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Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Tomium

no worries! Ill give you 100 csc C: I was just unsure of the conversion xD

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Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
Fiore
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Ok, I'm officially addicted to your writing again xD Can you put me down for another slot? I'm about to head to bed, I'll post the info after I wake up lol

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Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Skula

Thank you. :) I want to say it's something like 3.5 or 4 mil per 50csc based on the prices I've seen lately.

I'll go ahead and slot you on the wait list until I get your form. :)

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Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Ok! So this would be between 2 of my characters (again, they're not actual Subeta pets lol)

  1. Pyria - Character page
  2. Renfaelin - Character Page

They have a quick blurb on there about their backstory, but I would love for it to be more fleshed out. So in terms of structure, probably start with the backstory and then do a time skip showing how their relationship is presently? This will probably be a complex story again lol Would you be able to do the 2 perspectives again or is that too much? x'D

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Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Skula

I'm really intrigued by this pair. I don't usually like to take on more than one complex at a time, but with these two the stories will relate so closely that I don't mind, if a bit of wait time doesn't bother you. (I'm hoping within a week, but I may go over that time greatly depending on just how much detail I end up putting in. The backstory they share is already taking shape in my mind.)

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Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Wait times don't bother me at all, especially since you always follow your deadlines that you set xD

I'm glad they intrigue you! I was going to write something up myself but I just enjoy your writing style too much lol

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Mar 10, 2016 10 years ago
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Skula

First drafts for Ren and Pyria. I didn't expect to have these for you so quickly but it's been a stressful week and writing is my best stress relief, so here they are. :D Please let me know if you'd like any changes.

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Mar 10, 2016 10 years ago
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I really don't know how you do it. Both stories are absolute master pieces! You captured their personalities perfectly, to a T and I just love the dialogue and the world you created for them. Aaah reading them just sent warm fuzzies all over my heart. And the ending just made me awww irl lol Seriously, you're amazing, no changes needed. ❤

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Mar 10, 2016 10 years ago
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Aww, thank you. :) It's always a joy to help bring characters to life.

I have Lot for you and this was a pair of standard complexes for a total of 10 mil.

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Mar 17, 2016 10 years ago
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Have you ever thought of adding a copy/paste form?

Pet Name: Snod Setting: Outside of a castle / swamp Personality: Not friendly POV: 1st Person Physical Traits: Art Length: Long-Complex. Guessing its going to be like 2500-3000 words. Something this long if that works. Additional Info: Can I mail it cause it is a ton. I already kind of have an outline in my mind.

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Mar 17, 2016 10 years ago
Pureflower
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Skula

First draft for Snod. As with the sample, I can make any name changes you would like. I'm actually under the word count for a standard complex (just over 2.4k words but not over 2.5) so unless you would like additions to the story, I'll charge for a long story on the final draft.

Just so you know, the "story break" is for the sake of the profile design you described and is not part of the actual story. :)

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Mar 25, 2016 10 years ago
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Gerudo

Hiya! I was wondering if you are familiar with the tv show Supernatural? I have a fanpet for Castiel that I am just getting nowhere writing about and his lovely profile has been rotting for ages now :c

Mar 25, 2016 10 years ago
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I'm sorry to say that it isn't a show I'm familiar with. I've worked from summaries in the past for TV and game characters, but I understand if you would prefer a writer with more first-hand knowledge of the show's characters.

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Mar 25, 2016 10 years ago
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He's been in the show for 7 seasons which seems like a bit much to ask someone who doesn't know the show to write about D: Thank you though!

Mar 26, 2016 10 years ago
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Binx

Your stories are so amazing, I would love to commission a standard story from you!

Pet Name: Bruise Setting: modern day, probably a hazy feeling, greyed out, similar to how it feels when there's a thunderstorm Personality: worn down, depressed, insulated, she was happy as a kid but as she grew up she lost all the color in her life. her name is rayne PoV: first or third, whichever works better for you! Physical Traits: the biggest thing about her is that she cannot feel any emotions, no matter what situation she's in. instead, when something happens that would cause her to feel emotional pain, bruises begin to spread on her body in relation to the intensity. emotional pain becomes physical pain. Preferred Length: standard story, if it needs to become a long one then that's totally fine with me. :) Anything Else?: the song that inspired the creation of her character is Jet Pack Blues by fall out boy. i was thinking maybe the story could be written as a series of flashbacks to significant events causing bruises. the ones i was toying with were discovery - heartbreak - breaking heart - leaving to protect, and possibly current situation with large bruises forming at the end. these are totally just suggestions, just figured it wouldn't hurt to give you all the information i could. :)

please let me know if you need any more info!

Mar 26, 2016 10 years ago
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Skula

First draft for Bruise. When a writer finds a character intriguing, it gets easy to overshoot the mark on story length. I'm actually at around 3.2k words on the existing story, but I'll be happy to scale it back and make some cuts. I just wanted to give you a chance to read the full story I came up with before making major changes. :)

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Mar 27, 2016 10 years ago
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Khan

Hi! Have new pets when you have the time. Thanks!

Mars Blackwater

Pet Name: Mars Blackwater [pet not found]

Setting: Darkside, Asmodeus Genetech Lab.

Personality: Driven, yet an optimist, focused, genius intelligent, and extremely curious.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Male adult Blacklight Paralix.

Likes/Dislikes: He loves science of any kind and delights in new discoveries. He voraciously reads scientific papers and magazines to keep abreast of new technology. He hates not getting the results he expects in his experiments, but is also very interested in what he does get and why, and their possible uses. He has no time or interest in mainstream pursuits and calls it silliness. He loves telling scientific jokes on occasion that unless his audience is as smart as he is and/or a scientist as well, they don't get them. Dr. Asmodeus often laughs at his jokes - they are the only ones he finds funny. He loves working for Dr. Asmodeus and is intensely suited to the job.

Other characters to include: His minion Ching Chang the Double Dragon, and Dr. Ian Asmodeus.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Whatever you can think of to do...lol

Castemere

Pet Name: Castemere

Castemere

Setting: His offices are in Centropolis, but he lives in a very secluded small castle with state-of-the-art high security on Veta Lake.

Personality: Dark, terrifying, forbidding. The only time he relaxes or smiles is when he is in his garden or is talking about his exotic flowers, or alone with his minion.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Male adult Nightmare Cadogre.

Likes/Dislikes: He loves his extensive gardens and greenhouse. He grows many plants and a wide variety of flowers, but his favorites are Orchids, Dahlias, Ranunculus, and the various carnivorous plants. He employs many gardeners and expects perfection or very close. Mistakes can get them killed.

Other characters to include: His minion Nymeria the Mairra. They love each other and the Mairra is fanatically loyal.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: No one knows the real extent of his organization or all the interests he has invested in. He has several major legal holdings and businesses, and many shadow ones underneath. He is definitely the kingpin though most of his employees have never seen him, much less met him, and want to keep it that way. He has several people under him in key positions that publicly run his businesses.

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Mar 27, 2016 10 years ago
scout
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Oh man, I'm so glad that she inspired you so much!! I really enjoyed it, I think overall it's pretty great! Not to sound too nitpicky, but the only section that seems a little off to me is the first one. The rest of the story has an excellent vibe to it, but that seems almost too... happy? I'm not sure how to describe it, but it seems a bit disjointed compared to the rest. I really do love it though, and I don't mean to sound overly critical or anything! I can't express how happy I am that you were so inspired with her character, and the story is really quite excellent. :D

Mar 27, 2016 10 years ago
Pureflower
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Skula

I don't think you're being too critical. Reading through it again, I can see what you mean about her seeming over-happy in places. I made some edits and tried to scale back the girly voice. I didn't want to take out too much since she had a happy childhood and the incident with her best friend was the catalyst that caused her condition and the loss of her emotions, but if there are any specific lines you'd like me to change yet, I certainly can. If the story looks good, I have Lot and this was a standard complex story for 5 mil.

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Mar 27, 2016 10 years ago
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Thank you so much! The changes are much appreciated, and it's perfect now! :D

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