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A more pronounced nose would go better and I would get rid of the aura (I think that's the creepy hand in the background) and maybe the dragon as well. Otherwise pretty good. 8.5/10
What cloak are you wearing?

on vacation right now. Ping me next week for a detailed critique. 8/10
nice bonfire avatar 9/10

Would love any suggestions I can get. Feeling uneasy about the current HA but I don't want to ditch the general concept :/
I love the background, the avatar from the neck up, and knees down. Not loving the outfit. In particular I don't like the fur. It seems so chunky and out of place compared to the smoothness of the rest of the avatar. 8/10

Thanks for the excellent feedback! Will definitely be playing around with some ideas.
I think it would be better without and I feel like the fur coat maybe stands out a bit much, but overall very good. 9/10

I think the bunny on the head is kind of weird since everything else is realistic, but otherwise it's very cute. 9/10

:) oh me too!! I'd like a critique <3
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The colors match well other than the eyes. Maybe you could try something like
Even though the colors go, it kind of bothers me that the hair hangs straight down and then there are lines down the whole dress as well. I feel like you need something to break up the lines.
Overall though, I like it. Also, I like that you went shoeless. 8.5/10

Haha I did not think you would notice my shoeless-ness! But thank you!! :) I think I found something suitable for her eyes in my wardrobe?? As for the dress I tried to add waist accessories or underbust items but everything seemed wacky and out of place. I wanted to remove the dress alltogether but reminded myself I built the purple HA because I purchased the dress in the first place whoops ahaha!
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