart (partly because his mother is still there)
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I used to babysit a little girl who was around a year and a half and I thought of her so many times when writing this. :D I have Lot and this was a long story at 3 mil.
I should be able to work with both characters. With Val, do you want their story at all focused around Valentine's Day? I could easily work this in to their volunteering lifestyle.
As for Nezumi, I do not know No. 6 but I have read many dystopian novels and this sounds like a story line I can easily pick up on. Based on the detail you've given me, I would say most likely these will both be long stories.
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Thank you thank you thank you ❤️!!! I had been trying to write these stories for ages and been completely uninspired D: I think that centering Val's story around Valentines Day would be lovely ^-^ As for Nezumi, if there are ever any questions, even on odd little things please do ask me :D
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Pet Name: Ziggy-Mon
Setting: I'm at a loss as most of my pets are built (image wise and the disastrous so called story I tried to create) around my real cats which are all desexed indoor babies. Not sure how to link Ziggy's page so you could see what I've tried to write and maybe build a story from that. I know I haven't given you much to go on I do apologise but this is why I need a writer. I think if you can incorporate some of the real Zig and then let your instincts go from there this may well work, I do have all the pets linked to each other in one way or another.
Personality: Zig is sleek and handsome, he loves his ears rubbed really hard and is the oldest now of the cats I have (6 in all). He's extremely smart (too smart!) and can open cupboard and sliding doors so everything has to be locked, tied or bolted down! He is the man of the house hence how his name went from just Ziggy (David Bowie reference) to Ziggy-Mon. He loves people coming over so he can get his ears rubbed and dribble on them lol. Ummm?!
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PoV: Which ever you feel is best
Physical traits: [IMG]http://i59.tinypic.com/2agq980.jpg[/IMG] They say a picture speaks a thousand words... so
Likes/Dislikes: Zig loves sitting high up on top of door arch where god knows how he will chase his tail and not fall off! First to the kitchen when I'm cutting up any sort of raw meat, red meat cooked or raw is his favourite treat. Loves rattling the wardrobe doors early in the morning to wake me up and taught my youngest cat Sam to do the same things (grr)
Other characters to include: You can if you want include Ash, Jazz, Loco, Missy, Sam, Lexi, and Lucy as they are the real life babies (the last 2 sadly have passed away now). Otherwise I don't mind
Preferred Length: Again I don't mind. I think it will end up being what you can do with the little I've given you to be honest.
Anything else?: I want to eventually get profile pages done for the kids so that they are tab like, 1st would be the overlay/pet and minion with story, 2nd pet treasure, 3rd the real life pic of the chosen pet, 4th the thank you page with credits to all that helped create my pets. I don't know if that helps any, I really am at a loss, must be having a senior moment!
The first draft for Val. I tried very hard to keep all pronouns related to Val neutral but please let me know if I missed any. I also wasn't sure how talkative Val would be. I didn't give them a lot of dialogue at this point though I can certainly add more. Please let me know any changes you would like.
I should have time over the weekend to start on Nezumi's story. I hope to have a draft for you by Sunday night.
I can work with a lot of details or a few and I find cats have great personality for stories. :D Two small question. How would you like Ziggy-Mon to address you in the story? Also, of your kitties, are there any in particular he gets along well with or has a friendly rivalry with. (I imagine none of them actually dislike each other but every family has its little disputes.)
I will start putting together a rough outline this weekend and I should have a draft for you by Monday.
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Firstly wow, totally fantastic that you one like cats (never trust a person who doesn't like cats lol) and find them easy to write about and two, you can actually work with what I gave you :D
I've had Zig since he was about 4 weeks old so I'd say I'd be mum (although there are days when I'm referred to as "she who feeds and changes the litter tray").
He gets along with all of the cats, Missy (she was hand reared from a week old) really took a shine to him when she was about 3 months old although she has out grown that and is now more a mummies girl, Sam also took to Zig when he came to us at the age of around 2 months and still is slightly infatuated with him and has learnt most of Ziggy's 'bad' habits.
Zig and Loco butt heads a bit and sometimes get into real blues where they have to have a time out from each other, this is a dominance thing even though they are both desexed. Loco was around 2 months old when he arrived and was a little bit of a nightmare adoption, he was a pretty angry young cat, he has mellowed over the years with me but he and Zig, let's just say every now and then things can be strained.
Hope this wasn't too long and gave a bit more insight into my mad house ;) I've added in dates of birth for the real life kids (in order of arrival) so you have a timeline to work with if it helps especially seeing as I'll be bugging you for their stories as well.
Lexi 6/11/95 - 22/06/12; Lucy 14/02/97 - 29/12/09 (both these girls were mums Devon Rex show cats, Lexi lived inside to start with, desexed when mum died and I brought Lucy in from the cattery after dad passed; Ziggy 26/02/05; Loco 13/03/07; Missy 29/03/07; Jazz & Ash (litter siblings 4 weeks old when arrived and Loco's half blood siblings) 09/11/07; Sam 25/01/10Realised I should have said as I was surprised at some of their ages, despite their age all the kids act just like that, KIDS!
I was wondering if I could please be put on a waiting list for a story? :D I have a Hunger Games themed pet, Mockinjay, that I would love to complete. Already have a profile done! I will make sure to fill out the form, if you have room for me on your list. ^_^
The funny thing is, I consider myself a dog person, but I grew up around a best friend who absolutely adored cats, so I got to spend time around many. :) The timeline does really help. Something else that would be great is any descriptions you can give me of favorite locations, like you did with Ziggy's preference of the door perch. Any furniture in your house that each cat considers "their place" will be helpful for setting scenes.
I will be glad to add you to the wait list. This is a series I know very well as I've read the trilogy multiple times and have seen all movies through Mockingjay Part I.
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Ziggy has this old scratching post (me, no seriously, me lol) that I made him that stands just over 4 foot tall. It's out on the enclosed patio which is now divided into cats/human space. He will some mornings bolt out there and straight up the pole waiting for me to play with him, have to be careful though he is strong (should try cutting his claws lmao). Zig also loves this small 'dog bed' my g/f gave me as her cat didn't like it, it's only 17" by 21" with an insertable pillow (it's purple, maybe it's true that cats do like that colour??) and sleeps in it during winter days. He also likes his position on the bed which is either under the quilt facing me laying his head on a pillow or laying totally uncomfortably between my legs when I lay on my side/belly. He loves to cuddle up to the other kids on the sofa in winter whether they want it or not, he has spazz moments where he will go nuts chasing his tail or nothing at all AND oh how did I forget! I bought them a laser toy last Christmas and only 3 of them actually play with it and Zig is one, he will chase that laser pointer around and collide with other kids if they are in the way LMFAO I can't believe I forgot that.... goes and sets the system up for the kids to play
Hope this helps and as I said I'm happy to use my real kids but add the fantasy into the story, I know you are busy but if you get the chance (as I want to get you to write their stories too) look at Cinetico, Rainthia, and especially Symbela's profile a I was sort of happy with them even though they lack the finesse that you can bring but how they were tied into the clan but then again do all the pets have to be???
Sorry I've struggled with this since I joined and I feel terrible dumping it now all onto you so please know how appreciated you are.
You are simply perfect then for the job! Thank you so much. I will post the form later today.. as I am heading out very soon. ^_^
I love Val's story! 0-0 That ending =u= The only suggestions/comments I have are perhaps making it clear earlier in the story that it is Valentines Day. Like "They love working as a volunteer, especially on Valentines Day." Oh! And you did a great job with the pronouns! I know it can be a challenge. Whenever it gets confusing though don't be afraid to just use Val's name. XD I liked the amount of dialogue actually ^-^
Sorry for the delay on Nezumi I'll work on answering that last question today. ^-^
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