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Aug 2, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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I've got you slotted. I can't say that I am familiar with Trailer Park Boys. I have worked from summary materials for fan pets but I understand if you would prefer a writer who knows the series well.

Edit: The first draft for Sincerity. I was feeling inspired today and the draft came together more quickly than anticipated. I hope it is okay that I did this one a little differently with the viewpoints of the aunt, the guy, and Cin. (I can change to Syn if you prefer and I can change Cinder as the main name as well.)

I will wait to set up a trade until both stories are finished, if that's okay. It's just easier to do the whole exchange at once. :)

The list on my old board is not current, unfortunately. I think most of those are actually completed pets at this point. xD I mailed you the updated list and you can let me know if any of my rough ideas inspire you.

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Aug 2, 2015 10 years ago
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I really love the multiple perspectives! (and how you started it with her great aunt's) o Also omg "a frog prince with "I'm So Hoppy I Met You" printed on his chest" can I have this plush LOL also loving their banter with each other ehe <3 And the panda-colored bear c:

As for revision requests:

"Adam had zero friends on campus but the primary school kids loved him." >> I feel like he would have friends since he's described as charming and witty, but I do like how that line is written/the contrast?

"He picked up the bear and set it back down, frowning. "Thanks, but...it's a little childish, don't you think?"" >> I'm thinking maybe Adam's reaction would be more of the "pretends that it's too childish yet is secretly pleased/likes it since it's from Cin" kind? Though I do like their banter that follows!

Also oh dang this is my fault since I didn't properly edit the prompt, Person B is "A"/Adam and I didn't catch that I didn't edit that orz

Would you be willing to re-write that part to Cin walking in on Adam asleep with the teddy bear clutched in his arms? And then wakes him up and teases him about him claiming that it was childish before? orz (I would definitely be willing to pay more for the change/hassle!)

Though I do like how you ended it with "It was the most sincere thing he'd ever said to her." <3

And of course! Whatever is easiest for you (:

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Aug 4, 2015 10 years ago
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Profile kind: Regular (1,5 mil)

Pet Name: Here Subeta Pets

PoV: Third

Setting: The setting is in Nippon, Japan and the story is about Amaterasu the sun goddess :3

Personality: Ammy is brave and loyal, but can also be a tad stubborn. There are more detailed info on her profile ^^

Physical traits: She is a white wolf with crimson markings and a floating devine instrument (weapon) on her back

Likes/Dislikes: Likes helping people, food, sunshine. Dislikes Water & Evil things

Other characters to include: Maybe his companion Issun (A very tiny humanlike creature with bug hat, they are called poncles)

Anything else?: Ammy is obviously a fanpet from one of my favorite video games, so this is more of a description of her that is not taken straight from the good old internet ^^ since I suck at rewriting in my own words, i ask thee for help. There are more details on her profile (taken from the wiki)

Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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The first draft for Stracci. I tried to once again include every member of the Whipped Cream Club while giving Stracci her own unique personality and storyline. Please let me know any changes you would like.

An updated draft for Sincerity. I was a bit confused by that Person B who came out of nowhere...but I prefer this new ending. =D Please let me know any further changes you would like.

The first draft for Jenine. I tried to include all the scenes given in your outline. Please let me know if there is anything you would like added or any changes you would like for the current draft.

So just to make sure I'm setting up the story right, you are looking more for a descriptive story than the usual narration? (In other words, rework the details of her character for a good read and less set up a storyline like I did for Kansen.) Descriptive stories are actually easier to write since they require less planning but I want to make sure to give you what you want. :)

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Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
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: i love it!! i love her speech mannerisms uwu I'll get on coding the profile tomorrow! and from there we can work out our next trade, as I do need more stories and I'm willing to do as many profiles as you need uwu

Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
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Just checking, do you have any sP slots still open? ;u;

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Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
Joker
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Yeah! c: That would be awesome!

Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
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Adelay_654

it is beautiful! ^_^

Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
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@ Pureflower I apologize for that oversight on my part! Can't believe I didn't notice earlier, but thank you for revising it (:

In which, I love the changes! How you edited that one part yet still kept that contrast <3 And that ending is simply perfect and I love it and ;u;

[Edit] Here's the form for the standard (:

Form for Snowella Required: Pet Name: Snowella

Setting: Someplace very snowy + cold // In a castle (lies on top of a huge hill, overlooking the rest of the kingdom).

Personality: Trusting. Curious. A dreamer with her head in the clouds. Occasionally forgetful.

Optional:

PoV: 3rd!

Likes/Dislikes: She's a princess who collects snow globes and uses them to see the world (magic). Likes eating strawberries and anything with strawberries in it (loves strawberry shortcake) + listening to Evret play the piano. He's also teaching her to compose her own music, an activity she has found that she greatly enjoys.

She also enjoys carrying Snow(name tbd?) around the castle and playing with/feeding him (her pet minion: Snoil: a snail with a snowglobe on his back).

Other characters to include: Her closest friend is Evret, the knight who is assigned to guard her (kind-hearted, easy-going, brown eyes, an olive complexion, wavy light brown hair worn loose about the shoulders, tall, fairly muscular, his attire is light armor in white and ice blue, preferred weapon is a broadsword, an excellent pianist).

Preferred Length: Standard! Though if you find yourself writing more, I am happy to throw in sP to cover the difference (:

Let me know if you need more info or anything! I'm waiting on art for her, so her (anthro?)/human form is not really set in stone right now.

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Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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I think I currently need 8 or so profiles because I've been finishing a lot of pets recently so I am always open to more trades. :D

I do have one sp slot left. I'll be glad to give it to you as soon as I get your form.

I'm glad you like it. :) I have Lot for you and this was a standard complex story so you have the option of 5 mil or 100 csc.

I already have ideas for Snowella, this one will be fun to write. :D I will send over Katelynn's story right now and I think what I'll do is when you have the preview for Teros, I'll send Sincerity's and the final code I'll send Snowella's, if that sounds good.

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Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
Robin
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Pet Name: Belmont

PoV: Third

Setting: Bel's a boxer. He was influenced by his older brother, Rover, who's also a boxer, though he lacks his brother's determination. There's a tournament coming and Bel's going to enter, aiming for victory to impress Rover. He's lazy, and he's trying to find the motivation to train harder in order to win.

Personality: Bel's a laid back guy, very relaxed. Although he's lazy he becomes very focused and determined when he finds motivation to do something. He likes watching his brother train, and talks to him all the times. He's a nice and sweet guy.

Physical traits: I don't think his height matters LOL but he's around 5'9. He's 20. Skinny, with a nice built body. Blue eyes, his hair is white and totally shaved on the sides, the hair on the top of his hair is tied in a bun. Omg sorry if these actually don't count as important traits.

Likes/Dislikes: He dislikes confusion, loud noises and insects. He likes sweet drinks, walking around, looking at the stars at night and spending time with his brother.

Other characters to include: Rover, his older brother. Let me know if you'd like me to describe him. c:

Anything else?: Not really I guess. But um it's a Standard type story.

If there's anything wrong or unclear, or if you have anything to ask let me know. 8')

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Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
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Awesome, I can't wait to read! And whatever will be easiest for you will work for me, I'm in no rush to receive the stories (:

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Aug 6, 2015 10 years ago
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I've read some of your stories and I absolutely love your writing!! Could I possibly claim a slot on your waitlist?

Form Pet Name: Derecho

Setting: Big city (think Las Vegas), dark and stormy

Personality: Depressed, cynical, highly intelligent, loner. He doesn't care about much, but he cares very deeply for his only true friend, Saturate, who helps bring out the best in him.

PoV: 3rd person

Physical traits: Late 20s. Tall. Short/medium dark hair with purple highlights. He often has it spiked. Handsome. Thin but muscular. He has a scar over his left eye, which he got after a brawl with a loan shark. One blue eye, one green. (HA version of him LINK)

Likes/Dislikes: He gambles, a lot; to the point of losing all of his assets. He keeps gambling trying to win back his money to pay off all of his loans. He is a card counter, cheating the system. His forte is Poker. He is constantly looking over his shoulder, worrying about running into someone he owes money to. He drinks too much trying to numb his pain, but it only causes him to become more depressed. He gets into a downward spiral. His friend Saturate seems to be the only one that can bring him out of it.

Other characters to include: Saturate, his only true friend. She tries to bring him "into the light" so to speak. She worries contstantly about him.

Preferred Length: Long to complex story.



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Aug 6, 2015 10 years ago
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Adelay_654

would you be willing to take 80 csc and 1mill sp?

Aug 6, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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I'll be glad to add you on and since I have the form, you'll get the next open slot.

Sounds good. I don't mind an sp/csc split.

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Aug 6, 2015 10 years ago
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Adelay_654

awesome, thank you :)

Aug 7, 2015 10 years ago
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The first draft for Snowella. I wanted to really emphasize her innocence and not make her relationship with Evret a romantic one though for his part he recognizes she is moving from girl to woman. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)

The first draft for Ammy. I hope this is what you were looking for. :) I did my best to work with details based on what I could find out about the game but if anything seems off or lacking please let me know.

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Aug 7, 2015 10 years ago
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Great! Thank you! =)



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Aug 7, 2015 10 years ago
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Magical and loving the story as usual o I love how you wrote the snowglobes in (and Snowi!) Also omg all of the strawberry-related foods And awh I love how she called him Ev, that's perfect <3

And oh yeah, that's fine, their relationship is a platonic one at the moment//they care about each other, but I don't see them heading into romantic waters (well, maybe in the future, so I like how you hinted at the possibility) (:

Revision Request: "She does not have the courtly experience necessary to recognize the hint of unease in his sigh. "Very well, Princess. I will await you in the music room."" >> I'm thinking maybe his reaction could be more of a friendly/teasing exasperation? If that makes sense orz

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Aug 7, 2015 10 years ago
Joker
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I just can't... wow! This is so freaking awesome!

You described her 10000 million times better than the wiki! So awesome! ;o;

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