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Jun 7, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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I got that space in. xD I have Lot and this one didn't actually top 2,500 words though it came close, so if you wanted to pay 4 mil I would be good with that.

That's no problem. I'm glad to hold the stories until you're ready to make the exchange, plus it gives me time to start planning out ideas for Bigelow and Stracciatella. :)

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Jun 7, 2015 10 years ago
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Made an offer! 4.5 mil, giving you a tip of 500k c: Thanks a bunch for writing for me! I'll show you his profile once i get it completed if you want!

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Jun 8, 2015 10 years ago
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Hey there (: Do you happen to be an Avatar Korra fan? The story I am looking to have written revolves around it, hehe.

Jun 8, 2015 10 years ago
Pureflower
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I was a huge fan of Avatar: The Last Airbender back in the mid 2000s when it aired but I'm afraid I'm not familiar with Legend of Korra. (I just got satellite TV back last month...I was living with local channels for a number of years.) I have done a few fan fic pieces based on summaries but I understand if you want a writer who knows the series first-hand.

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Jun 9, 2015 10 years ago
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Pet Name: Bashadra --- link to profile

Setting: I always envisioned him in more of a dry climate, like the african plains. Also part of the dreamtime, the "time before time" -- A place beyond time and space in which the past, present, and future exist wholly as one. Tribes-people could enter this alternate universe through dreams or various states of altered consciousness, as well as death, Dreamtime being considered the final destination before reincarnation.

Personality: He's fairly soft spoken and mild mannered, prefers to be alone. Because he assists with helping souls pass from life into death, and likewise from death into new life, he is very patient and reassuring. He does not register much emotion other wise.

PoV: Whatever you feel most comfortable with.

Physical traits: Tan pelt, salmon colored hair, markings, claws and teeth. Teal pawpads & nose . Antelope horns. Furless tail-tip. Shapeshifter, favors mingling the forms of a lion, antelope and dingo. (Art on profile, linked above.) He can appear humanistic, but typically does not.

Likes/Dislikes: He's very drawn to bones and any kind of shamanistic items, like masks, staves or potions. Things in his treasure chest. I envision his den to be decorated like some kind of crazy serial killer, Ed Gein-eqsue madness. But, not neccesarily in a creepy way. If that makes sense?

Preferred Length: Maybe something between standard and long?

Anything else?: Maybe something along the lines of escorting a newly deceased soul to the Afterlife, or leading a soul to be reincarnated into a new body?

Jun 11, 2015 10 years ago
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I have a question for you.

Could you write a story based upon watching a music video? I know it sounds odd but one of my pets is based upon a character from a music video [and a book] and I'm having trouble telling his story. Mostly everything is shown in the video, I can probably fill in the gaps that aren't shown or don't make sense; I just don't know how to go about creating a story without it sounding drab.

I figured I'd ask before filling out a form.

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Jun 11, 2015 10 years ago
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The first draft for Bashadra.

I decided to have him do two escorts because I wanted to show how he deals with different types of deaths. Please let me know any changes you would like.

That sounds like something I could work with. I've done a story roughly based off a Youtube video in the past.

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Jun 11, 2015 10 years ago
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Amazing!

I'll link the YouTube video..Here!

I want the story to revolve around the one in the odd blue coat [or the lead singer of the song]. In the book, he's known only as Princey. The other characters of importance..the red haired girl is Eveline, and the caped man is the Cardinal Syliban.

I'm sure I'm leaving things out, getting late here and I'm tiring. Any questions..just ping me and ask.

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Jun 11, 2015 10 years ago
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If you think you can write one based on a summary - I would love to have you write it! I will just have to get a description for you (which might take me a few days because I have exams right now)!

Jun 11, 2015 10 years ago
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It looks like I will have some rich descriptions to work with on this one. :D If you wanted to fill out the form and link me to a wiki page or fan site, I should be able to get drafting. I'll move you from the wait list to the first slot as soon as I get your form.

I will be more than happy to work from summary. Take all the time you need. I will put you on my wait list and as soon as I get your form, I'll be happy to move you into a slot.

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Jun 12, 2015 10 years ago
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You. Are. Amazing.

That story is fantastic. I see absolutely nothing that needs to be altered or added. The ending made me tear up. It's a great length and kept me interested the whole way through. You really have a gift, and I'm totally going to stalk this thread for when you've got another slot open up.

Tell me what I owe you, and it's on its way. Thank you so much.

Jun 12, 2015 10 years ago
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Aw, thank you so much. <3

I have Lot for you. The story was literally just under long (2 words off, in fact xD), so if 2 mil sounds reasonable to you, that should cover this one. I should have a slot open by the end of the weekend and I will look forward to working with you again.

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Jun 12, 2015 10 years ago
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I'll keep an eye out, for sure! Thanks again!! =)

Offering now!

Jun 12, 2015 10 years ago
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Pet Name: Laurence.

Setting: A party held in the Palace ballroom by the King of Grandomina.

Personality: Laid-back, quiet, observant.

PoV: Third Person

Physical traits: Art here!

Other characters to include: Briefly mention Eveline and Cardinal Syliban in the story if you can.

Preferred Length: I have no preferred length. Whatever the story happens to be.

Links: Wiki Page on the band

Anything else?: Any questions/concerns ping or smail me. If links don't work, let me know.

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Jun 13, 2015 10 years ago
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Pet Name: Araluen

Setting: The beginning portion is going to take place within the Spirit World and the second is going to take place in the 'normal' world where Avatar Korra is!

Personality: She is very driven and determined. She is patient most times, but can get a little snappy sometimes

Optional:

PoV: I would like it written in first person - as it is a story of her journey!

Physical traits: Her physical traits are actually on her pet page - if you scroll through her description, there is a space there & the main image on her profile (her human chibi) is a perfect example of what she looks like (in case you don't feel like reading, ha).

Likes/Dislikes: She loves collecting berries from the spirit world (hence her treasure chest) - it was a hobby she picked up, as living in the spirit world is kind of boring.

Other characters to include: None for this.

Preferred Length: Hrm....I am not 100% for the length. I would say a medium (or perhaps long-ish) length; I would like the story to tell the story and have it not seemed rushed (or confusing) but not too long that other users would be deterred from reading it!

Anything else?: So I figured I would give way more details (: So, queue the beginning of time: the first Avatar of all time (Avatar Wan) accidentally separated Vaatu and Raava and by doing so, opened the Spirit Portals up and spirits began appearing in the 'normal world' (I am unsure what this is called, perhaps you might know, I am blanking!), once Avatar Wan and Raava fused their energies and combined during Harmonic Convergence, they were able to trap Vaatu in the Tree of Time -- then the Spirit Portals closed, as to keep the two worlds separate from one another as they always were, BUT (this is where my idea for the story comes in) a village was trapped in the middle of the portals when they were closing and the village got trapped in the Spirit World -- this was Araluen's Village.

In the Spirit World, the villagers never age, and they discovered that they were trapped there. As time went on Araluen took to collecting berries, as waking every day and doing the same things became boring, she decided traveling the spirit world and collecting things would help. She eventually discovered Wan Shi Tong's Library (the spirit world library) and she became very eager to learn everything she possibly could...as she literally had all the time in the world.

She decided to teach herself how to bend, and after trying Air, Earth and Fire without success, she was thrilled when she could bend water. She eventually taught herself how to plantbend too, as water and plant bending were somewhat similar & she became a master in both.

Queue current time: Avatar Korra opened up the Spirit Portals and Araluen (as well as the other villagers) were now capable of leaving the home they have lived in for thousands of years. Most of the other villagers chose to stay within the Spirit World, as they were unsure of what to expect in the world, but Araluen decided to leave and go on a journey to find Avatar Korra and thank her for opening up the Spirit Portals!

So, for the story I am hoping the beginning can be about how the village got stuck and then it can be about the time spent in the spirit world (traveling, collecting berries, discovering the spirit library and learning how to bend) and then once the portals open maybe a bit about the journey to find Avatar Korra and the ending could be when Araluen finally thanks her for opening the spirit portals!

....did I give you enough detail/explain enough?

Jun 13, 2015 10 years ago
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The first draft for Laurence. I tried to work the detail around the video without just re-writing all the contents, especially as related to the female vampires. Please let me know any changes you would like.

This looks great for detail and it helps that I know the setting of the Avatar world at least to some degree. What I'm thinking of doing is a long story segmented sort of like a journal with Araluen detailing her time in the Spirit World and journey to find Avatar Korra through entries she wrote. (This style will allow me to go into details that take place over a span of time without the story getting over long. It's also a style that works very well when writing in first person.) I hope to have a draft for you by the Monday or Tuesday.

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Jun 14, 2015 10 years ago
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Pet Name: Wolfish

Setting: Whatever seems fitting. The night of a full moon starting out with his back story? The jumping to a guard selection test or something.

Personality: Wolfish is just that..Wolfish. He is the alpha of a pack and has fought time and time again to keep his status. He is known to all others as a man that is not to be messed with. He is strong and cunning not afraid to do what others wont. He looks old and worn torn but the truth is..he is even older than he looks. He is older than 200 years due to a dumb decision he made when he was young. He was not born a werewolf but he was made to be one. When he was young he sought out the path to immortality. He did find what he was looking for but not before paying a terrible price and becoming the one thing he hated most. He was a witch hunter long before he was a wolf he despised them for what they did and so he hunted them the wolves and the witches along with the vampire and any other supernatural being. He was lost after being turned and he tried ending his life many times but each time he failed. He eventually decided that he should put his new found powers to use and he funded a secret society nobody ever knew the leader of the pack was a werewolf. He made up stories to stay a shadow behind the society of new monster hunters. They were feared in all the land and as times changed to did they. He finally became used to his new life and he hunted the creatures from the shadows werewolf fighting werewolf. He would never be one of them he never would be able to come to terms fully. His pack is still loyal to him but there not wolves his pack are the ones in the society he trusts to keep his secret they help him run the program. They get cycled out on missions though and when that happens a new trainee is chosen and tested to find out if they are worthy to know who runs the operation.

Optional:

PoV: First

Physical traits: http://subeta.net/pets/Wolfish

Likes/Dislikes: He dislikes the fullmoon of course because it means he changes. He also hates all things supernatural.

He likes his secret guard if they tell the secret..well then you know what happens..

Other characters to include: A trainee that gets chosen and tested to see if they get to know the secret It could even be a group of trainees and the last one standing becomes a guard. There are two sections to the society basically those who know and those who have no clue.

Preferred Length: Whatever works

Anything else?: I might be picky with this one im not sure if this storyline will work but it would be prefect if it did.

Jun 14, 2015 10 years ago
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I'm loving the story. I only ask for one change..instead of using Eveline's mother, could you change it to use her father instead?

Other than that..set up a trade with the cost and I'll send over payment. :)

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Jun 15, 2015 10 years ago
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Detail changed. :) I have Lot for you and this was a standard story so that will be 1.5 mil.

The first draft for Bigelow. Please don't feel you have to rush on the design for Briny but since I had some drafting time, I wanted you to have a chance to look over the story. I am happy to hold this one and wait on Stracci's until you have more time.

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Jun 15, 2015 10 years ago
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: have i told you lately that i love your characterization of Stracci because omg i do so much I love it! I've had a bit of a bad day today but I will try to pull up a basic design for you tomorrow uwu bless you for being so patient and willing to work with me.

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