PoV: Mixed? From his point of view and from that of his owner/s Physical traits: White with a limp in his front leg that never fully healed.
Likes/Dislikes: He loves protecting his family even if his intentions are sometimes misunderstood. He has a dislike of water and is made fun of often for that but he does not mind. (Made fun of in a loving dog owner way) He loves Kimchi (and rice)
Other characters to include: His owners and there kids/other family along with the owners who raised him at first
Preferred Length: No pref
Anything else?: I want this to be a story of his first family how he was the runt of the litter. All his other siblings were sold or given away but the owners kept him. They were very loving and kind but one day misfortune found them and unable to take the grief thinking he caused the death of the owner he was abandoned. It was not his fault he was walking alongside his owner one day and a car came speeding towards them. He pushed his master out of the way getting hut himself in the process. Sadly though his owner slipped and hit his head never to wake up. He never left though no matter how many times he was shooed away it was not in his nature to leave no matter what happened. One day though upon wandering back home there was no one there to shoo him away. He waited for days and days turned into months rain or shine he waited. That was when a passing family on vacation noticed him there offering him food and water and most of all Kimchi. He still did not budge it was not his nature. They kept coming back though and there kindness rubbed off on him. He would never forgot those he had lost but he once again had something to live for.
I would love for this story to be set in Korea with words and such matching that setting if at all possible. (Like food words or things)
This is certainly a character I can work with and I'll be happy to do some research on proper cultural references. Could I please get the pet's name? It looks like that was somehow left out of the post and I need to know what to call him. :D
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Subeta was acting up when i tried to post so i probably forgot
His name is Jindo (He was never properly named and is called by his breed)
Can I grab a slot please?
Pet Name: REALiTi, however the character is called Jävla Setting: Average village in the high mountains, isolated from the world, surrounded by rivers with deadly creatures. At her 15th birthday she discovers she is a Oracle and it terrifies her because her grandmother and other ancestor had the same power; all of them were killed by the people as if they were demons. Jävla runs away to live in the forest and to learn more about her powers. Personality: She is coy and vain, was taught to be submissive and quiet, but turned out to be independent and wise.
PoV: 3rd person Physical traits: Here is a HA of her, however her skirt color is the same blue as her headpiece (the golden details are correct) - She is 15 years old but has this tired, deep-eyed face. Likes: Nature and gems. Dislikes: Violence, arrogant people. Preferred Length: Standard Story
It is great as usual! I thought you would like this character. And the two hours passing like minutes certainly has happened to me many many times. The line for the ending that just comes to mind and must be written right then - oh yes. That has happened often. lol It was really nice too how you said she gets the first cup of coffee and it tastes so good because its made with love.
I love Colorado. Always wanted to ride the train from Durango to Silverton. Would be a beautiful trip. It would be tough taking care of two houses, but if you had the money to buy them hopefully you could pay someone to watch over them. lol Its a pipedream. But one I've had most of my life.
The all-important writer's zone, where writers go to escape the world and write. xD I've only been to Colorado once on a trip home from Arizona but I'd love to see more of it. I have Lot and this was a long story at 3 mil.
First draft for Jindo. I kept the full story in 3rd PoV but switched perspectives between the old owners, Jindo, and the new owners. I hope this is what you were looking for. Please let me know any changes you would like.
First draft for Javla. I wasn't sure if the mother (or grandmother) had a name you wanted me to use but I am more than happy to change those. Please let me know any other changes you would like as well.
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I have no words to say how much I love. It is not what I was expecting, it is 800 times better! I love the emotional dept you put to it, and everything is just right (including the mother's name, I didn't even thought about adding it, sorry).
I'm so glad you enjoy her story. :) I have Lot for you and this was a standard at 1.5 mil.
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I threw in a little tip because your writing is worthless. I'm definitively coming back once I get more pets, thank you!!
Wow I really enjoyed that story I think it's very fitting
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I have Lot and this was a standard complex, so you have the option of 5 mil or 100 csc.
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Hi! I have three more pets. Here's the first two when you have time:
Pet 1
Pet Name: Silver Waters [pet not found]
Setting: Wherever you want to put her.
Personality: She is somewhat vain like all lains, but not terribly so. She would rather be behind than in front of the camera. She is usually congenial and good company, but is also sometimes too direct and impatient. She enjoys her time on location. She normally travels with the same crew that she has worked with for a long time, but every now and then goes alone with only her minion. She works hard, and tries to be patient, but if she misses a shot because of someone else they will hear about it.
Optional:
PoV: Whatever you think best.
Physical traits: Young Adult Common Lain
Likes/Dislikes: She loves her job as photographer with Subeta Geographic and travels all over the world, but limits her time in the Arctic, Darkside, and Saherimos as much as possible. She likes being clean and doesn't do well with extremes of hot or cold, but for short periods she can bear it and will take amazing pictures. Everywhere else she might linger and travel about, following leads for interesting subjects or locations.
Other characters to include: Her minion Rocque the Telerok. She loves him as much as he loves her. He is absolutely loyal, and protects her as well as carries her cameras and equipment on his harness with side leather bags. He also packs their food, and his of course takes up far more room, unless they are travelling with a crew. He is a very helpful and essential assistant that loads and unloads as well as sets up when they reach their destination, while she fusses over the light, settings, and focus for her photography. Heaven help the one that tries to hurt her or steal their stuff.
Preferred Length: Standard or Long
Anything else?: Nothing really set up, so whatever you want to do.
Pet 2
Pet Name: Gifyrra [pet not found]
Setting: Subeautique. She has a nice office with an adjoining workroom. Even tho it was meant for a human, she has adapted it as needed to herself and still has the rich dark wood furniture. She has a credenza behind her big desk that one spacious lower cabinet has been given to Jhari, her minion, with a big plush cushion for her to sleep on inside. Over the credenza is a beautiful lakeside and mountains painting by AutumnMoon. It's not a corner office, but she doesn't care. It has a big window with a nice view, a smaller desk for her assistant, and two chairs for anyone that drops by. Most of her time is spent in the bright and colorful workroom designing fabulous clothes for the patrons of Subeautique anyway.
Personality: She is intelligent, witty, and charming, and enjoys talking to people and telling and hearing jokes. She likes her workplace light and cheerful, but also where everyone works hard and is focused too.
Optional:
PoV: Whatever you think best.
Physical traits: Adult Blacklight Wyllop
Likes/Dislikes: She loves colorful fabrics and is proud of the well made beautifully designed clothes she creates. She loves precise detailed tailoring and flowy movement too, and often designs surprising yet pleasing combinations of the two. She has a weakness for Valentine heart candy, and if she's having a bad day her assistant or her minion will come up with some from a hidden cache and brighten her mood. She hates sloppy work in anything, clothes or otherwise, and detests oatmeal and therefore anything made from it with a passion.
Other characters to include: Her minion Jhari the Figidget that came home with her after a visit to her friend Quentin one day and has been with her ever since. She is very shy and hides on her cushion in her cabinet when others, esp manic and high-strung Esmerelda, come to Gifyrra's office at Subeautique. In the private workroom beyond however, Jhari is the little darling and pampered by the models and Gifyrra's assistant, Sergio, a Lilac Manchu. She helps when she can too, and delights in colors and fabrics. Gifyrra often lets her choose and coordinate materials and gets inspired by her pairings to design something new.
Preferred Length: Standard or Long
Anything else?: Have fun. lol
First drafts for Silver and Gifyrra. As always, please let me know if there are any changes you would like. :D
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Love them! So good. You are a wonderful writer and always spot on. Thank you!!! Please send trade.
Couldn't wait. lol Here is my next pet:
Pet 1
Pet Name: Cefin
Cefin
Setting: Delphi. He and his wife and a number of craftsmen friends built their pretty blue stone Victorian house with spectrum whimsical trim and wide covered wrap around porch years ago. They also built his large work shop and her studio to the side. Flower beds circle the big trees and house and welcome visitors along the walkways. A vegetable and herb garden grows its bounty in the back by the kitchen door. In the back yard is also a pretty potting shed that matches the house, and a chicken coop with Pessanka hens that lay colored eggs. A white fence runs the perimeter of their property, with climing roses, trumpet vines, and honeysuckle covering most of it. A moon gate built into an arched arbor at the sidewalk is the entrance. Morning Glories run riot over the arbor, and she keeps the seeds to plant the next spring every year.
Personality: He is happy. He whistles and dances to music while he works.
Optional:
PoV: Whatever you think best.
Physical traits: Adult Spectrum Chai.
Likes/Dislikes: He loves his wife and family, and to carve and sculpt, and uses anything from driftwood to ice that is frozen for a party, but mainly likes working with different kinds of stone. Any big stone or marble sculptures are done on consignment. The rest is at his whim but it all sells well. His favorite fruit is peaches, and he calls his wife that because she is the sweetest peach he ever met. They enjoy taking naps in the hammocks on the porch. He really hates it when he messes up a sculpture, esp if he can't fix it, and has to start again. But he looks at it like a mixed blessing, because often he goes in a different direction and he ends up liking it better.
Other characters to include: His minion Kyria the Kiteli and his wife Ryn that he calls Peaches, also a Spectrum Chai, and her minion Dodger the Artikat. He says his wife is the sweetest, nicest, brightest, and prettiest Chai on the planet and that her voice puts songbirds to shame, and he was forever blessed when she married him.
Preferred Length: Standard or Long
Anything else?: They have a shop on the boardwalk that Peaches runs where they sell his carvings and sculptures, and her and Dodger's paintings. When she gets in the mood she also makes jewelry from shells and woven grass handbags, and also sells those. They have five grown and married kids and three grandchildren. Their youngest kid has twins on the way. Three of the kids live fairly close and they get together often. The other two live close to each other in Centropolis but still come home on the major holidays and any time they can. Cefin and Peaches take a vacation once in awhile and go visit them too.
I have Lot for you and these were a standard and long for a total of 4.5 mil.
I will very likely have Cefin's draft for you this weekend. It is currently hovering around 5 below zero and I have no desire to go outside right now. A perfect weekend to stay in and write. :D
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First draft for Cefin. As always, please let me know if you would like any changes. :)
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Wow you're fast! It's marvelous. Laughed over her having to buy squirt bottles of soap because he would carve the bars. I was thinking something like that but didn't put it in. Wonderful. Set up a trade please! Thanks.
That's one thing I remember from art classes in high school, bringing in bar soap to carve. xD I have Lot for you and this one was a long at 3 mil.
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Pet Name: Kelsy
Setting: A standard-foresty-forest.
Personality: She is quiet and shy, but extremely wise and insightful
Optional:
PoV: 3rd person please. :)
Physical traits: Sort of a fox-wolf mix. Like a wolf, but more submissive.
Other characters to include: I'd like Noemy (other pet) to be in the story.
Preferred Length: A long story should be enough, but if you have a sudden stream of ideas, go ahead and make it longer. :)
Anything Else?: This is completely yours to do whatever you want about it. Just make sure it's nature related and be free with whatever you want to do. :)
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