I thought I replied to this ;-; Everything looks good, I'm ready to pay :)

Offer received and you should have the coded story in your smail. Feel free to do whatever you need to with the coding if you post on other sites.

Sounds good. That will be 4.5 mil on Lot .

Awesome, thank you! Take care and get well soon.

I am back in business at last! I may be a little slow with longer pieces these next two weeks because of Memorial Day coming up but I am ready and eager to take story requests once again.

Hey there, welcome back! C= Were you still up for doing some more pieces for me?

Can you do like fan stories? I need a unique story for Alice In Wonderland

I also need a fan type story for my pet Death Eater

Absolutely. :D Did you have a character in mind that you would want me to focus on?

I have done a few fan pets. I could definitely do a Harry Potter fan pet because I grew up on HP :D. As for Alice in Wonderland, I'm familiar with the Disney movie and I think I read the novel at some point as a kid.

Ok cool ^_^ Will go with Death Eater first and will order another later.

Pet Name: Death Eater

Setting: The Wizarding World

Personality: Orion is a animagus with the ability to shift into a antelope. He is very loyal to the dark lord and none of his subjects know of him. He is a master of stealth and shadow and also a master of the dark arts. He is unpredictable and unstable and that is why the dark lord uses him. He is mad and loves the thrill of the hunt the thought of hurting others makes him grin. He even once had plans to overthrow the dark lord but they were quickly lost to the shadows.

Optional:

PoV: First

Physical traits: He is a very tall man that always is wearing some sort of long coat or robe. In his antelope form he becomes skeletal his hooves turning bone white with bone showing on his muzzle. He has a partly bone tail red eyes and bone horns one of them being broken. He may be tall but he is very stealthy and good at pretending to be someone he is not.

Likes/Dislikes: He hates non pure bloods (he wont use the word mudblood despite being a death eater) he himself is not of pure blood but he has had a bad childhood and that lead him to beg and plead for his life and it changed him. The dark lord took him in at great cost to himself.

Other characters to include: Whoever i suppose

Preferred Length: Regular story

Anything else?: Your free to play around with his character this is just a basic outline. I want him to be evil but not fully evil like a man trying to grasp right from wrong. He enjoys pain but only because it helps him feel for what he has lost..everything.

Awesome, thanks! Everything I said last time still stands really. I'd still like writing with any or all of them, although I'd probably put Wes at the top of the list since you did one of Daniel and Tennant. I feel like it's easier to come up with material for Daniel and Tennant though, but by all means, whatever idea(s) you have goes!

Hello! :)

Pet Name: Hoggle

Setting: Hoggle lives on a snowy mountain in a cave by himself. There is a village below the moutain, but it is more of a forest atmosphere (not snowy).

Personality: He is gruff, ill tempered, unhelpful, and very distrusting towards others at first. Only thinks of himself.

Optional:

PoV: 3rd

Physical traits: I haven't decided if he will become a Glacier Mahar or a Glacier Jollin; however, when he is in his glacier form he has crystals on his body. But when he is around his treasure he turns gold and has beautiful gems instead like Gold Mahar.

Likes/Dislikes: Loves treasure, shiny items...dislike people

Other characters to include: A girl that is introduced that is very sweet and needs help, who tries to befriend Hoggle, but he is very distrusting.

Preferred Length: whatever it takes

Anything else?: He helps people get through the mountain or if he sees they are lost, but only if they give him something shiny/treasure in exchange. Or too bad. He comes upon a girl who is in need of help but she hardly has anything. She is very persistent and sweet. Maybe the help she needs is finding something very exotic on the mountain, that is a medicine for someone sick? Or of that nature. So they are on an adventure together (perils happen around them) Meanwhile, people have found out that he turns gold and gems when he is around his treasure, so they are trying to figure out how to sneak up and kill him in that form. For some reason, maybe a rumor of his treasure being stolen? the girl and Hoggle go to the cave but it is a trap. The girl puts her life on the line for Hoggle, he normally would run away as he only truly thinks for himself, but he has befriended her. He saves her and they are able to ruin the plan of getting them.

I hope that makes sense. XD

The first draft for Wes. He was a bit more of a challenge than Daniel/Tennant but I was in the mood for a challenge so I hope you like what I have so far. I'm sure there will be changes to be made and I welcome any suggestions.

The first draft for Death Eater. I hope you don't mind that I incorporated the paragraph you had on his lookup. I thought it would make a nice little lead-in. Let me know any changes you would like.

I didn't get your ping but I do have you slotted. I have my ideas pretty well laid out for Hoggle and I hope to get to work on the draft as soon as I get off work tomorrow.

I enjoyed what you wrote and im fine with you including what i wrote. It was just a little something but i lacked the muse to turn it into a story.

One thing though if you could made him seem more.. carefree..? he is the type to admit other are correct about him but it only made him stronger and such. he will not show weakness even if he feels it. Its what he would think but never say.

i like what you have though i just want him to to be like yeah you can call me a monster you may be right but i dont care (while in his mind he is like how dare you call me that?? dont you know who i am?? your all fools!!) Like how you have it now

Hopefully im not confusing its hard to describe. Right now he makes me think of wormtail in a way for some reason. I want him to be his own unique character. (Not wanting to bug you i just want it to be perfect im not trying to be picky)

An updated draft for Death Eater. I see now what you mean about him being more crazy with his inner thoughts but carefree in his speech...at least I hope this new round of dialogue portrays that better. Originally I was thinking he was altogether crazy, but I feel with the new dialogue his character is more balanced (and hopefully less like Wormtongue...that was not intended.) Don't worry about being picky. I like picky. I'm all about getting my stories right. :D

The first draft for Hoggle. Your little outline gave me so many ideas that I went a little nuts with this one. xD I'm actually just under 4k words but I will be happy to shorten any sections if you feel they are not needed/are overkill. I'm also happy to make any changes you would like.

Its perfect ^_^

(Im trying to think of a better name for him if its ok with you to edit his name when i think of a better one)

Oh yes, absolutely. Feel free to use any name you think best suits him.

I have Lot and this was a standard story so that will be 1.5 mil.

Hey! Sorry for the late response on this, I just haven't had the chance to sit down and write a coherent reply yet, ahah. Sorry if this seems a bit short, I'm just spacey and not talkative today.

I'm really liking it! I'm just gonna put comments in a spoiler box again to keep this from being too long in your thread, but it's not as many as last time.

I probably won't be able to fully look at it until this weekend. My brain hasn't been working right lately. XD But I wanted you to know I did get your ping. Thank you!

An updated draft for Wes. I see what you mean about it feeling disjointed. I split the story and put it in two parts. Feel free to put in subtitles or just separate the two sections completely, whatever best fits your plans for using the story.

I think my confusion on the dialogue came from the note I saw on Wes' preschool-level Italian but I understand now that his English is actually quite strong from his education. I have worked the dialogue to (hopefully) reflect this.

I also looked up some typical raw meat diets for cats. Rabbit seemed a logical choice since it provides health benefits and would be readily available with all the hunting Wes does.

I cut back the meter man's reaction to Wes' scars without cutting it completely because I wanted to make him the kind of nosy person who has to comment on everything. xD

Pet Name: Mitsuo

Setting: Mitsuo has just moved into a Victorian style house in a small town. It's the perfect place to house his walls of books and video games. However, the house has a secret hidden within: The house is haunted by the spirit of Whitaker.

Personality: Mitsuo is a very laid-back guy who prefers to stay indoors curled up in blankets. That said, he is extremely helpful and outgoing once outside his home.

PoV: Third-person

Physical traits: Mitsuo is a blue-skinned man in his early twenties with cat ears and a tail. His hair is white with the tips dyed spectrum colors.

Likes/Dislikes: Mitsuo is obsessed with books and games. Games include video games, card games, board games, and more. His only dislike is waking up early in the morning.

Other characters to include: Whitaker, the ghost haunting his house.

Preferred Length: Long Story

Anything else?: Mitsuo has an as-of-yet unnamed boyfriend who sometimes stays with him. Mitsuo is a librarian and storyteller who also sells books from his home.

If you need any more information not posted here, let me know~

Aah I'm sorry I forgot that I didn't reply to this! OTL

Anyway, the changes look good! I appreciate your thoroughness hehe. Thank you! Let me know where I can pay you.