The first draft for Imaginary. I wasn't sure if you have a preference for a nickname but if you don't like Magi, I can certainly change to another name. I just can't imagine toys using a full name since that would sound so formal. I also wasn't sure on real-world references. I think I only have one in there and the rest are based on toys I remember from the 90s but have unique names. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
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Pet Name: IX Lives
Setting: Shadowglen. Jaxon's Pumpkin Patch. Crypts, Zombie Den.
Personality: Curious, Loyal, Loving and Sociable. Sometimes Solitary and Skittish.
PoV: 3rd PoV
Likes/Dislikes: Collecting Dead or Rotting Things. Giving gifts (dead and rotting things…). has an appetite for foods from Half Baked and The Lost Skeleton. However, he will munch on Morostide candy and pumpkins left out to rot. When all else fails he'll settle for "mystery" food to get by. Strongly dislikes the tradition of trick or treating as it takes place in Jaxon's Pumpkin Patch. Mostly due to the fact that some trick or treaters are not very kind to him while they ravage through different parts of the patch for candy, minions and other goods…. For the most part though he doesn't mind the passers by during Morostide or otherwise as they almost always give him a piece of left over Morostide candy.
Other characters to include: Me, MissEventful
Anything else?: If you could include some of the info I have on his profile at this time in your story that would be great. Also, if you could please include any information regarding the Love Epidemic of 2009 information in his story.
First draft for IX Lives. I decided to do something a little different for him. I wanted to detail the nine deaths since this is so connected to his name and character but I was afraid this would make for a very long story so I wrote him a little poem. :)
I can change nicknames if you don't like the ones I have. Please let me know any changes you would like.
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Pet Name: Spottedleaf and Cloudtail
Setting: These are not real life babies so imagination is your playground. I did think of maybe making Spottedleaf and Cloudtail brother and sister as I adopted them from a departing player at the same time but it's not important.
Personality:
Spottedleaf: Sweet, considerate, hard worker, loves her trade (she's working at Subeautique and I've nearly got her to the final tier), works for some of the elite with her new cutting edge designs.
Cloudtail: Confident, hard nosed, well known trainer to the best of the coliseum but is now only training Loco as he see's his potential in the arena.
PoV: Which ever you feel is best
Physical traits: No real decision on this, again your artist licence is free to roam lol
Likes/Dislikes:
Spottedleaf: Loves to create new items and is an inspiring designer taken under the wing of Esmerelda to showcase her latest works. Coffee, lazy Sundays, her loft which is adorned with beautifully framed photos of famous designers (Coco Chanel, Alex Perry, subeta designers etc you get the idea).
Dislikes: Mess, arrogance that borders on rudeness/smugness, people or herself being late for appointments, not being able to get access to fabrics she wants, creative blanks, and the public transport system... she's green so it's the only way to travel.
Cloudtail: Loves his job training exceptional athletes for the battle coliseum, providing dietary advice, early mornings, working out, training and especially working with his latest recruit Loco who he now solely trains.
Dislikes: Lack of commitment, bad dietary habits, slovenly behaviour, disorder, lack of routine, discipline, athletes not turning up to training on time, not following his rules if you are to be trained by him.
Preferred Length: Doesn't need to be as in depth as the real kids but hey I am SO looking forward to what you come up with just go for it, you got talent girl!
I like the poem and the details of his nine deaths. As for the nicknames, I don't mind, I see what you did and I'm okay with it. :)
I don't see any revisions that need to be made having reread the story and poem a good handful of times now.
Sounds good. :) I have Lot and the story/poem together are a long story at 3 mil.
I recognize these names from the Warriors series which I loved to read at a younger age. Will use your character ideas, though. I should be able to start drafting after work. :)
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Whenever you have time hun your story telling is worth waiting for, I don't recognise the series Warriors, maybe that was the person that owned the pets before? P.S to hi hun long time no see, sorry had to say hi this way as we are never on at the same time lol.
thank you, will swing by and pay shortly. :)
hey! Sure has been a while, lol. Loved reading your story on your pet, Loco!
First drafts for Spottedleaf and Cloudtail. Their stories were so different in the telling that I didn't really know how to work in the brother/sister relationship but other than that I think I got all the details. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
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Holy cow girl you really are THAT DAMN GOOD!
Thank you. xD
I have Lot for you and these were 2 standard stories for a combined total of 3 mil.
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Pet Name: Lexi (Alexina) & Symbella
Setting: I was hoping we may be able to do a collaboration on these two as Lexi was a real life baby and Symbela just sort of happened lol. I don't mind the ideas for the story I've written I just think they are clumsy and poorly expressed, they lact your style.
Personality: Lexi was a very small Devon Rex (most people thought she was a kitten), she did look angry a lot of the time but really was a sweetie. She would chase off Loco of all cats (she had guts), did 'talk' a lot and would run around with this woollen mouse in her mouth mewing, use to tell her to stop talking with her mouth full as I couldn't understand her lol. She had been one of my late mothers show/breeding cats which was a blessing when hand rearing Missy as she helped take care of her, guess mothering instincts never go.
PoV: How ever you feel comfortable re-writing/wording their stories.
Lexi's Original Story: (I have added a bit of Subeta story at the end just to tie her and Symbela together) Story is too short and lacks depth/imagination
Lexi is the crone of the pride - old and wise, but also somewhat lacking in patience with the younger ones. You will often find her and Loco at loggerheads as to who is the more dominant. Ziggy tends to leave this pair alone to battle it out rather than get dragged into their petty squabbles concerning nothing more than egos. Lexi's dark side can be much stronger than her good due to this reason and she can be hard to read. With that said and done, there is no way she would abandon the others or ever challenge Ziggy to his rightful position as head of the pride.
Her knowledge of plants and magi is vast, which is an ever important need for the pride, what with Loco battling when necessary and having 3 youngsters in their midst. Lexi has also had the good fortune to have come across a wood imp called Symbela, who she has adopted, and with her help Lexi's knowledge of plant lore and their enormous uses has been unlocked.
Symbela's Original Story:
Lexi was on one of her usual evening hikes gathering plants for her different concoctions and accidentally, while picking some nightshade, plucked the hiding Symbela also!
Realising that this was no ordinary creature Lexi calmed the frightened imp, acknowledging her great fortune. She remembered that any creature of magi who succeeded in finding and "adopting" a wild imp, although admittedly had to contend with training it and convincing the imp that they are worthy to have the creature's loyalty, knew that the hard work was worth it as wild imps were thought to be extremely rare and harness a greater power than those summoned.
After several months of painstaking work Symbela grew to trust Lexi and the two formed an inseparable bond - Lexi teaching the imp many lessons in regards to contact with others, especially the clan, and Lexi in return learning much from Symbela's exhaust-less knowledge of plant lore.
Symbela, a bright and seemingly happy creature, hardly ever speaks to anyone but Lexi and when she does it is in quiet little quips, often so quiet that others can not make out what she has said. When alone with her master, however, Lexi and Symbela can often be heard loudly discussing and debating the latest uses of certain plants and other plant lore.
Symbela contentedly spends her time around Lexi's lair only ever leaving when preferring to be alone to rummage in the forest to commune in her natural habitat with her faithful minion Valeria. Often when on these outings, Symbela will bring strange new plants back with her and educate Lexi on them and their uses.
Preferred Length: Again I don't mind as you never cease to amaze me.
I have Lot for you and this was a standard story at 1.5 mil. :)
First drafts for Lexi and Symbela. I coded the line you had for Lexi's lifespan at the end since the code you had on there did not agree with story format. :) Please let me know any changes you would like for either story.
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Man you nearly had me in tears reading Lexi's story, truly wonderful and Symbela so creative, I wish I had your way with words! How much do I owe you hun and thank you so much.
These were another pair of standard stories so that will be 3 mil on Lot . :)
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Pet Name: Natty
Setting: A large modern city, like London or New York. Upper class area.
Personality:
Optional:
PoV: Third is good.
Physical traits:
Likes/Dislikes:
Other characters to include:
Preferred Length: I'm happy for any length. I can afford your most expensive but I'm happy for whatever length works.
Anything else?: Okay so, I've kinda left everything blank because I want more of a scene setting type thing than a story with a plot/characters. Like, Natty owns a beauty store and I'd just like a basic whimsical description of her store? I imagine it kinda girly, something like this: http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_67709_iLgSTN1VV_CvUVWkwjUEZkwg7.jpg Is that too vague?
You want more setting-driven with detailed descriptions of the store than one that is character-driven. I can work with that. My greatest question would be how to include Natty in the story. I'm thinking I could "zoom in" on the girls at work with Natty overlooking them.
I think this would most likely be a standard or long story. I won't say it's impossible to sustain a descriptive story enough for a complex, but it would be difficult.
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Yesyes, that's exactly what I'm looking for. That works well! You don't have to go into detail about Natty, but if you do I imagine her quite petite with long platinum plaited hair, and she'd probably be quite a kind boss. But really you only need mention her presence there. Yeah that's cool, I'm happy with that, either standard or long. :) Thank you! Is there anything else you need? x
First draft for Natty. I wasn't sure if you had a name in mind for her shop but I can certainly change that. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
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