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Dec 4, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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Skula

I have Lot for you and these were a pair of long stories for 6 mil.

I'll be happy to slot you again, though I won't have time for drafting before Monday. I'm going to be on the road almost the entire weekend. D: I'm putting requests on my wait list until then and moving them up to regular slots as soon as I get home from work Monday.

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Dec 4, 2015 10 years ago
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Khan

Sent offer, and thanks! Hope you have a safe and nice trip.

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Dec 5, 2015 10 years ago
Lion_Crab
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May I ask for another story?

Pet Name: Kittfox

PoV: Third

Setting: Born and raised in Arctic Frost but travels around for art.

Personality: Somewhat shy, Optimistic, Inspired, an extremely good listener to those in need of a friend.

Physical traits: Anthromorphic Jollin with sky blue eyes. Was born mute so he keeps a small notebook with him at all times yet knows sign language too. A tan messenger bag stays slung over his shoulder.

Likes/Dislikes: Art, sketching, painting, you name it. Snow and favorite color is blue. Listens to most music without lyrics while painting or drawing, but anything he finds inspirational or fits his mood will do.

Other characters to include: Minion-Yuki (Female, name means snow in Japanese)

Preferred Length: Standard Story

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Dec 8, 2015 10 years ago
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Reggie

Hello, I don't know if you remember but you did the proofreading/editing of my pet Cletus awile ago. I just finished Reggie' prolouge and I was wondering if you would by any chance proofread same named for me?^^

Dec 9, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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Skula

First drafts for Indigo and Valyris. As always, please let me know any requested changes. :)

First draft for Kittfox. Please let me know anything you would like changed. :)

Edits for Reggie. I set up Lot for you and I'd be happy with 500k if that sounds reasonable. This piece of proofreading was straightforward and fairly easy to complete.

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Dec 9, 2015 10 years ago
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Khan

OMG these are so good! Thank you thank you. You make my pets alive just like they are in my mind. I esp appreciate the little touches - like Mirage choosing her bed and hissing at Valyris. Excellent. I really did laugh out loud. Please set up a trade, and add this one to the list when you can. I will send the other pet on smail. It said the msg was too long. lol Thanks!

Pet 1 1.) Required:

Pet Name: CobaltMoon

CobaltMoon

Setting: An amazingly clean boy's bedroom with en suite in his parent's home. It is crowded as efficiently as possible with a wall-mounted large flat screen tv, two desktops, three laptops, several game systems, all the assorted equipment that goes with them, and many different sized organized bins of electronic parts and tools. Somehow a bed, desk and office chair, two gaming chairs, and a small worktable manage to fit among the wall to wall shelves. A large locked cabinet with clients' electronics inside takes up half the closet. If it wasn't so organized, kept clean, and quite large to begin with, the room would be over powering.

Personality: He is fun, has a great sense of humor, is focused, very sharp, with extremely good dexterity and gaming skills. He has a natural ability and affinity with electronics and some with mechanics, and seems to meld with the DDO characters he plays. He is well known in spite of his youth with the gaming community by his online persona Scyrex. He is also kind and considerate with his family esp, and to a point with everyone else. He has been taken advantage of and doesn't like it. Now he sets limits. He still manages not to sigh or roll his beautiful blue eyes whenever his parents or grandparents ask for help AGAIN with the DVD player. At least not until he is back in his own room. lol They do reciprocate in other ways, and all benefit.

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PoV: Whatever you think works best.

Physical traits: Young Chibi Kumos.

Likes/Dislikes: He loves computers and gaming, and is exceptional troubleshooting and fixing any form of electronics. He is clean, efficient, and appreciates order. He hates electronic abuse and sighs as last week when one of his friends brought him a smartphone that they dropped in the fishtank and expects miraculous results. He also likes to walk at night with just his minion for company under the moonlight. He thinks about things, puzzles over problems, and sometimes lets off steam. It relaxes him and any stress is usually gone by the time he gets back home and he sleeps deeply.

Other characters to include: His minion Mazer the Moonos, that loves gaming as much as he does and assists him with repairs.

Preferred Length: Standard or long.

Anything else?: Because of his ability to repair, replace, update, or program software and hardware in any electronic device, he trades for other things or gets paid in cash or devices. Other than his first computer, and the furniture, he has paid for everything in his room himself. He does well in school in math and the hard sciences, but is not interested in biology, language, sports or literature, though he struggles through them anyway and complains he will never use them. It is truly amazing what he has accomplished because he has dyslexia and thus has great difficulty reading and with numbers. He has been through several programs to help him with this, but the greatest improvement came through gaming. (CobaltMoon is actually based on my son, though he is in his late 20's now. I even used his gaming persona. lol)

I don't really have a story in mind, but I'm sure you will brilliantly come up with something as usual. maybe just a day in the life type thing. :)

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Dec 9, 2015 10 years ago
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Reggie

Aaaahhhh thank you so very much :D You are so fast ❤️ runs off to make her offer

Dec 9, 2015 10 years ago
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Skula

These were a standard and a long for 4.5 mil on Lot . I will start outlining the new pair after work and I should have drafts for you by Saturday.

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Dec 10, 2015 10 years ago
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Apology for the late post. I love what you did for Kittfox. The part when the devonti finally meeting him and getting his signature is a nice touch too. Go ahead and set the lot up and I will gladly swing by for another amazing story! Thank you again.

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Dec 12, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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First drafts for Noctis and Cobalt. For Noctis, I hope you don't mind that I split the story into sections. The details you provided were separated and harder to do as a traditional story and I didn't want to waste that lovely description given for the setting.

For Cobalt, I will be happy to change any little details. (A favorite color being used for the bins, for example, or the name of Grandma's favorite movie with a Subetan twist.) When I do a tribute-type story, I like the details to be as perfect as possible. :)

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Dec 12, 2015 10 years ago
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Khan

They are excellent as usual! I love how you did both stories. Thank you.

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Dec 13, 2015 10 years ago
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Skula

I'm so glad you enjoyed them. :) I have Lot for you and these were two long stories for 6 mil.

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Dec 14, 2015 10 years ago
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Sent offer and thanks! Two more whenever you can:

Pet 1 Pet Name: Starflare
Starflare

Setting: Top of a mountain far northeast of Centropolis, almost in the Arctic, and an easy plane flight to SAI HQ. Spectacular views all around, even a mountain lake close by, but the stars above take the show. Clear and close in the thinning atmosphere, and unimpeded by any big city lights, the beautiful sky is easily observed by the naked eye. The Observatory makes the far side of the galaxy seem as near. (See her profile for the background.) The village not too far away provides homes for the families of SAI employees and the Observatory. A small airport serves SAI planes for the week long work shift changes and cargo, as well as a few weekly commercial flights in and out from Centropolis delivering supplies and all manner of goods. The village is very rural and kept fairly small, and security is tight, but one of the perks is very nice accommodations and even some luxurious appointments. Starflare's parents both work for SAI, as well as two of her brothers, and she is an Astronomer. Though young she earned her 2nd in command job. She lives in the village and works at the Observatory, visiting her family as all their schedules permit.

Personality: She is inquisitive, extremely smart, fun and relaxed, and excited about the wonders of space though she has never been there. She loves working with people who are just as enthusiastic as she is. She enjoys dating though she doesn't spare much time for it. Much to the dismay of her suitors. lol

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PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Young Adult Blacklight Devonti

Likes/Dislikes: She loves anything to do with space; her favorite aspect is nebulae, and she is mesmerized by auroras. Her minion creates them and will indulge her choice of purples and blues when he can. She loves her time on the monstrous telescope and enjoys seeing the known galaxy, but searches for new stars nightly. She also loves oranges, though they are specially flown in. She dislikes bananas.

Other characters to include: Her minion, Auroris the Revontuli, who creates the Aurora Borealis with others of his kind, at odds with Science but not with her. She can accept electromagnetic origins as well as the natural ability of her minion as explanations for she has seen both.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Have fun. lol

Pet 2

Pet Name:AutumnMoon

Blitz

Setting: Veta Lake

Personality: Charming, witty, high charisma. Could easily be a full blown con artist, but lacks the inclination. She can sell anything but only chooses to do so with her own drawings and paintings. She is sought after for portraits and they are not cheap, but the clientele of the resort community eagerly and easily pay.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Young Adult Harvest Neela

Likes/Dislikes: She loves to be with others during the day, but at night she goes to her very nice private cabin on the lake and enjoys the solitude with her minion. Sometimes she hosts small parties with close friends, but would rather attend big ones somewhere else. She paints portraits for a living, and is exceptionally good at it, but her real interest is the varied and lovely landscapes around Veta Lake. She is, like all artists, fascinated with the quality of light and reflection. Many of her paintings are seen in the well known gallery close by and are sold quickly. She keeps the best ones for herself however. She dislikes being rushed and can't stand rudeness, but most often her engaging personality gets her exactly what she wants and defuses many situations.

Other characters to include: Her minion Pooftail the Chichi.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Most of her paintings are done not only beautifully, but quickly and decisively, But some she has nitpicked over obsessively and never seems to want to finish. After a time of patient waiting, when Pooftail judges the painting to be long since done, he will frame it out from under her, knowing she won't linger any more once it's done. It annoys her but it also relieves her at the same time.

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Dec 14, 2015 10 years ago
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I'd like to claim a slot for two stories, please. c:

Pet One Pet Name: Pinkie

Setting: A young girl's playroom, filled with lots of plushies. Pinkie is one of them

Personality: Cheerful, outgoing, a bit naive

Optional:

Physical traits: She is a pink and white kanis plushie, her fur is slightly faded and frayed

Preferred Length: Standard

Anything Else?: At first glance, Pinkie and her friends are just inanimate toys, but whenever they have the room to themselves, they come alive. They do things like dance and have tea parties.

Pet Two Pet Name: Oberon

Setting: People's bedrooms at night

Personality: Conniving, savage, wily

Optional:

Physical traits: Nightmare Kumos

Preferred Length: Standard

Anything Else?: Oberon likes sneaking into people's bedrooms while they sleep, and going into their dreams. He transforms the dreams to nightmares.

Dec 15, 2015 10 years ago
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Percival

Could I claim a slot for one story? You do great work!

Form Pet Name: Anopsia

Setting: The remains of a research laboratory.

Personality: Quiet, scared, uneasy.

PoV: Third person

Physical traits: Completely blind. Trapped between living and dead, the victim of an experiment gone wrong.

Likes/Dislikes: She likes sour candy and tangy drinks, though she's had neither in a long time.

Anything else?: Small things to include, she used to be a researcher at the lab, and her former department head was the one who caused the meltdown that destroyed the facility. She's not the only one like her in the area, but she has no knowledge of anyone else around her.

" Okay, so you’ve made some bad decisions. You’ve hurt people. You’ve hurt yourself. You’ve stumbled through life from one self-inflicted disaster to the next without anything even approaching a plan. To which I say: welcome aboard. Maybe you’re not good... but you’re sure as hell good enough. "

Dec 15, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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The first of two batches of drafts. :) I hope to finish and post the second half after work tonight.

First draft for AutumnMoon. This one I did in segments but as a continuous story since in my mind I saw it taking place over a span of days. As always, please let me know any changes you would like.

First draft for Oberon. I wasn't sure if you had a preference for setting in Subeta or the human world so I kept a Subetan theme for the ones he visits. Please let me know any changes you would like.

(On a side note, you have some spectacular pet names. I especially love Danny and Raspberry. :D)

First draft for Anopsia. Thank you for the compliment. :) I always enjoy creating characters that fit the dystopian theme. Please let me know any changes you would like.

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Dec 15, 2015 10 years ago
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Khan

It's great! Can't wait to see what you do with Starflare. Thank you!

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Dec 15, 2015 10 years ago
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Maven

I didn't really have a preference for either world, so I'm happy with everything you wrote! Thank you, I'll definitely be back for more stories in the future.

(Also, thank you for complimenting my pets)

Dec 16, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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Skula

First draft for Pinkie. I did a little mixing of worlds with this one since it seemed more fitting for a room full of toys. Please let me know any changes you would like.

First draft for Starflare. I wasn't quite sure if you wanted more inclusion of the family but I figured since they're all adults and have separate lives, it would make sense for them not to see much of each other. Please let me know any changes you would like.

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Dec 16, 2015 10 years ago
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I love it! No, the family doesn't get together much. I like the way you made them different too. Perfect. Poor Quin. lol

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