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Sep 20, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

Ping me and I'll rate and critique your avatar. If you don't have the items you are wearing listed in your profile you may want to list them here so I can be specific (but it's not necessary).

Oct 23, 2015 10 years ago
monie
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does a pose

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Oct 23, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

The avatar itself seems pretty well done, though I think the layering may be off around the skirt. But the background is pretty distracting. A simpler background would probably look better.

7/10

Oct 23, 2015 10 years ago
Inari
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KuramaYouko

I tried something fitting for Morostide here :)

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Oct 23, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

First of all, I don't get the cat. I think the eyes make the avatar itself sufficiently spooky without the floating flame balls. So maybe get rid of those two things.

8/10

Oct 23, 2015 10 years ago
Zaphirite
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morostide themed as well!

Oct 23, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

I don't get why you have monster hands but not feet. I think switch back to regular hands. Also, I like the headpiece, but if you could find one without color (or with a less obvious color), it would look better. I like how dark you made it with the glowing eyes though.

8.5/10

Oct 24, 2015 10 years ago
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CatHolic

hit me with ya best shot (morostide also, probably better without the background?)

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Oct 24, 2015 10 years ago
Altaria
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No theme, unlike other peeps but still! :D

Oct 24, 2015 10 years ago
Inari
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KuramaYouko

Yeah, the cat was a leftover from the HA I had made before and I saw no point in removing it. But it sure looked odd on this HA here. Thanks :)

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Oct 25, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

Yours will actually work fine with a background, though I think the color of the flowers doesn't go well with the colors in the avatar. I think you have a skin on right now and if that's supposed to be part of the avatar, I would take it off because it doesn't go. Could you possibly get red or gold flowers in your hair? 7/10

The scarf is slightly darker than the skirt. It would be better if they were the same color. Also it would be better if you had a belt without a buckle. In general, though, it's very well done. 9/10.

Oct 26, 2015 10 years ago
monie
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Thanks for the feedback. It does look a lot better on a lighter background, although the pure white looks too simple to me :/ (in the wardrobe editor, the white pumpkin fog over plain black looks great)

The subtle layering on your background is gorgeous btw

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Oct 26, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

Why didn't you leave the white pumpkin fog on? I bet that did look nice. Also maybe and

Oct 27, 2015 10 years ago
monie
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You can only see it against a dark background, and I don't own one plain enough that it looks nice. Don't really want to drop CSC on something that simple, either. (Do you happen to know of any cheaper options?)

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Oct 29, 2015 10 years ago
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If you're still rating HAs, I'd love to have mine rated c:

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Oct 29, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

I like the purple on black theme. The corset and longstockings, though, are older art and don't look great. Maybe the purple longstockings would look better without the dark matter bubbles, but for sure you need a different top.

http://www.subetalodge.org/list_all/name/purple/layer/legs http://www.subetalodge.org/list_all/name/purple/layer/chest

6/10 right now, but with a new top and bottom it'll look way better.

Oct 29, 2015 10 years ago
thepastelbat
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I used that top simply because I had it, and the colour matched the glitter- I'll definitely look into finding a better one though c: I'll look through my socks as well, I'm sure I have some others- although personally I quite like the dark matter, I can see how it doesn't exactly match Thanks for the critique ^-^

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Oct 29, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

The socks aren't as bad as the corset top at throwing off the flow of the avatar, so it'd probably be okay if you kept them.

Oct 29, 2015 10 years ago
thepastelbat
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I found a layered combination of socks I like better anyway, so c: I changed out the corset for an all white one which I think looks slightly better (how I didn't see it before I don't know), although I still want to find an all new top regardless

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Nov 2, 2015 10 years ago
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hey! I took what you/others said into consideration, but i'm still not sure about brown leggings with red shoes or red leggings with brown shoes. I also want to cover up the weird gap between hair and mask, but these berries work better now I think.

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