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hey! I was wondering if I could claim a spot, I'd like a small story for the pet Memnochsdog atm I'm getting info from the owner,... the story will be a gift :)
I can hold a slot for you. I have your name on my wait list until I receive the form and then I will move you up. :)
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amazing, thank you! if somebody else comes, it's okay to move me a place lower, there's no rush for this request :)
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Pet Name: Ash & Jazz
Setting: Obviously similar to how you wrote about the other real life kids of mine. These two are litter brother and sister.
Personality: Ash is sweet and sickly cute at times he often mews without making any sound he is very loving.
Jazz is sweet and quiet she often comes across as timid hating loud sounds, sudden movements and strangers but when she and Ash rough house she lets him have it if he plays to rough.
PoV: Which ever you feel is best
Physical traits: Ash looks like he maybe overweight but he is totally solid he's like a miniature wombat when you run into him! He loves sleeping under the computer monitor (shelf) usually on his back looking overly cute. He will put his paw out and tap me to get attention and loves kisses on his nose, and yes that sandpapery tongue smarts when he licks/kisses you back on the end of your nose lol. He also tends to curl up next to me at night, head on pillow and his paws wrapped around my arm (great in winter too dang hot in summer!) he also snores really, really loudly!!!!
Jazz is totally different in colour to Ash (he's a brown and white tabby much like his half brother Loco) she is a silver spotted tabby with two toes on her front feet that are white, it always makes me think she is wearing leg warmers over ballet shoes. She too has the softest of mews when she does decide to talk.
Likes/Dislikes: Ash loves boxes to sleep on especially pizza boxes, I don't know why I buy them presents I should just get an old cardboard box! He hates the vacuum cleaner as does Jazz (ok ALL the kids aren't keen on it but they're the worst). If he were a human I'd say he hates to work or exercise to any great degree, sleep and cuteness are his thing!
Jazz does like to play sometimes with toys but isn't keen on getting chased around the house by the other kids especially Ash who out weighs her.
Other characters to include: Ash in winter will sit on the door ledge (Ziggy gets closer to the fire) and sleeps with his nose on the wood and his front paws hanging either side (I joke that he's my monorail cat)
Jazz my friend jokes is Ziggy's girl friend although Zig doesn't seem to know that, she tends to smooch up to him and get near/be with him a lot of the time.
Have a look at their stories if you want to include a Subeta link as I've got them homing minions lol.
Preferred Length: Again I don't mind. I think it will end up being what you can do with the little I've given you to be honest.
First drafts for Ash and Jazz. I tried to make the stories somewhat tied together yet unique for this pair of littermates. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
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As always you have out done yourself! Cracked up at the leafblower comment about Ash's snoring, will have to remember that lol. You portrayed them both beautifully and I wouldn't change a word.
I used to live in a household with people who snored like that so I know the sound very well. xD I have Lot for you and these were two standards for a total of 3 mil.
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Pet Name: memnochsdog
PoV: up to you
Setting: woods, has an owner who has a cabin in the woods and goes hunting together or sometimes alone
Personality: Brave, strong, kind, smart
Physical traits: check out the pet profile for the art:)
Likes/Dislikes: Loves to be outside, hunt, is kind to other animals as well. Loves his boss.
Other characters to include: up to you :)
Anything else?: Complete freedom here! :D I'd like a small story :)
First draft for Memnochsdog. I wasn't sure if you wanted to share the draft with the receiver or have it be more a surprise. If you (or they) would like any changes, please let me know.
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it's a complete surprise ;) so I'm not sharing it yet...
I really like your writing! but it doesn't really fit the kind nature of the owner haha. perhaps I shouldn't have put so much emphasis on the hunting part haha :p
Could you make me another short story, but this time about how Memnochsdog met his minion? (how he saved it or smth... ) some sort of heroic kind thing...
obviously I'll pay for both stories ^^ how much do I owe you for the first one?
I was able to put together a second part with the new info. I didn't realize you were looking for the heroic angle, but this allowed me to have him go on more of a solo run as well. I split the two parts with subtitles. I am happy to do them as one standard story at 1.5 mil rather than charge you for two since the two combined are within my word limit for a standard. :)
I have Lot set up for you though I am happy to make any changes you would like on the second part.
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wow, okay, it's amazing, thank you so much! :D could you keep it there until I've saved it on my computer though? (at mobile atm) I'll let you know when I have it saved ^^
Just wanted to say thank you again for the wonderful stories you have told about my RL pets but how you integrated subeta into the stories, you are truly talented to storytelling and I look forward to reading the rest of my kids stories as I send them, you are so awesome in your writing, I hope it's an avenue you are looking at in life as I think you will make your mark.
Pet Name: Juhlahtoh
Setting: Born from a triple scoop of Monkey Business Gelato in a locally and family run Gelato Shop. Spends his days daydreaming of traveling the globe and learning about his family roots.
Personality: Curious, Daydreamer, Loyal, Sociable. Lurks in the background to eavesdrop and people watch.
Physical traits: Always blowing bubbles (bubble gum) or gnawing on a "toothpick" (sprinkles/nonpareils), adventurous grin/smirk, smells of bananas and hazelnut...
PoV: Up to you!
Likes/Dislikes: LOVES holidays and birthdays… Means more folks for the shop who have stories to tell. Plus, he thoroughly enjoys testing out the new flavors of the month or seasonal flavors that come rolling in the freezers. Dislikes people who don't like gelato and or messy kids who run amok the shop.
Other characters to include: Minion (Wild ‘N Reckless the Smilie Ice Cream) who by the way is always mischievous by leading Juhlahtoh into many sticky situations… and Milkshake. his loyal bff.
Thank you! ❤ I do hope to publish in future. I look forward to seeing what members of the pride I will get to work with next. :)
First draft for Juhlahtoh.I got a little whimsical in his interactions with his minion and Milkshake. :D Please let me know any changes you would like.
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finally read the story through in one sitting. So stinkin' cute, love it! :) Don't think anything needs any changing, very well thought out and playful like Juhlahtoh. What do I owe you?
I have Lot for you and this one was a long story at 3 mil. :)
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okie doke and thank you again, dear for the story I will be by to pay soon. :)
Hai ^_^ I would like commish a long story and a standard story please!
Alchium (Standard Story)
Pet Name: Alchium
Setting: In some spooky woods in a place far away. A place with mirrors?
Personality: Alchium is it's true name, but everyone just calls it "the owl" because they fear that if her true name is spoken she will appear before you. They also say that if you look into a mirror at night she will appear.
Anything else?: Could you write it like something that comes out of an urban legend book or something similar? I suck at explaining. Basically descriptive like the one you did for Amaterasu.
Bourban (Long Story)
Pet Name: Bourban (everyone calls him Uncle Bourban or just Bourban)
PoV: First
Setting: A bar in a place called Rivet City which lies in the wastelands
Personality: Bourban is a russian sniper and bar owner. He can be serious if he wants to, but is usually a chill guy. He can handle his drinks, but when he gets too much his accent becomes more heavy so it is quite difficult to understand him x3. he also has two companions; Alice, an assassin and Joakim the demolitions experts. They live their lives and adventures together in the wasteland.
Physical traits: Bourban is tall, carries a sniper rifle, dirty blond hair, big beard Alice is petite, green eyes, red hair, carries knives and silenced pistol Joakim is also tall, gets drunk easy, carries a rocket launcher and lots of tnts, brown hair, blue eyes
Other characters to include: Alice, Joakim and some randome townfolks they happen to meet
Anything else?: Nope, I hope I explained this okay xD
(CW Shop)
I've got you slotted. I should have plenty of time to work on these over the weekend. :)
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