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Feb 10, 2016 10 years ago
Chrysariel
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I have three new pets. Here is the first one, when you have time.

Zyrix

Pet Name:Zyrix

Zyrix

Setting: Chronos' temple in the mountains with inhabited caverns below. Many places in the temple on the walls are large versions of a clock with Roman numerals and gears showing, and a smaller version is in every cavern. Zyrix lives and works in one of the caverns very close to the surface with an outside entrance. His living area is comfortable and spacious, with bookshelves full of books and timepieces of many kinds and ages. A large stone fireplace provides warmth and has the normal grate as well as a cauldron and oven for cooking in the kitchen. The workroom has a large worktable and a desk, with shelves of parts for repairing and building watches and clocks. There is also an assortment of saws for cutting wood and a large rack for storing planks of various types of beautiful wood. On one wall is a pegboard system for tools and beside it a workbench. Both areas are warmly lit with magic glows.

Personality: He has a forceful personality that demands respect, and he notices everything whether he shows it or not. When he enters a room everyone knows without him saying a word because his presence is felt. He is fairly quiet and keeps mostly to himself, except for duties or prayer in the temple. He will also speak to those wishing his craftsmanship or needing advice, but is not at all garrulous. He is patient to a point, but beyond that he can wither with a glance. He is not truly cruel, but he can seem unfeeling, yet his few real friends know they can always depend upon him.

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PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: The Common Experiment

Likes/Dislikes: He loves being a Priest for Chronos, and was destined as such as soon as he was born. He also loves timepieces of all types and kinds, and repairs and builds them for anyone, taking part of the proceeds for himself and the rest is donated to the temple. He will also accept reasonable trade in well crafted goods or expertise for his services. He loves fine clockworks and the feeling of beautiful wood in his hands. He despises those that don't care for their clocks and hates to see any timepiece in bad or esp ruined condition. He loves lemon cakes, and likes just about anything made with lemon, likes grapes but can't stand raisins.

Other characters to include: His minion Izzara the Ixtove, who helps him a lot in the workroom. He has two acolytes that assist in his priestly duties, and another one that is learning his craft and in whom he sees potential that he has only recently begun to teach.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?:

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Feb 11, 2016 10 years ago
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First draft for Zyrix. I don't know that I've ever written a priest-type character before. xD I take it Cronos is more part of a pantheon rather than a single deity so I made him a "Lord of Time". Please let me know any changes you would like.

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Feb 11, 2016 10 years ago
Chrysariel
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It's awesome! I love it. Lord of Time is exactly what I wanted. Neat that a Priest is new for you. I took one look at him and thought that is what he is. Chronos came to me when I found that old clock pic and made it dark green to match Zyrix. Thought it very cool. Sorry was very sick yesterday so did not answer, and not here long today probably, but glad to be feeling better. Ugh. Have two more pets to write up, but no energy at the moment. Please set up trade for Zyrix, and I'll send the others along when I can. Thanks!

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Feb 11, 2016 10 years ago
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Sorry to hear you've been sick. :( Seems to be going around everywhere right now. I have Lot for you and this one was a standard at 1.5 mil. For the next two, I should let you know that I'm going to be very busy this weekend, but I may not work Monday which would give me a full drafting day. I would definitely have drafts for you within the next few days...I just may be a bit slower than usual due to real life.

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Feb 11, 2016 10 years ago
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Sent offer. Thanks! I never mind waiting of course, but I will try and have the details for you soon so that you can work on them whenever you have time.

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Feb 12, 2016 10 years ago
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do you have any slots open? 8D

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Feb 13, 2016 10 years ago
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I do have slots open. I actually have Monday off work so I'll have good drafting time the next couple of days. :) I'll go ahead and put you on my wait list and I can get you slotted as soon as I have your form.

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Feb 15, 2016 10 years ago
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Hi! Two more pets when you get a chance. Thanks!

Silazia

Pet Name:Silazia

Silazia

Setting: North and west of Arctic Frost, in the realm of the magical Elven Snow Queen with mountains as far as the eye could see with tall timbered forests below the tree line and peaks in perpetual frost above. The forests have deep long winters, yet still enjoy the other seasons as well, and where many glacier creatures make their homes. The mountain tops where snow blankets the earth year round in sparkling white, and the Snow Queen’s ice castle stands glittering in the sun. A beautiful dream land of deep cold where the sky streams different colors that seem to dance to music of their own making; half the year in daylight and half in night.

Silazia's lair is a cavern with a few attached smaller caves, one of many in an enormous cave system that partially rings the castle. She has made it quite comfortable and homey, mostly for her dragon form, but also has a separate section to suit her humanoid form with a large library, furniture, kitchen, and fireplace. There are numerous mementos scattered about in a pleasing array to the eye gathered from her travels. She has luxurious space set aside for her minion in both sections, with complete comfort for him in mind. She of course has a treasure in another cave that she loves to sleep on and guards it and the rest of her lair with magic as well as clever physical traps and tricks.

Personality: She is very smart, cunning, and somewhat vain, but also quite interesting to talk to. She has been to most of Subeta in one form or another and is fascinated by the different cultures; ways of life, food, entertainment, and traditions. She has friends in all walks of life, and enjoys visiting them. A very few special ones are welcome in her lair in return at any time, though such visits are quite rare.

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PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Female adult Glacier Rreign. Has inherent shapeshifting, telepathic, psionic, and magical abilities, and has strengthened and diversified these through experience and study and with training from the Snow Queen.

Likes/Dislikes: She loves to read and learn new things in many subjects, esp anthropology. She loves magic in all its variety, both in practice and theory, and is very adept at using it to her own purposes. She is very loyal to Sérëdhiel and loves her and will do just about anything for her, just like the myriad of other glacier creatures, including other Rreigns, in the realm. She has a real fondness for bread, and loves to cook and bake many recipes from around the world. Exceptions are anything with oatmeal and peanut butter. She just can't stand them. As a dragon, she also of course loves gems, jewels, gold and other precious metals and adds to her treasure often.

Other characters to include: Her minion, Spirit the Sparalis and the beautiful and benevolent Snow Queen Sérëdhiel (pronounced Sare-ay-thee-ell). (See https://subeta.net/petinfo.php?petid=684183 for image - but with pointed ears - and mention in the story.)

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: She visits her friends often through telepathy, and physically sometimes as she can.

Zariel

Pet Name:Zariel

Zariel

Setting: Darkside

Personality: Moody, curious, always looks for advantage in any situation, likes to know about everyone else while remaining an enigma herself.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult female Darkmatter Mahar.

Likes/Dislikes: Loves to create sculptures with metal, ore, glass, gems and plastic pieces. They are sold in Centropolis for high coin and some are on display in the museum at Delphi. Some are huge and add dimension either outside or inside large modern lobbies of skyscrapers and public buildings. The midsize or small are sold by art dealers and grabbed up by collectors. She loves using a plasma torch. Works as metalsmith as well, designing/molding/welding all kinds of things for her customers, though this has become secondary to her sculpture.

Other characters to include: Her minion Spook the Hugin, who likes to observe and basically spy on anyone that catches her interest, and keeps Zariel informed of any goings on around her.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Have fun. lol

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Feb 15, 2016 10 years ago
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First drafts for Silazia and Zariel. Please let me know any changes you would like. :)

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Feb 15, 2016 10 years ago
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Love them, thanks!

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Feb 15, 2016 10 years ago
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Skula

I have Lot and these were a pair of standards for a total of 3 mil.

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Feb 15, 2016 10 years ago
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Made offer, and thanks again! Happy Survival. lol

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Feb 15, 2016 10 years ago
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Hello!

Pet Name: The Ice King Setting: Adventure Time! Personality: The Ice King

PoV: First, please! Preferred Length: I was thinking the standard length 1.5m option, however I'm happy to roll with whatever works out.

Anything else?: So can I assume you've heard of Adventure Time? (If not let me know and I'll go into more detail). I'm looking for a short fictional piece about his next plan to kidnap princesses. I'm happy for it to be done either in continuous prose or in a more of an instructional/note to self way. So like he could write

Plan A; Materials: Ice cage, penguins, bait, etc. Method: 1) Lure princess with bait. 2) Capture princess

Does that.. make sense?

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Feb 16, 2016 10 years ago
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I can't say I'm familiar with Adventure Time but by glancing at a few pages, I think I can work with your idea quite well. I really like the idea of a "note to self" type of story and I have a good idea of where to take this. If you have any specific episodes you'd like me to focus his plans around, links would be very helpful. Otherwise, if you could give me just an overview of some of the Ice King's previous plots and also the names of other Princesses? (I do know about Bubblegum from glancing through a synopsis of the pilot episode.)

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Feb 16, 2016 10 years ago
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AAA I'm so sorry I have been crazy busy, do you mind if I fill the form tomorrow? I understand if you have no more slots open. 8c

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Feb 16, 2016 10 years ago
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First draft for Ice King. Sorry for the wait. This weekend was unexpectedly busy. I was able to watch a few Adventure Time episodes and I think I've captured Ice King's personality, though I will be happy to make any changes to the details.

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Feb 21, 2016 10 years ago
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Ah, that's perfect! Sorry I forgot to reply to the other post, I'm a derp! Can you make a trade? :) x

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Feb 21, 2016 10 years ago
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I've got Lot for you and this was a standard at 1.5 mil. :)

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Feb 26, 2016 10 years ago
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Can I grab a slot please? c:

Pet name: Groblen Setting: Groblen was born in Centropolis, he is a human. His family was not too poor, but they had hard times. Growing up he struggled with a lot of ordinary problems, like bills to pay and mental health issues caused by the pressure of life, it was too much for him and he gives up, taking away his own life. However he comes back as a zombie (can happen to anyone buried in the shadowglen graveyard) and have to live in the underground. He killed himself with a shot to the jaw, so he doesn't have it (petty much like the graveyard serpenth), making his (after)life a lot harder; The only way he can communicate is by writing, so he ends up developing a passion for writing and reading. Personality: Very reserved and quite, doesn't have any real friends at all, his family doesn't know he is now a zombie. He doesn't really mind it, he's happy now that he doesn't need to worry about all the problems of human life (going to college, finding a job, expectations to meet up to, etc...) PoV: First please, it would be cool if it sounded like he is writing about himself! Physical traits: The only important things are that he doesn't have the jaw and that he is quite strong

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Feb 27, 2016 10 years ago
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First draft for Groblen. I tried to give selections from both his human and undead lives. Please let me know if there are any changes you would like.

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