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Jul 9, 2015 10 years ago
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Stories sent! I don't mind holding a slot for you since I know I'll get the form within the next day or two. :)

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Jul 10, 2015 10 years ago
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Thank you for holding a slot for me! :)

Form for Wordplay Required: Pet Name: Wordplay (In the story, the two twins Word and Play)

Setting: I like your idea of a "Greek-type island with nice trees and a tropical feel" Maybe also a safe haven for owls who agree to help out the twins? And an island unapproachable by people (those who venture too close get this unexplainable urge to turn around?)(and a good dose of some witty pun haha) I feel like writers may not precisely know who Word and Play are or the extent of what they do, but given the two's excursions, there's maybe some vague idea of them? Or they have a mythical status? (and maybe some writers try to actually try to seek them out for their muse powers. Of course, they don't succeed since some mystical force keeps all humans away from the island; though I'm sure the journey itself would provide some nice inspiration?)

Personality: Word: Takes great pride and joy in his work. Courteous and observant. Organized in an orderly fashion. Play: More lighthearted & playful than her twin. Witty, clever. Organized in a more artistic way. Easily amused.

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PoV: 3rd!

Physical traits: Word: Chibi Noktoa. Not quite sure if they should be called Noktoas, but let's say they look like the Chibi ones? Or the Common ones, anatomically speaking. Play: Identical, except the marking on her head is in the shape of a sun instead of that of a crescent moon.

Likes/Dislikes: Word: Likes collecting quills (from his travels) and arranging them in his cave(faintly lit with glowing, floating orbs? Theme: Moon). Dislikes getting his feathers dirty? Play: Likes puns and clever wordplay. Likes collecting gold trinkets to decorate her cave (ditto the orbs. Theme: Sun). Likes to fly in complex patterns in the air, and riding the winds.

They both greatly enjoy their work with writers as well as seeing writers, well, write.

Preferred Length: No preference! I'll also leave it up to you whether you'd like to write them together in one story, or to have two separate but related stories!

Anything else?: Let me know if I need to clarify/expand on/add anything :) You are free to change details as you see fit, I don't want to limit your writing muse :P

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Twin beings(owls? Or just unnamed mysterious souls). I&;ll be uncreative and call one of them Word and one of them Play.</p>
<p>Word visits the dreams of writers, influencing them. He plays with the strings of language (like the Fates deal with the threads of life, but not? But kinda? Maybe? I don&;t know enough of their mythology), and he weaves words and different realities together. He&;s like the keeper of the gates(?) to these alternate realities/universes, with words being the keys, the tickets, the vessels, etc. It&;s elegant, intricate, delicate work (/play; interesting juxtaposition here!)(this is his way of playing with words?). Occasionally, letters are delivered by various owls to writers whose dreams Word has visited, signed only with a &quot;W&quot; in fancy script (blank inside? An inspiring photo inside? Inspiration of some sort? Or just a mystery? No idea). I&;m not much of a writer, but I guess this could deal with the (clichéd?) magic that writers produce with words, or just the magic of language in general?</p>
<p>Play on the other hand, is more about play on words. Eg: puns. And the &quot;witty exploitation of the meanings and ambiguities of words&quot; (thanks Google). Her work/play is more infused with wit and amusement. I feel like she has more of a lighthearted nature than her twin. Not quite sure if she also delivers letters, or has a more clever way to spread her joy of wordplay?

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I am very interested in Wordplay and I already have an idea of how Word would be the sort of master language muse that gets the writer really focused and writing and Play is the witty one that gives the writers those lines that make readers grin. I&;m thinking for setting the pair could live on a Greek-type island with nice trees and a tropical feel and they could fly all over the world to visit writers, visiting large cities and hermit caves alike to spread their muse powers.

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Jul 12, 2015 10 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Liliya/Kansen. I really tried to capture the personality differences between the two.

I should let you know that I am right at my word limit for the story size you ordered (well, 4 words under to be exact =D) so if you want any additions I would need to take out a section or go to a long complex. I always try to stay at the requested order length.

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Jul 12, 2015 10 years ago
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Wow it is amazing! :D I love how you made Kansen to talk in first person! :3

Just wow! :D

Jul 13, 2015 10 years ago
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I'm glad you like it. :) I have Lot for you and this story will be 5 mil or 100 csc.

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Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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hiya! sorry i took so ffing long ._.

okay so, with Maharaja could there be some kind of connection with tea in there? I mean besides the fianl brew before the end of the story, but her TC has all the tea stuffs. Maybe finding comfort in tea ? I'm not totally sure >_< other than that everything is great!

with nekomancer, i like the approach you took on him, however i really meant for him to be a full on scardey cat. i really got inspired via this comic (this isnt the full thing) 1 2 3 4


Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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Pet Name: Deurim

Setting: Sacred Land, Subeta

Personality: The meaning of his name is 'dream' in Korean. He's basically a dreamer. He dreams a lot. Magical thing is, what he dreamed the night before will come into reality with a few twist. Not 100% what he dreamed will become reality but what became reality is not 10% of the dream. He's pretty much an un-talkative fella. He only has 1 best friend, his companion, Star the cat (I don't know what minion species to give him yet so I just leave it with cat lol). He also seek for help with the Old Wizard, rarely, not often. He also likes to help the Oracle.

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PoV: I know what 1st and 3rd person are but not sure about 2nd. I'll go with 1st person as I'd like him, himself to tell the story.

Physical traits: He's a Darkonite. As one of his species, he don't have the two tail like how a Darkonite should has. Instead, he only have one with the other one is like cut at the end, he was born this way not from any tragic accident. He also has golden hoof, on the left of his back leg that make him special. On his forehead, he has broken star tattoo, golden color. It is said that it's a result from the kiss of the Galactic Goddess. His right eye is black. This is the effect of his magical power. He also has mane, which is rare among Darkonite.

Likes/Dislikes: He likes to travel. He once dipped himself (accidentally) in the wishing pond in coda cave which made him Galactic. He's a vegan Darkonite. He likes to play, jump, hop here and there with Star. When there's time, he will read. He reads a lot. One of reason why he has a high level of imagination thus making his dreams really great (in good and bad way). He likes to avoid sleeping but his species can't go without sleep/rest for more than 3 days.

Other characters to include: His minion, Star.

Preferred Length: I can pay for the highest price so do whatever you like. I don't mind about the length but I like it to be a good story. :)

Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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Here is the first draft for Wordplay. Never give a writer a request for puns unless you want really bad puns. xD

An updated draft for Maharaja. I added a paragraph about her developing taste for tea after the scene where the other girls shun her because it seemed a fitting place.

I also have An updated draft for Nekomancer. I tried to make him more fearful and to give the cat some of the personality of the cartoon cat while still giving it other cat-like qualities. Let me know if you would like any other changes, otherwise I have Lot for you and this pair of stories will be 4 mil.

I will get you slotted and hopefully have a draft for you by the end of the week. :)

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Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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Offered :)


Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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!!! I love all the little details you put in and the genre owls (now I want to create all the genre owls) and the sanctuary and how you weaved in the quills and the trinkets and also the setting and aHHHHHH basically everything is perfection, thank you ;w;

(also THE PUNS, I LOVE THEM ALL, can never get enough of puns)

I didn't notice anything I'd like changed, I'll let you set up a lot? (:

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Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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I have Lot and this one was a long for 3 mil. :)

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Jul 14, 2015 10 years ago
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I offered! Thank you ^o^

Now, to make a profile worthy of their story! :P

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Jul 16, 2015 10 years ago
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The first draft for Deurim. I tried to work in as many character details as possible that go well with first PoV. It is a fitting story for him to tell events from his own point of view.

(Second is when you use the "you" pronoun - I know you had questioned this in your original post. So instead of a narrator (third) or the character (first) it is the reader who is the "character" in the story and "you" is used as the pronoun. It's a very uncommon story type and hard to sustain for long but there are a few out there in 2nd PoV.)

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Jul 16, 2015 10 years ago
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The draft is really good, promising and I can't wait to have this story. One thing is, I know I said put the companion as a cat but it's temporary until I found a suitable minion so I've found one but I think it's hard to cooperate and change the character in the story.

It's the Dream. So, she should be Star the dream. Dream looks like a bunny so can you change that maybe? If not, I'll find a feline minion for him. :) This is the item: OK Whatever I will just find a feline minion cause I think it'll be hard to reconstruct the story.:)

Jul 16, 2015 10 years ago
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Hi! Could I grab a slot? My form is below c:

Pet Name: Nyth- a spirit bear goddess and rain forest guardian

Setting: Temperate rain forest- heavily based off of the The Great Bear Rainforest in British Columbia. As far as a time period goes, I'm sort of thinking before the industrialization period in America.

Personality: She is very gentle and kind, but she rarely speaks. She is incredibly protective of her forest and the animals, and will go at great lengths to prevent destruction of her home and family. She is also very shy and weary of humans, avoiding any kind contact with anyone that wanders into her forest. She believes humans are dangerous and ungrateful. They take what they want and do not consider the side effects of their behavior. She will not harm a human despite her opinion of them, for she is completely against violence.

PoV: 3rd person

Physical traits: This is what she looks like in human form . It's very important to note that she decorates her body with dogwoods, one of the most common flowers in her forest, as well and places dogwood branches in her hair (like a crown). She also wears bear skin leg and arm warmers (which is her actual bear fur). The fur she wears is a lot like when a selkie wears its seal skin- it's for transformation purposes. Nyth usually take on the form of a kermode bear as her natural form. I'm thinking she takes on a more "human" form when she is presenting herself to a human.

Other characters to include: While Nahaan is my pet's minion, he represents a character I was thinking could be included in the story. I wanted Nahaan to be a native man that wanders into the forest one day as a sort of spiritual journey. He is a very dedicated member of his tribe and very loyal to his people. I want him to meet Nyth somehow and ultimately fall in love with her. Ha it might be a little cheesy though, so whatever feels right to you is fine with me c:

Preferred Length: I'm not sure how helpful this will be, but I honestly kind of want to leave the length up to you. I could definitely pay the 1.5 mil worth of writing in full, but if you end up writing more than that amount, I might have to mix a little sP with some CSC if that's all right. I don't have too much sP at the moment ^^;

I hope I've given you enough details, but please let me know if you need anymore information! Thanks for your time and consideration!

Jul 16, 2015 10 years ago
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Could I get a spot, perhaps? :)

Feel free to ask for clarification or more info on any of this... I'm not too good at forms, I think ;o;

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Pet Name: Griselde

Setting: A run-down bakery, left to her by her deceased mother, in a timeless village near the ocean.

The world is what is stereotypically associated with the fantasy genre, I think, where magic is real and heavily utilized but development seems a little stilted otherwise. There's an ongoing war between demons and gods and humans have been caught in the middle.

Personality: Grisel is incredibly friendly and outgoing, but she's more than a little weird by town standards and is largely ostracized as a result. This doesn't keep her from trying, however; she's earnest, hardworking, and kindhearted, and is determined to eventually win the villagers over with these traits.

Optional:

PoV: 3rd

Physical traits: x x x

Likes/Dislikes: *Grisel loves baking (although she's not very good at it) and sea creatures, and she especially loves finding ways to combine the two. She also has a sea glass necklace - a gift from her mother - that she never removes. *She is deathly afraid of birds.

Other characters to include: N/A

Preferred Length: Long? I'm not actually certain what this would need... ;o;

Anything else?: The area Griselde lives in has suffered harshly from demon attacks, and Grisel, being half-demon, gets a lot of negative attention as a result.

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Jul 16, 2015 10 years ago
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I have Lot and this was a long story at 3 mil.

For his minion, might I suggest one of these?

I will get you each slotted and I should have drafts for you both by the end of the weekend. :)

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Jul 17, 2015 10 years ago
Maximoff
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Hey I've offered and thanks a lot for the minion suggestion :* Also, if the slots are open, may I claim one please?

Jul 19, 2015 10 years ago
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The first draft for Nyth. I decided to do a split between past and present. I didn't want Nyth to have too much exposure to people but she would need a good reason to be wary of them. I did run over the word limit for standard but I don't mind doing a sp/csc split once the story is as you want it.

The first draft for Grisel. I had fun coming up with ocean inspired baked goods and I decided to give her one positive interaction with a human. Please let me know any changes you would like.

Would you still like a slot? I'll be happy to keep you on the wait list if you need time on the form, but I do not usually hold my regular slots for more than a day.

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Jul 20, 2015 10 years ago
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Yes please. I've the form with me now. [spoiler=Request Form]

Pet Name: Quanta

Setting: The Deepest Ocean of Subeta

Personality:

  1. He's a legend that everyone on the nearby islands talks about.
  2. He never go up on the ocean surface as he's scared of the above creatures, and the islanders scared of him but he never knows.
  3. He like to help other underwater creatures, without their knowings cause Quanta looks fierce and evil to them.
  4. He likes to live alone in his cave, at the deepest part of the sea.
  5. He likes to collect potion and materials to create spells.
  6. He was turned into hideous monster by Merana.
  7. He's a great, brave traveller Tigrean before he was turned into the sea monster.
  8. He still likes to travel in the deep.
  9. He has super strength that he can lift and fight the great white shark, even the megalodon.
  10. He is kind actually but the beast inside him, from the curse of Merana, sometimes control his mind and he might do fatally things to others that's why he kept himself shut from the world.
  11. Apart having monstrous appearance, the curse also made him immortal.

Optional:

PoV: 3rd please.

Physical traits: You can see his overlay. He is basically half tiger half fish. He has bright red eyes. Sharp fangs and catfish whiskers.

Likes/Dislikes: Before being a hideous monster, he liked to travel around Subeta. He liked experiences. He also had a lot of acquaintances and he was pretty bright and friendly.

After the transformation, he only likes to be alone. Alone with his only loyal dog (formerly) which had been turned into Hydus too. He liked seaweed and shrimps, that's his diet. He happened to be an omnivore rather than the typical carnivorous tigrean. He likes pearls, mystical items and spells. He dislikes trespasses and evil things.

Other characters to include: His minion, Opic.

Preferred Length: I can pay for the highest price so do whatever you like. I don't mind about the length but I like it to be a good story. :)

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