Welcome. :)

I think I'm finished? Just not sure if i need to seperate the 'spoken' text?

I had to make some edits for

Hi! You need to credit the author of the story, even if it was you. Also, I saw a few tiny things in the story, which I loved, by the way. :)

1. The ears pointed forward as they recognised s/b Their ears pointed forward as they recognized
2. A calf was licking crumbs of Hilda's coat s/b A calf was licking crumbs off of Hilda's coat
3. wand before it bursted out of her hands s/b wand before it burst out of her hands
4. felt very dizzy and a stinging headache. s/b felt very dizzy and had a stinging headache.
5. A squeel left her mouth s/b A squeal left her mouth
6. but the shame and embarrassed of her s/b but the shame and embarrassment of her
7. The calf blink and laid down next to her s/b The calf blinked and laid down next to her

So good! It made me cry, thinking of all the pets that blessed my life for the time they were here. Just a couple little things:

1. staying in their home, they brought me home a shiny new collar. s/b staying in their home, they brought me a shiny new collar.
2. Two parents, and 2 young girls s/b Two parents, and two young girls

Thank you ill edit it now!

Nominated! Good luck with Spotlight. :)

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Hi! I hope [pet not found] is ready. Please look him over and let me know what you think. Thanks!

looks REALLY good!!! the only thing maybe is that i'd switch the ~'s for maybe like, storm cloud or lightning emojis? i REALLY like how the bg on the story becomes opaque when you hover over it so it's easier to read!!!

(also, nominated ;3)

A storm emoji! Never thought of that. What a cool idea. I tried lightning, but the yellow stood out too much. Ended up with a storm cloud with rain. Thanks a lot! :)

Thank you so much! <3

You're welcome and already nominated. Good luck with Spotlight. :)

Hi!! I think [pet not found] is ready for the spotlight, any feedback is appreciated ;v;

holy WOW, what a story!!! I love it, it's so epic, definitely nominated! I love how I didn't really notice the tentacle behind the Lincoln Memorial until I finished the story.

aah thank you so much! it really means a lot n_n I'm glad that detail worked as intended haha

Oooh love what you did with LincolnLooker's profile. I did notice a spelling error where "as in in" should be "as if in"... oops haha my baddddd

thank you, it means a lot coming from you! I think our work pairs very well together <3 (hope I'm not being pretentious haha) I have corrected the little typo

omg I saw your name in the credits! Amazing collaboration! ^^

Ayyy I'm back again

I think Inure's ready for spotlight? We'll see :p

here she is!

howdy!!!

my thoughts are not very coherent at (checks clock) 1:17am but i will give you them in the approximate order that they occured!

the stats box actually kinda jumpscared me LOL i would almost recommend giving her a job if the job is gonna be listed on the side? take this with a grain of salt ofc since i'm newer but a pet being nommed for spotlight without a job (with the job being visible) makes it feel a lil unfinished to me Personally her minion's name actually made me laugh and at first i thought it was kinda inappropriate given the subject matter of her story, but then i realized: it's literally IN the story! about her having to laugh because if she doesn't who knows what will happen!! REALLY good again, grain of salt, but the friends being visible but having no friends makes it feel just a smidge incomplete i actually really love the little coding tweaks that have gone into this theme though one thing is that the credits box overlaps a lil with the main section at least on my screen. i actually had a similar problem with prophet, and i handled it by just putting line breaks in there to make it taller but thinner. just a thought! i really do love her though. her tc feels very.......... Comforty. like. self care-y. it's good

Thanks for taking the time to go over it with a fine tooth comb. I recently adapted her profile to the template I've used on other pets and I guess I forgot to make some changes. -Finally took out the friends and statsbox div (which are holdovers from importing from my battler LOL) -- thanks for those good catches! -Also yes haha--the minion name choice was a conscious choice :p -hmmm about the overlap... I'm on a 15 in laptop and there's a nice gap between the credits box and the main column; I get the feeling this is a screen size situation thinking I ended up editing something in the box for concision so maybe that takes care of it? Not sure.

Now go get some sleep, my dude hahahaha

I didn't see the pet until after the changes, but I think it's great now. I loved that it was a storm tigrean. So perfect for the story. Well written too! :)