First drafts for Zearo and Bernadettera. If you dislike the nickname Bernie, I can certainly use something else, though it is hard to use a name that long throughout a story without some kind of nickname. Please let me know any changes you would like to either story. :)

Wow wasn't expecting you to finish that off so fast!

The only few inprovements I see so far are;

Zearo: He is actually married to Bernadettera and so far don't have a kid yet. I suppose I could have added that into the other characters section too. (all of my pets tie together somehow)

Bernadettera: Her usual nickname I could think of is Dettera or just Adette. In regards to her past she was framed for a bank robbery the criminals left her with the money. My other pet Donahuea helped her get her life back on track.

Otherwise I love the detail you put into describing her bakery, and the air fight for Zearo's mission by running into strange creatures!
I apologize I'm a bit vague sometimes with details. I too come up with some very interesting backgrounds for my pets just can't always seem to put them in the best words.

I'll call you Britney Spears because you did it again! I love it, specially the part where they look the obituaries trying to find old names sobs Thank you!!!!!!

As long as I don't have to shave my head. xD I have Lot and this one was a sketch at 600k.

Updated drafts for Zearo and Adette. It's always helpful to have as many details as possible from the start but on standard stories it's easy to make corrections because the story line is generally not too complicated as opposed to a complex with multiple scenes. I think I've got all the details worked out to link everybody now. I went with Adette because it seems the type of name that would be used in everyday conversation. If I've missed any other details I will be happy to make further corrections. If everything looks good, I have Lot and this was a pair of standard stories for a total of 3 mil.

Thank you so much! Once again you continue to amaze me. I'll be a bit more detailed in the future ;) now that I know where I left them out.

Hi! How are you? Have another pet when you have time.

So I have this rather unique idea for Zip that I wanted to run by you before I attempt the writing. How would you feel about his story being done like an interview for a popular Subetan music magazine? I could really bring out the depth of his character and give him a heavy rock star feel this way. This would also allow me to really get into details about Zip, his band members, his minion, etc. from his own unique point of view.

I think it's brilliant! Can't wait to see what you do.

First draft for Zip. I decided to bold the questions to make the sections easier to read. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)

Love it! Sheer genius to have it be an interview!

Well thank you. :) I always like to find unique ways to portray characters. I have Lot for you and this was a long at 3 mil.

Is there any way to make it longer? I want more! lol Of course be glad to pay more too.

I could certainly try to think up a few more questions but I'm at 1.9k for word count so the story would be approaching a standard complex pretty soon. I'd also have to wait until tomorrow to post the new draft because I go to bed in about an hour. It wouldn't look too good if I fell asleep at my desk. xD

lol! Please go to sleep and have a nice rest. Tomorrow is great, but if its after that I don't mind waiting at all. Not in a rush, just excited! Make it twice as long if you want - you can break it into parts too, I don't care. I'll certainly pay any extra. Its just amazing.

An updated draft for Zip. I got woken up by a snowplow outside my window an hour before my normal waking time so I decided to work on writing rather than sit around and grumble. xD I have enjoyed this writing style and I was easily able to add another 1k words but I will admit, I'm coming to my idea limit. If there are any specific further questions you'd like added, I could expand more. I will say that I'm now close to 3k on word count so I don't know if you would want that highest story level. If you're happy with the story as it stands now, I've left up the lot I posted last night and you have the option of 5 mil or 100 csc for payment.

Oh I would have been grumbling too! But glad they were doing their jobs. My friend in MN said it was snowing so hard it was making her motion detector outside flicker fast like an old movie. Anyway, thanks! I love all your stories that I've read, many that aren't even mine, but this one is my favorite so far. Thank you so much! Made the offer of 5M. My pets are my addictions, and I will keep getting new ones. lol I try to come up with detailed ideas for them that are different for each one, and your stories built on those ideas just really bring the pets to life for me. Just wonderful! I love how creative you really are and how masterfully you make it look easy. I love books and stories when the magic happens - where you fall in and forget that you are reading. I do it with my own writing in rp paired with others, and never fail to do so with yours. Thanks again, and until next time... which won't be long I'm sure...hugs.

New pet, new commission from you! Can I grab a slot please?

Form: Pet name: Fluido Setting: Fluido was an angel many decades ago, his name back then was Dagiel - the angel who take care of fishes and fishermen - but then he fell while trying to save a fisherman who was drowning, he interfered too much and was banished. When a angel falls, it's "grace/soul" can enter a human body or literally any objects; Dagiel's grace was naturally attracted to the sea and his grace possessed a Blue Precious Coral; inside the gemstone his soul healed from the fall and, from it, emerged Fluido, a total different being, nor an angel, nor a mortal, he was just holy power growing from a natural gem. After that, he desperately tried to find a way to become an angel again by contacting other angels and even demons, but no one would care about him. After spending many years in this quest, he realized that he had abandoned his true mission, and now he could do much more for his loved sea beings being a part of the sea - so he accepted his new true form and decided to aid everyone and everything that could be in danger in his precious new home, the ocean. (IM SORRY MY SETTINGS ARE ALWAYS SO HUGE OMG) Personality: Fluid is sweet and kind-hearted, but he doesn't show that very often, the only company he has are the sea creatures, a few angels that were fond of him back in the days and some "crazy" seaman that swear they were saved by a blue angel... Due to the lack of companion, Fluido likes to play a trick or two on the nasty humans that disrespect the sea, just to pass the time - oh how he HATES tourists during summer... Physical traits: I don't really have any full visual reference for him, sorry! I'm not sure if this makes any diference in the story, but he has a human body, quite tall and slim, has the same body color of the Aqua Mahar, with a blue precious coral gem on his forehead, he also have horns just like the Mahar's ones. When he needs to use his full power and strength, a pair of wings appears on his back, they are just like the but made of water.

I'll leave you free to choose PoV and Length, I trust you much more than I trust me. xD Again I'm sorry if my form was too huge. ;n;

First draft for Fluido. I love details in the form. xD When details are laid out, I can spend less time outlining a story and get to the writing faster. Please let me know any changes you would like.

(On a side note, Dad & Daughter Duo FTW! I was a fellow member of Team Stick Together. :D)

Every single time that I read one of your stories I get the chills, this time it wasn't different. I tend to put a lot of emotions in my characters and you just bring it all to life, so you better know that I'll come back for more. The story is perfect, idk how you can write things so fast. xD

When I get a character in mind, I go into serious writing mode. xD I have Lot for you and this was a standard at 1.5 mil.