Sounds great to me (:

The first draft for Araluen. I tried to work in all the requested sections but keep them fairly short. It is always tricky writing over a long span of time. If any feel like they need expansion please let me know. I also couldn't remember if the months in their world had special names so I went with generic ones that I can easily change if you want something different for those.

I'm glad you're enjoying Stracci's character. Her story is going to be fun to write. :D

Also just a note for Briny that I think I forgot to mention. Her TC is over 100 items. I'm guessing that will affect profile layout because it is so large.

: ah, no worries there, nearly all of my pets have massive TCs so I'm used to coding huge ones uwu I'll probably have a rough image for you tomorrow; I've been consoling a sad friend for most of the day.

I'm back =)

Pet Name: Einai, link to profile

Setting: lush forest

Personality: She's very much a free spirit. Exceedingly kind, gentle and innocent. She's the harbinger of spring, so nature is her love. She's curious about humans. Often spied on them, but never any kind of interaction. Much like the animals in her forest, she's shy and skittish. If she thinks she might be seen, she transforms into her animal form, a thin and fine boned doe-- though her odd coloration and horns marks her as an anomaly. (( Animal Form )) Hunters tell tales of the rare prize lurking deep within the forest, so she must always be on her guard.

PoV: Whatever you'd prefer =)

Physical traits: Often in human form, but with antlers and small deer ears. Thin frame, kind of chesty. Pale freckled skin, long pale lavender hair. Crystal blue eyes. Image here and Image here.

Likes/Dislikes: She adores being in nature, obviously. Cherry blossoms are her symbol. She cannot stand the cold, so typically she hibernates during the colder months. Her body wakes her when spring is near, and she begins the conversion of the seasons. She can walk on grass yet not trample the blades, as well as on water. She takes great care when walking, making sure never to harm or tread on any living thing. She is a source of bringing harmony in spring season, and thought to occasion prosperity or serenity.

Preferred Length: Whatever speaks to you. =)

Anything else?: It might be cool to have her waking from hibernation to begin the task of the change of seasons.

It sound really great so far! If it isn't too much of a hassle, I would actually like if you expand on some of them (:

• On the first one (5th day of the moon), it would be great if you could mention Avatar Wan and maybe Raava and Vaatu
• On the 20th day of the moon, maybe instead of a cave beast, it could be a cave spirit-beast (since it is the spirt world after all).
• On the 27th day of the moon or even the 12th day of water, do you think you could mention how Araluen is going to read everything in the library to learn as much as she possibly can, regardless of the fact that she is stuck in the spirit world?
• 1st day of fire - could it be that Avatar Korra decided to merge the spirit world and the human world together again, as it was at the beginning of time (instead of freeing the village, that is just a benefit!)
• 28th day of fire - could you mention that because she has been in the spirit world for thousands of years, she had forgotten what the human world was like? & for the ending, I would really love it if it could end in a quote, like...as Araluen walks up to avatar korra and says something like "thank you - I would like to repay for freeing the spirit world by teaching you everything I have learned from the Spirit Library"

An updated draft for Araluen. I think I got all the requested changes but let me know if I missed any. You don't have to pay until every detail is as you want it but I have Lot and this was a long story at 3 mil (this price includes further edits or additions since you are well within the word limit for a long story).

The first draft for Wolfish. I decided to start with the trainees very briefly, lead into the back story, then come back to the present. This tends to work best where there is a back story, otherwise you have to find a way to bridge the gap (in this case of 200 years.) Please let me know any changes you would like.

Wow i love what you have there.

Just one quick change if possible i dont know if this would be to much detail.. I think it would be neat if his armor was mentioned somehow about how it shifts with him.

Also how the spikes on the shoulder pad are the teeth of those ones before him.

I was just thinking it might be kinda cool and then it would also tie into his overlay more as well. The other thing was some of the words seem off for his backstory time period like awesome was not used i dont think (its just me being picky). I also find myself wondering why he went after the old worn werewolf was he trying to prove to himself he could do it? He would not have gone there just to seek out immortality seeing that he hates the supernatural.

Besides that i love what you have including the part with the trainees. Also how you show that he can control his inner werewolf from being around for so long. Unlike the newer wolves who change automatically.

Awesome, I really like it! The only thing I am not crazy about is the ending Avatar Korra isn't one to invite people in for tea, she is more of a hot-head... perhaps it can just be altered a little bit? I should have mentioned this before, but I think it slipped my mind o_O

An updated draft for Araluen. I made a few edits that will hopefully be more appropriate to her character. Since Avatar Korra has a fairly small role in the story, it was hard to know exactly how she'd behave but it would be odd if she was outright rude to Araluen who came to thank her. I did change the bit about tea to just Araluen visiting her house.

An updated draft for Wolfish. I needed to come up with a way Wolfish would seek immortality without doing so through evil means. I'm not trying to portray him as religious necessarily, but it would make sense if he is fighting ultimate evil to expect some kind of reward.

The first draft for Einai. I tried to work in all the details you provided and give her that heavy love of nature befitting a spirit of the forest. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)

I noticed one tiny little typo-- just says log instead of long. No big deal.

I absolutely love it! It's beautiful. Thank you for tying in so much of the different little bits I had mentioned. It worked out great, and it's still cohesive and interest grabbing. Great length! And the ending made me happy. Your descriptions of things are just beautiful. ^^

Love the story ^_^ Its is perfect now

Put me on your wait list please? <3

Sounds good. :) I have Lot for you and this was a long story for 3 mil.

Aw, thank you. :D I have Lot and this was a long story for 3 mil.

Gladly. =D If you want to post the form for your character, I should have a slot opening tomorrow.

I was wondering if I could be put on your wait list for another story?

Sounds great!!! I will go bid now (:

I can get you slotted as soon as I get your form as 2 slots just opened. :)

Awesome ^-^

I'll mail you if you don't mind, it's actually getting quite long and I don't want to spam your thread C:

Pet Name: Betheny

Setting: A Saloon in the Old West

Personality: As a saloon dancer, Betheny is quite bashful and outgoing [in the beginning] with the men that come in for drinks.

Optional:

Physical traits: Curly, bronze colored hair, and gold eyes with long lashes. Pouty mauve lips and a fair complexion.

Likes/Dislikes: She’s obsessed with all types of flowers.

Other characters to include: Not really, possibly just a mention of her presumed deceased ‘lover’ Elijah.

Anything else?: In the beginning, Betheny is outgoing and bashful with the men, that is until she meets Elijah, a traveling cowboy who stops into the saloon she dances at. He becomes smitten with her and instead of wooing her into bed like the other men try to do, he showers her with flowers. They have a short lived ‘courtship’ of four days, he has to ride off and she hears nothing more from him after he leaves. She presumes him deceased, becomes a bit melancholy and instead of dancing for money at the saloon, she prefers flowers to keep Elijah’s memory alive for her purpose.

Offered.

Thanks so much!!! =D

Pet Name: Seiren

PoV: Third

Setting: In the stars/galaxy

Personality: The base for the character is this Goddess who's Brother was the first to arrange the stars the way they are, because she is incredibly jealous of such a beautiful legacy, she often spends her time trying to move the stars that form constellations.

Physical traits: Small and tall, olive skin, purple eyes. She has shoulder length wavy black hair with blue ends. She wears flower crowns and flowey dresses, she's a goddess. Here's a reference : [URL=http://s1148.photobucket.com/user/Kittycatqueen/media/Erte-Elegance-DollDivine_zpstlkdbhdp.jpg.html][IMG]http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o575/Kittycatqueen/Erte-Elegance-DollDivine_zpstlkdbhdp.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

Likes/Dislikes: Dislikes being ignored.

Other characters to include: Her brother, she doesn't call him by his name ever, she just calls him boy.