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Updated draft for Nila. Easy enough to fix. :) I have Lot for you and this was a standard at 1.5 mil.
First draft for Vithre. As always, please let me know if there are any changes you would like. :)
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When I go into writing mode, I sort of forget the rest of the world exists. xD I have Lot for you and this was a standard at 1.5 mil.
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I can just say writing mode is amazing I try my hand at short stories but never could produce anything as detailed as this!
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It definitely takes practice and patience to get to that high detail level of writing. I've been working on my writing skills for nearly 10 years and there are still times when I'll scrap a story because it doesn't turned out the way I want it to. If you do a little writing every day though, you'll be amazed at how far you'll come in even one year.
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Hello, it's me again :D
Would you maybe be up for some proofreading, again?^^ This time it would be Chet's story
Thank you so much in advance :D
Your spot on writing every day is a good practice!
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Proofreading for Chet. This was a short and very straight forward editing piece so I'd be fine with 300k. I put up Lot for you.
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Offered - thank you so very much again^.^
Hello!! I'm back and I'd love to grab a sketch slot please?
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Pet name: Triumph (of) - the character is called "Milan". Setting: Milan is androgynous and genderless, they were abandoned by their parents and grew up in a orphanage and was never adopted - it wasn't a living nightmare, but it also wasn't a dream. For some unknown reason, Milan ages very slowly, he is now about 80 years old but he looks exactly the same as when they were 20 years old. Besides that Milan lives a normal life, they have a normal work and a normal house - but this "never ages" thing got to them, they got paranoid and after sometime they got "lost in time", they forgot who they were, their gender, their true name and etc. Now Milan takes advantage of their forever-good-looking-face to be a "Don Juan" - They're always around making someone fall in love with them, but they mean no evil, they just want someone to love them and find in them something they can't find by themselves, and they think it only can happen through love - and he will be forever in this search, breaking hearts and leaving scars. (If anything here is confusing please let me know, my english is not good). Personality: Happy, full of hope, charming, fool, desperate. PoV: In this case I really don't know. I think 3rd PoV would be better, but if you feel like writing in 1st, go ahead! Physical traits: Click for their avatar! - Obviously Milan is a biological male, but they don't identify as any gender and dress as androgynous. Preferred Length: lmao I don't really know again - I think a sketch would be enough since there isn't a big story there, but if you feel like doing something bigger, once again go ahead please. Anything else?: Please if you have any doubt contact me, tyvm!!!
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I'll go ahead and claim a slot. 8D
Pet Name: Guang PoV: first. Setting: Guang is a 4 tailed spirit fox, who wanders in snowy forests, guiding victims of the cold/any casualties that happen in the forests, to the "light", the ones who deserve it of course. Personality: he got lost from his family when he was still a puppy, but he found himself at home again when a man adopted him, saving him from the cold. both of them went hunting one day but ended up drowning in a lake, and they didn't make it. the reason was unclear and he still doesn't know how, but he didn't "die", he became a guide to those in need, dead or alive. to show the pure of heart the right way. his behavior is calm, he likes to observe everything around him Physical traits: Guang is a skinny snow fox, with 4 tails. he moves rather fast. Likes/Dislikes: he adores snow, specially when it's pouring. Other characters to include: none. Anything else?: not really, a standard story should do it. he doesn't really have any dislikes, hence why I didn't say anything about those. let me know if something's unclear and I'll get back to you asap. also if you have any suggestions about the story, let me know and if I like it, we can possibly add it to the story. 8)
May I ask for a two more slots?
Pet 1
Pet name: Zearo
Setting: Desert Deployed
Personality: Brave, Leadership potential, courageous, Loyal to those he loves.
POV:
Physical traits: Anthromorphic Archan, Green eyes, buzz cut hair style. Army flight uniform.
Likes/dislikes: relaxing with family and friends/dishonor and treason.
Other characters to include: Minion; scout (his all time guardian and eyes in the skies)
Anything else: Pilot of the famous Apache’, and Blackhawks of the Army. Been on numerous deployments and air strikes.
Preferred length: Standard
ZeAro
Pet 2
Pet name: Bernadettera
Setting: Bakery (Sweets n’ Things) is her bakery’s name.
Personality: Sweet, Lively, stern when needed
POV:
Physical Traits: Anthromorphic Anyu, left eye geen, right eye red.
Likes/dislikes: baking, lending a helping hand/Avoids personal confrontations in regards to her past.
Other characters to include: Minion Drank-ula (her helpful host)
Anything else? Is always seen humming a tune whilst baking in her store and with a smile on her face to greet her customers.
Preferred Length: Standard
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First draft for Milan. This did seem like a fitting story for a sketch. If you do feel more detail is needed, I can certainly expand, but with some characters less really is more, especially depending on what you have planned for their art. I think all my pronouns are correct as well. That's something I try to watch with genderless characters. :)
First draft for Guang. I'm right at my limit for a standard but I feel the story as it stands captures all the details. If you feel anything else is needed or if there are any details you would like changed, please let me know and I'll be happy to make those changes. :)
I've got you slotted. I may even have these for you today. I just got over a nasty cold so I'm feeling very energetic and eager to write at the moment. :D
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I absolutely like it the way it is now, thank you so much, no changes needed. ❤️ let me know when you set up a trade lot. 8D
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :D I have Lot and this was a standard at 1.5 mil.
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thank you thank you, going to offer now. may I go ahead and put the story up on his profile?
You are more than welcome to do so, though I always send a coded version of the story through smail once I accept payment on the trade.
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oh I shall wait then, thank you once again. c: