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Aug 19, 2022 3 years ago
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HELLO!!!!!!!

i do have some suggestions for you c:

  1. make "U hrair elil: the thousand enemies of rabbits." one line, and make it like

    U hrair elil: the thousand enemies of rabbits.

    so it's big (like the definition of prophet on, well, prophet's look up!)

  2. i do think the look up is a little bit plain; maybe play with the colors a little bit, even if you don't do any bg image? dark earthy colors would fit well imo.

  3. "so run for all your worth." i understand what you're going for with this line, but i Think it's normally "for all you're worth" instead of your? and even with the alternative meaning it does kinda look like a grammar mistake even if it's not

  4. your tc Could be expanded if you wanted (there are a few watership down items iirc tho i don't have em off the top of my head), but it's very effective despite its size imo !!!

  5. LOVE LOVE LOVE the minion choice + name !!! no suggestion there just wanted 2 acknowledge it ;v;

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Aug 19, 2022 3 years ago
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prOPHET my BELOVED.

aa thank u!!

i fussed with the headers / etc and i will. return to that.

will do!! earthy tones are a good idea.

yyyeAHH i went back and forth on that line, & im pretty sure?? your worth works but ye a very good point it still. looks like a typo or really is one asdfl. fixed!

thank you!! i usually do... very large tc... we will have to see if this smaller one survives pftlb.

i saw the minion and was like HELLO... OH SEVERAL MILLION? sp is temporary the joy of this matching minion is forever.

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Aug 19, 2022 3 years ago
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You might want to turn off the nominate, if you want to do more work on Elil, because if you change too much they will deny it for the Spotlight.

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Aug 19, 2022 3 years ago
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O, thank you!

Aug 19, 2022 3 years ago
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Hi guys! I finished Rosemarie years ago, but her profile broke during my hiatus and rules were added to require the pet image that I never addressed til now. I believe I've fixed all the bugs that were present on her profile but please let me know if you encounter any broken links or coding errors.

Also - would love to gather opinions. I thought about story segment at the end to tie everything up based on whether you win or lose the Pokemon battle. Right now it just kinda abruptly ends with the win or loss. I had to actively cut parts of her story in the past due to hitting character limits on the profile (and you'll notice that 90% of her story is actually images of text because of this lol), but there seems to be some free characters on her profile still? Do y'all think it would flow better to have a little blurb at the end celebrating the victory or mourning the loss?

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Aug 19, 2022 3 years ago
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W O W what a FANTASTIC profile i am HOLLERING!!!

did not see any coding errors or broken links on my playthrough, and gosh the CODING is FANTASTIC!!!

honestly, a little blurb at the end re: win/loss could be nice if you feel like writing it but god i think the profile stands EXTREMELY well now personally

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Aug 20, 2022 3 years ago
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oh my gosh, thank yoouuu!! I honestly don't even know how I had the brain power back then to organize it and put it together. There's so many divs that editing it last night after so long was so overwhelming hahaha.

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Aug 20, 2022 3 years ago
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hahaha I won the pokemon battle ^^ that was a blast!!

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Aug 20, 2022 3 years ago
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Yay!! Thank you - I'm glad it was fun! :D

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Aug 24, 2022 3 years ago
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Hullo again! I’m wondering how we feel about
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Aug 24, 2022 3 years ago
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How on earth do you keep having the cutest stories? That's rhetorical, please don't elaborate. x3 Veggiesaurus looks great; I wouldn't change a thing!

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Aug 24, 2022 3 years ago
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So good! Love everything. :)

[pet not found] won as a wyllop a long time ago, but I recently changed her all around. I'd like to know what you think. :)

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Aug 25, 2022 3 years ago
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adorable! love it, can't see anything that needs changing

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Aug 25, 2022 3 years ago
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thank you so muuuuuuuuch!!!! ^^ It means a lot! <3

And , it looks beautiful!!!! Ohmahgooness, the water animation is extraordinary

I'm not going to enable spotlight for

Anything because it exceeds the pg13 rating haha, but I think it's fantastic and the TC is my favorite thing lol, please enjoy~

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Aug 25, 2022 3 years ago
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Thanks! I love Anything. Very sexy! The tc is fun too. Well done! :)

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Aug 28, 2022 3 years ago
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I think [pet not found] is ready, any feedback is appreciated

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Aug 29, 2022 3 years ago
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Sir's name is perfect. Love the layout! Only a couple things

At the end of a paragraph is "serves him as a strength.***** " .....not sure what the ***** is for??

Paragraph starts "Images flashing through his mind." Whose mind? I'm not sure who has what addiction or who is saying what at that point.

Only other things is Runway Story is off centre of the box it is over (I know it's centred overall) but looks odd to me. Also if it's a separate image can it be raised slightly so the story isn't tangled in it?

Also I would LOVE the code for the mouse button change!! That's epic!

Great profile!

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Cat, I'm a kitty cat,
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Aug 29, 2022 3 years ago
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Oooh. I like that. A lot. I don't have any criticisms or suggestions to speak of.

Looking for some TC suggestions for

Trouble, and some feedback on
James
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Aug 29, 2022 3 years ago
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aah thanks you for the smart catches! the *** are supposed to be a line, I just forgot the line breakers before it, and I substituted "His" for the respective character's name as for the Runway and Story headers, they're supposed to be titles for the two different boxes (one with the avatars and one with the story) and I decided to put them aligned to the left of their respective boxes

thank you very much!! I'm not good with TCs but here are a few suggestions for Trouble: I didn't have time to read James story yet but I'll edit this post when I can ;o; but I REALLY like the profile background

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Sep 3, 2022 3 years ago
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REALLY love trouble tbh, as for tc suggestions may i direct you to the tc of my own graveyard neela,

Sick :b

as for james, i also love him!!! i LOVE that you've made pets of some of your ttrpg characters, it makes me want to do the same!! agree on the bg being banging but honestly for both of them playing around with some fonts from fonts.google.com might add some character? it's not Bad now, just could potentially use some spicing up imo?

also, for some tc suggestions, i'll direct you to another of my pets, my own angelic boi,

Beheld!! also, this one:

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