Oh wow! That's amazing. I really like the whole story, and I don't think I want anything changed. It's perfect c:
Sounds good. :) I have Lot and this one did end up a long so if you want to do a combo of 1 mil sp and 50 csc I would be good with that.
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The first draft for Quanta. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
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Gosh love this is so fantastic. I think there's nothing to be changed (though there's slight misspellings that I can take care of). You can send the details now. Thank you.
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art shop: Maximoff&;s (Kush’s) Art Shop
pet story booth: Pet Story Booth by Maximoff ✨ [EMPTY SLOT]
I have Lot and this one ended up a long so that will be 3 mil.
I'm usually very good at catching my typos but this has been a long day so I apologize if I missed a few. If you want to point them out, I'll be happy to correct them in the final copy I send to you.
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Actually I don't really have fixed character and I read the 'About Me' section in your profile that you have a bunch of character idea so do you mind sharing one with me? I am really loss with this one.
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Pet Name: Hebeeb
Setting: Subeta don't really have Africa-like place so you may use any land I don't mind.
Personality: Playful and high curiosity. I don't know, you can come up with your own. It's pretty much a tribute to the great Simba and my obsession towards lions. So you can come up with anything.
PoV: 1 or 3 fit the most.
Physical traits: Just his overlay.
Likes/Dislikes: Whatever you think is fit. :) Also, I want maybe a biography or adventure story of him.
Other characters to include: Leo his minion but please make Leo his friend. Archan friend. He calls Leo, Leo the Goliath because Leo is a majestic Archan, larger in size than him even for an Archan cub.
Preferred Length: Maybe shorter than before but it's all up to you, I don't really want to burden you and your work is really amazing so far. ^^
commission
art shop: Maximoff&;s (Kush’s) Art Shop
pet story booth: Pet Story Booth by Maximoff ✨ [EMPTY SLOT]
I'm sorry I haven't been able to get back to you about the story yet! I had to travel unexpectedly, so I've not had the chance to read over it yet :( I will read it in the next couple of days, though! Thank you for your quick work on it
The first draft for Hebeeb. I did decide to theme the story around Subeta. I figured the outskirts of the Sacred Lands would make a good setting for wild archans since that is a desert climate. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)
Edit: I didn't realize until now the name on the form is different from your actual pet's name. Is his proper name Hebeeb or Habeeb?
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You know what? This is beyond perfect like I want to cry (literally) from reading. I like that you make his best friend an adult lion instead of just big lion cub of his age. And yep I misspelled his name, lol. It should be Habeeb. Silly me. ^^ I'll take this story! This is just what I want. Reminds me of Lion King, really.
One question is, why is there word 'canine' in the story? Shouldn't an archan be a feline?
commission
art shop: Maximoff&;s (Kush’s) Art Shop
pet story booth: Pet Story Booth by Maximoff ✨ [EMPTY SLOT]
An updated draft for Habeeb. I couldn't stop thinking of scenes from Lion King when I was writing this. This one was definitely fun. :D
I went ahead and changed his name. Also, the reference to canines is canine teeth, the big sharp ones at the front that all carnivores have. I changed it to teeth to avoid confusion.
I have Lot and this was a standard story at 1.5 mil.
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Pure can I have a slot for 2 stories? They're twin and need a related stories so I think doing both would be better.
Good twin
Pet Name: Miyaki
Setting: By the river, the junction of river between Peka Glade, Riverside and Centropolis. (refer Subeta map for better view)
Personality: She has all the noble characteristics. She's the nice version of the twins.
PoV: 1st or 3rd.
Physical traits: She has golden-blonde fur. Beautiful eyes. Long straight brown hair. She's beautiful and adore by everyone that sees her. Long silky tail.
Likes: The Glade. Other creatures. She like to help others. She like fruits more than meat but she's not vegetarian. She like to take a bath in the river. Dislikes: She dislikes bad things, of course. She dislikes how evil her twin is but she is unable to hate her. Her heart is to pure to hate anyone.
Other characters to include: Her evil twin, Mayaki.
Preferred Length: As usual, I put this on you. Any length is ok.
I want you to tell story of her life. Like a biography. Maybe tell story from when she's a kitten, how she was so pretty that everyone was pleased with her. And the climax, how her ugly twin sister sabotage her. Make her hated by the others and she ran away from home, to the Coda Cave where she stays there till now.
Evil twin
Pet Name: Mayaki
Setting: By the river, the junction of river between Peka Glade, Riverside and Centropolis. (refer Subeta map for better view)
Personality: She has all the evil characteristics. She's the bad version of the twins. She's more like Maleria and Mori.
PoV: 1st, preferably.
Physical traits: She has black-marsh fur. Dull eyes. She's not attractive as her twin, that's why she's so jealous of her. Short tail.
Likes: Insult others. Fight. Bully. Doing bad stuffs. Dislikes: Miyaki of course. And everyone else. She's selfish and narcissist.
Other characters to include: Her twin, Miyaki.
Preferred Length: Short is fine.
I want a story of her telling why she's so mad at her twin, how she despises her real bad and how she's so envy of her.
commission
art shop: Maximoff&;s (Kush’s) Art Shop
pet story booth: Pet Story Booth by Maximoff ✨ [EMPTY SLOT]
Alright, finally had a chance to read through it -- and I looooooove it!! I really did enjoy the addition of the beggar boy at the end, and I liked all of the dishes as well :) I don't think it needs any changes, honestly. I did want to ask, though, if you'd be okay with me making some slight edits to include my own mythos (specific creature names, etc.)? I'd still leave the credit to you entirely, of course! I'll also understand if you'd rather I not, however ^^
Anyway! It's great, thank you!
First drafts for Miyaki & Mayaki. I wanted to post the two together since their characters are so closely related. I tried to make the stories similar yet different in fitting with the two distinct personalities. Please let me know any changes you would like.
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OMG This is by far the best stories from you. I really, really love these! Thank you, I'll take em.
commission
art shop: Maximoff&;s (Kush’s) Art Shop
pet story booth: Pet Story Booth by Maximoff ✨ [EMPTY SLOT]
I'm glad you like them so much. :) I have Lot and they did both end up long (it's hard to do different lengths with two stories so closely related) so the total for these is 6 mil.
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Hello again! c: Would you perhaps be interested in writing two more stories for me? (One of these days, I need to really sit down and write my own story for one of my pets lol orz). If so, here are their forms:
Form for Katelynn
Required:
Pet Name: Katelynn (those she plays cards with regularly/her poker buddies call her "Kate" )
Setting: Casino maybe? Someone's home (a bunch of friends getting together to play/maybe inviting some new friends/mutual friends who don't know Kate yet) + cake pop shop?
Personality: Sweet/cute/adorable, actually pretty clever (maybe even slightly cunning?) despite her innocent-ish appearance, + kinda sassy & lively, like a cute sassy?
Optional:
PoV: 3rd!
Physical traits: Here is her overlay. She likes to wear cute bows.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes poker (is pretty damn good at it), as well as other gambling and card/casino games (though poker is her favorite). She also likes winning but is good-natured/light-hearted about it. A lot of her wins go to funding her addiction for cake pops.
Other characters to include: Er, probably other players? Most of the players who know her respect her skill, may grudgingly lose to her, yet she's adored by most because of her cuteness/charm haha. Underestimated by a lot (mainly people who don't know her?) because of her appearance.
Preferred Length: Maybe standard? But I am of course willing to pay more (:
Anything else?: Essentially, she's pretty damn good at poker (and etc.) and uses her adorable appearance to her advantage in order to fund her cake pop sweet tooth.
Form for Sincerity
Required:
Pet Name: Sincerity ("A" calls her Sin/Syn occassionally in a teasing way). Maybe have her casual name be Cinder in the story? Not sure :s
Setting: She works part-time at her aunt's sweets shop (that's also part cafe. They're thinking of also adding some baked goods but haven't yet), which has a cozy interior in a pretty busy part of town.
Personality: Sincere (of course haha). Cool/neutral exterior (always sincere), easily smiles, easily flustered (especially when "A" calls her Sin/Syn or says she looks like sin or something teasing like that?). Though the Sweetheart Kanis is basically the epitome/embodiment/representation of her heart/feelings/emotions/state of being. Is comfortable around "A" despite sometimes being flustered, will tease him back/banter with him on occasion.
Optional:
PoV: 3rd!
Physical traits: Sweetheart Kanis + her Human form here. Humans in the story. Her style is basically summed up in that chibi (cute dress + those wicked looking boots)
Likes/Dislikes: Likes photography (some of her work is up on display in the shop). Also "A."
Other characters to include: "A" (whose name is a mystery at this point haha) who has a mischievous nature and smile, can be sly, likes to tease Sin/Syn and banter with her. Unruly dark hair, taller than Sin/Syn, but not super tall, his smile = his most noticeable feature? + dark brown (twinkling?) eyes. Dresses casually but nicely. Let's say they're both in their very late teens? 18? 19? 17? Around there? Early twenties?
Preferred Length: None (:
Anything else?: "A" is a regular customer at the shop/cafe. He usually gets some sweets + a latte (he usually ends up giving the sweets to the kids in his neighborhood - When he first came across the shop, it was only a sweets shop, so he got into the habit of giving the kids candy as an excuse to go into the shop when Sin/Syn is working).
In addition, Sin/Syn leaves cute/fluffy notes with the sweets orders (some might be generic like a daily fun cute fact? some might be more personal to "A"), "A" leaves more suggestive/playful notes with the tip (or something? He drinks his latte in the shop? There's a decent selection of light reads in a bookshelf on one wall?) And it's a nice place to just relax, and also to work (writing, portfolios, etc.)) They both keep their received notes.
Ohgosh this is already a lot of information (no need to include it all of course! Just details in case you need them), but if you'd like/think it'd fit, maybe a timeskip to this moment, and end here >> Sin/Syn gets "A" a teddy bear (is also holding a plush heart like the one the Sweetheart Kanis is holding) for Valentine’s Day as a way to show their love. "A" takes the gift but claims that teddy bears are a bit too childish for them. Sin/Syn later finds Person B asleep on a couch with the teddy bear in their arms. (prompt found elsewhere) c:
As usual, let me know if I need to clarify/expand on/add anything!
Alternately, if you would be more interested in writing about Snowella or Ziri, I can try to figure out their characters more and submit their forms instead! c:
The first draft for Katelynn. I also have a space saved for Sincerity and her story is planned out, I just haven't had time to get the draft put together yet.
I would certainly be interested in doing stories for Snowella and Ziri when these two are done. Would you by any chance be interested in doing a pet profile in exchange for those stories? I've seen some of your work and it is lovely. :) I think I currently have...9 pets in need of profiles, so I have quite a variety of ideas. xD Of course, I'll be just as happy to do a story/sp exchange as usual, but I thought I'd throw the idea out there.
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Pet Name: Jenine PoV: Surprise me
Setting: The story begins in Victorian times, in a kingdom where Jenine is the daughter of the king. Her father enters her into a blind arranged marriage, but Michael stands her up on their wedding day upon finding out that she is a centaur (but she doesn't know that's why he changed his mind). On her journey to find him in search for answers, she meets a centaur named Deneider and hesitantly falls in love with him. It ends with her leaving her royal family and ruling over the forest with him.
Personality: She's very sweet, innocent, and submissive. Physical traits: You can see on her profile. Likes: Birds and flowers Other characters to include: Just the ones I mentioned in the setting. Anything else?: Nope
I'd like to commission you for a second story if you're familiar with Trailer Park Boys.
!! Katelynn's story looks perfect and I love how you wrote her (especially that last line yes) and I see nothing I would like changed and AHHHHH you work magic with words ;u; And take as much time as you need, I'm in no rush (:
And sweet! I'll have to figure out their characters a bit more sometime! c: And I would possibly be interested! (and thank you for thinking so <3) What pets/ideas do you have that need profiles? (Is the link in your signature an up-to-date list?) I was actually considering asking if you'd be interested in a profile/story trade but wasn't sure if you'd want to haha (I still lack a lot of experience!) And because I'm not sure how busy I'll be in the upcoming week or two! orz