Updated draft for Snowella. Hopefully this was more the attitude you were looking for. :) If the line looks good, I'll go ahead and send the coded story when I get off work.

Aww, thank you. :D I have Lot for you and this was a standard at 1.5 mil.

' Offered <3 :*

Looks perfect, thank you! (:

The first draft for Belmont. I did end up with a long story but I wanted to let you see the draft as it was before I made any major edits. :) I can certainly remove a section if you'd like to stay at a standard. I can also change the ending if you like. I didn't know if you had a preference on him winning or losing the fight.

Oh my goodness I absolutely love it. T____T I'm gonna gather the other 1.5m real quick, if you want I can pay you 1.5m now and more 1.5m when you reping me? :o And yup, he wins the fight haha.

I put up Lot for you but you don't have to pay me until the story is as you want it. Do you want me to re-write the ending to have him win? Or I could add to the existing story, make it clear that he goes on to fame and plenty of wins. I was thinking this was like his first serious fight so it would make sense he didn't get the win but if I was wrong on that, I'll be happy to make corrections.

Could you that to me, please? I want him to win. Could it also just be a regular, but big win? Famous Bel isn't really what I want. ;u;

An updated draft for Belmont. I changed the ending to a win. :) I also tried to emphasize that this is his first major victory, since his career is just starting. Please let me know any further changes you would like.

I just wanted to give you an update on Derecho. I have his story all mapped out and I will begin drafting today. I hope to have the full draft for you tomorrow or Tuesday at the latest. One question; do you have a preference on nicknames? I was thinking something like Derec and Tura, but if you have others in mind, I'll be happy to use them. I can keep the full names but since they are friends it would be a little odd for them to speak that formally all the time. Most friends use some form of nickname. :)

I agree. I don't have a preference, and I actually really like Derec and Tura. ^_^ I'm excited to see what you've come up with!!

First draft for Derecho. I wasn't sure what kind of ending you were looking for so I did one that suits the story and leaves plenty of room for the development of Saturate's character. I'm at about 2,900 words which is a standard complex and would allow me to add another scene of two, if you feel any are needed. Please let me know any changes you would like.

The story is quite lovely! You described Derec's personality perfectly! And the interactions between him and Tura are my favorite. =)

I think the ending is perfect. <3

I'm glad you like it. :) I have Lot for you and this was a standard complex story so you have the option of 5 mil or 100 csc.

I offered. ^_^

Hai again! c:

Complex Story - 7 mil c:

Pet Name: Kyoki (Emilia)

PoV: Third

Setting: In a beatuful regal house and in a creepy mental asylum.

Personality: She is a scared, unstable girl that was sent there by her own parents. They call her the child of ill omen. Her mother had first a beautiful daughter with golden hair and emerald green eyes (Emilias sister, Callista). A few years later, Emilia was born. They did not expect another daughter, but they were overjoyed. Years passed and Emilias parents noticed that she is very different. She would tell her parents about her friend "Corvo". They thought that this was just a phase and that it will go over, but it never did. On her 19th birthday they decided to send her the mental asylum, in hopes that they could cure her madness. They would often use different methods to cure her um.. illness xD leeches for examples, i know they used to use that

Physical traits: Unlike her sister, Emilia has hair as dark as shadows and grey eyes. She feels comfortable around her friend, more so than her parents.

Likes/Dislikes: She likes the darkness, it calms her down.

Other characters to include: Her mother and father, Jessamine & Alliser

Anything else?: Don't hold back on the details! Go nuts! :D

I've never had a creepy charcter so, XD

The first draft for Kyoki. I'm actually at 5.2k words so I certainly didn't spare details with this one. xD Please let me know any changes/corrections you would like.

You never fail to deliver. This sent me shivers, made me cry and just scream with joy. So, awesome! ;_;

She's a great character which makes the writing come easy. :D I have Lot for you and you have the option of 7 mil or 150 csc.

offered! :3

Hi again!

Pet Name: Didymus

Setting: More of 'a hobbit' feel. Like the beautiful rolling lands with crumbling structures. And trees that can come alive. No wizarding though.

Personality: Didymus is brave to a fault, being the first to rush into a dangerous situation and the last to back out (if he ever does back out), with no regard at all to personal safety. He follows a strict chivalraic code and once he sets his mind to something, one would be hard-pressed to get him to stop (although asking nicely seems to work).

Optional:

PoV: 3rd

Physical traits: What he looks like

Other characters to include: Ambrosius, his minion. Just for reference he will be white (if that really matters). But Ambrosius although always trying to be with Didymus, he is very cowardly. As Didymus runs into battle to help others, Ambrosius is trying to find somewhere to hide. Although Didymus tries his best to coax Ambrosius; he is just a scared thing. They are very cute with Didymus' banter toward him to help. XD

Likes: Roaming the lands with his trusty sidekick, Ambrosius, helping people.

Preferred Length: whatever you feel is best.

Anything else: I do want to have where something shows blood like that he would get on him (to show more of his bloodred color); however, I don't want the story to be overly violent. Or doesn't need to be some epic battle. I'm trying to think how you can portray that without the story being so violent or something.

One question for you before I go to bed. Did you have an idea of the sort of enemies Didymus would most likely be facing? In a land where the trees come alive I'm thinking there could be darker forces of nature and these could threaten the people/creatures of the land. I think I could easily work in the blood in a tasteful way without any major battle scenes. I'm thinking in fighting his foes, they may get in a lucky blow now and then, but his armor always comes through for him.

I should be able to make a proper outline and start on the draft after work tomorrow. :)