Thanks for trying. :) Thank you! I just got my answer from the coder. It was the padding like you said. :)

I'm glad you got it figured out! And I learned something lol

hi guys! im very new to this. i'd love your feedback on

hi there!!! c: i ADORE wine time holy wow. i only have two nitpicks with her:

1. "im learning at the minute," could be i'm to match the rest of the prose
2. possibly expand the tc some? it does an effective job as is ngl but i'm just a big fan of expansive tcs ehe. some possible suggestions:

OMG I love this story! The profile looks good, and I really like the addition of the hover pup. I agree about the TC, but that's personal preference lol. Ping when you turn on the nomination :D

aaaaah thanks so so much! i appreciate you taking the time to read it! 🍷 i've just turned on nomination! : )

omg thanks for catching that i'm. i type very fast when i'm writing and i easily miss small errors like that

i've expanded my TC by one line, haha thanks for the item suggestions (the spilled wine!!!!!) i'd been hoarding cheeseboard/charcuterie/wine items in my vault for years not knowing what to do with them. happy they've found a purpose

This pet has been nominated for the Pet Spotlight! ;)

aaawwwrg thank you!! 🥹 this made my day! i'm so happy

glad to be of service! :3

also, on that note, i think

love Bazyli! the story was so sweet - love how you ended it. it reminded me of the greenhouse my grandma had (that i used to get lost in) as a kid

I LOVE HIM That TC is chef's kiss

Little things - the information box seems to have a thin white rounded text box behind the header, and then the actual white box with the image and info layers in front of the header and this does not match the rest of the profile. I know this code is a bit finicky, so a few ideas: I think you could change the z-index of the header if you want it to lay on top of the info box. You could eliminate the thin top box or make it transparent, or extend your actual info box to lay over it or butt up against it to match the look of the other boxes. Purely a personal preference, but you could add a margin to the bottom so the TC doesn't hit the bottom of the page bluntly but rather sits "within" the page.

Fabulous job <3 LMK when you turn on nomination!

yeah i saw both of those, and i managed to fix the layering but not that little box, idk what's different about it (maybe it's that i messed with the positioning of the minion?). it's honestly ok, i don't mind it being a bit wonky haha. that being SAID i am tempted to mess with the tc a little bit more ehe, so i may not open noms on him juuuust yet. thanks so much for the feedback :D

It looks good! I've been messing with the code for Aphelion and the small box seems to be column_1 so I can make it not show, buuuut then the "information" header and (oddly) the minion disappear. I looked into adjusting the size of it to layer with the actual info box, but ran out of time before I could figure out how to get them to butt up together and layer properly LOL.

I mean honestly it's not that noticeable as far as the slight gap between the two behind the header.

The profile, TC, and pet all just look so pretty and cute together. And it fits his story so well. <3

thanks so much!! ;v;

Someone beat me to the nom! Congrats friend <3

I think Nev is done :)

i have a suggestion re: the tc, actually two:

1. maybe put all the stickers in a row?
2. maybe one more row of items? some suggestions:

otherwise it's REAL REAL good ;v; i will absolutely nominate ehe once it lets me LOL

Oh thank you! I think I may add one more row. I like the phone and alarm idea!

Hi! just a couple teeny things in the story. Excellent, by the way. :)

1. This is a run-on sentence. It needs to be cut into 3 or 4 sentences. Or, instead of commas separating the thoughts, it should be semicolons to affect a longer pause, and with each delete the double space. Just my opinion. :) "The look of relief in the eyes of the victims when "guilty" rang across the courtroom, the glimmer of hope that sparked for the first time since she had met them as they walked back out into the world, her hand often on their shoulder in support, the knowledge that though they would be forever changed they now at least at a chance at more than just survival, at healing. The end of so many dark and depressing stories - a conclusion not of sorrow, but of triumph and hope."

Maybe s/b: "The look of relief in the eyes of the victims when "guilty" rang across the courtroom; the glimmer of hope that sparked for the first time since she had met them as they walked back out into the world, her hand often on their shoulder in support; the knowledge that though they would be forever changed they now at least at a chance at more than just survival, at healing. The end of so many dark and depressing stories - a conclusion not of sorrow, but of triumph and hope."

2. The young woman paused before turning the corner and looked back at her with new warmth in her eyes and a small, soft smile that was learning how to blossom again. [DELETE SPACE] She gave a small final wave of gratitude, then disappeared into the hall and hopefully from her life.

Thank you!

Welcome. :) After 'healing' should delete the space and make the next sentence part of that paragraph, or put another line break and make it look like the others. really good though, and I love the art!