I've finally finished a couple more pets! First off is Prospekt, whom I had for almost FIVE YEARS before I wrote his story. He's a Drifloon (Pokemon) OC, but hopefully his story is understandable even if you don't know Pokemon. It ties into the mythos that some of my other pets are part of.
Then a few days ago I finished up Rip Van Winkle, who is a Hellsing fan pet. Again, I tried to make her story understandable for people unfamiliar with the fandom.
Thanks for any suggestions or feedback!
I find the artwork on the bottom right to be really far away from the rest of the profile. I got a large screen so it may have something to do with that.
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Are you talking about Rip's profile? It's right by the body of the profile for me, so it's probably the large screen since I have the image aligned to the right, and I set the width of both it and the text boxes in pixels. I probably should do it all in percentages for compatibility's sake, but I don't know how to get things to show up where I want them that way. Thanks for the feedback!
yes it is Rips. Sorry I wasn't clear there. I think adding 'fixed position' would help with the wandering.
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Hi! I love both pets, but I'm having a problem with Rip too. When you change the resolution, the art in the bottom right is moving separately from the rest. 100% and 50% I agree with . If you use 'fixed' it should work - but of course Idk anything about your coding. I think also if you simply use a floating image and line it up with the others, it should work too. :)
I have "background-attachment: fixed;" which is the same thing I have on the backgrounds of all my other profiles. Don't know why this one is acting different.
[edit]Okay I got the image to float, just haven't figured out how to get it to float BESIDE the description instead of behind it, lol. I'll work more on later.
The art is just a transparent PNG of the picture and "I'm the Huntress" text, to make a smaller file size. The solid black part is all just the background color.
Annnnnnnd I never even thought of aligning it to the top left and then moving it from there. Goodness I think my brain got eclipsed along with the sun. Will try that later, thanks so much!
Sorry to keep pinging you 😅 Does it look okay now? I checked it at different resolutions, so I think it should work. I didn't realize that images could be placed anywhere on the profile this way, so I'm glad to know how to do it!
Thanks again!
No, no never mind a ping! In this case, ty for that. Glad it worked out for you. So much easier to do it this way I think. At least for me. The less troublesome the better! lol He looks perfect now and he's nominated. :)
I finished stories today Oo go me. Cozen here Is the profile too small? is the text too small?
Kovac Needs some TC help for a fighter and seriously ugly house décor.
anything else I missed before they care spotlight perfect?
Edit: Forgot the ping
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Hi! I liked the Cozen profile. The text is a bit small for me, but really probably isn't for anyone else. :) I loved Kovac's profile. The way its set up is nice. I love not having to scroll, although that's really no big thing. Turn on the noms and I'll be glad to do one today and the other tomorrow if no one else does. :)
Like Chrysariel said, the text on Cozen's is a little small, but I don't think it's a problem since viewers can zoom in/enlarge it on their end if they need to. I'm not seeing a credit for the story so you might want to add that, unless they accept "profile edits" as including the text too.
For Kovac's, the right half of his TC and friends boxes are cut off for me, and I have to scroll sideways to see them. There's no scrollbar on the bottom of the screen, so I have to use the arrow keys to do it. There's also empty space on the right of both those boxes: screenshot
I also have to scroll vertically to see the bottom of the profile, but there's a scroll bar for that, so it's fine. However, there's a lot of empty space under all the boxes: screenshot
Cozen's story is very interesting, not many like that here! I'm intrigued by the characters and the world you're building through hints in the narrative! The font is quite small, so it was a bit challenging to read. I'd recommend making it larger. At least on my laptop, the box isn't centered on the profile (not sure if you want it to be or not). In making the font larger, you could also widen the box to prevent adding additional scrolling, and this could possibly also end up centering the box depending on how far you expand. A small thing visually, but the TC has one open slot at the end so if you wanted to add one more item then it would fill the space fully.
Kovac has such an interesting dichotomy in his two stories, very different vibes and I think the fact that it's a bit jarring is cool!
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"A pool?" Xander moved from the kitchen to the animal print on chest board room. "So it does, I think that is the pool surrounded by all that over grown grass. Do you think that shed is decorated as badly as the house?"
Is chest board meant to be chess?
The legacy name is hovering above the nameplate and doesn't seem themed to the rest of the profile. You could hide it or move it?
The "like pet" heart is hovering above the line of the second story box and doesn't seem spaced to match anything else.
Visually on my laptop the spacing of things seems off, likely because each "row" is centered on the page but the "columns" aren't. Personal preference here! - I would align the top and bottom rows to center along the columns.
Here's a visual to explain what I'm saying because I'm better with that than words sometimes lol. I didn't get things perfectly aligned since I was just using paint lol but it gives the idea.
You could bring the LN and like down to the line at the bottom and space each evenly from the other things - like LN to the left of owner, like to the right of the species/color - to fill this line out?
[Spoiler=TC ideas] Home Appliances has some great household items that could fit your idea! Especially some of the older art ones! I think you could mix around in the TC to make them really clash with each other lol. For the fighting side: [item=Tension Bandage (Arm)] [/spoiler]
Very cool pets! Are you expanding the stories in other pets? I'm interested in this world and the bigger story that seems to be going on!
- Cozen is going to have a rework. The zooming really doesn't help. I'm going to tweak him some. Thank you both. Once I figure out that profile I'll see if I can fill out the TC a few more spots.
I put a tag on the body. See if that helps with Kovac's profile? I have a wide screen for doing split work on one monitor. That maybe screwing somethings up.
! Fixed the typo. Thank you! OMG! I kinda stopped half way last night after hearing about Nef, I moved the legacy name and recolored that. The heart I put near the pet image. it's still kinda floating but looks more natural between the name and image I hope.
The TC items! Chef kiss Thank you!
As for connecting stories. Kovac, Denny, Cozen, Kaden, Sark, Swave, Karaline, Saemus, Hess, Quantum. , JBB, Nytefall, Renee, Florissa, Ricochet - brazen, Annihilator and possibly Keener are all connected and not all finished.
I think the finished ones are: Quantum. Sark, Denny, Karaline, Cozen and Kovac are finished finished. Renee doesn't have much as she won previously. Ricochet is a loosely tied in. He's from Brimstone and mentioned in comics here an there as the only tie in.
Thank you everyone for the help. Kovac's noms been activated ^_^ Edit: Cozen and Kovac have Spotlights activated.
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Nominated Kovac for you! I'm so glad I could help! I'll look forward to reading everyone's stories when they're done! It's such a feat to tie together multiple pets, I know a few folks who do and it's impressive every time!
Any suggestions or issues with bitewing profile?
Appreciate any suggestions or critiques! ❤️ 🦷
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THIS IS SO CUTE, it really makes me want to brush my teeth more often... I love the simplicity of the profile! It's very clean and seems appropriate for this kind of informational pet. : Db I did notice that the content in column # brush3 seems to be slightly cut off at the bottom for me? Every time I scroll down to the bottom of that column, I can see half of of a line of text, with the bottom half cut off. That might just be an issue on my end, though.
My only suggestion is based off of my personal preference, so no offense taken if you don't take it! I was just thinking that the "assistant" and "patients" tabs should look like they "pull out" from behind the main white column, instead of hovering over them and seeing bubbles of information appear. I don't... know how else to describe this, sorry. xD I know there's a way to do it, but it's been so long since I played around with CSS that I couldn't tell you how to code it.
All in all, a lovely job, though! <3 You did great!

that makes me so happy! That's the exact reason why I created bitewing's profile. The tabs were such a struggle for me since I also haven't played with CSS in a long time. I might play around with it the minion and friend bubbles! I've seen cleaner ways to do that, but how it's done is the struggle lol.
Thanks for the heads up on the # brush3! I see what you mean. Looked ok in the past but for some reason on mobile I see that as well??
Thank you very much for the feedback!!
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