While I don't know much about the CW denial ect process, I'm pretty good with perspective, the dress looks skewed. Like....if she turned and faced you full on her skirt would be off center and to the left (her left) too much. Here's my redline if that helps visually I guess. Like you aren't super off, just enough to make it look like her tailor didn't do their job properly ;) ^ I think that fixes the perspective, but I'd love if another person who actually does know more about the overall process can confirm that redline would fix your problems.

wanna halp out?

I agree with Kirin's Redline. Maybe the top right side could come in a little more from there (just a hair or so) because that side of the breast looks like it's sticking out more than the other side. But other than that, that redline looks pretty great to me C:

I think it looks great, but if it gets denied, it must be fixed ): You already got a redline, but here is mine XD (done with... laptop touchpad... ) Mostly, the coat thing can be covered by the breast, and.. yeah XD It's just something you learn over time as you reference more. But you don't have to follow it, because I don't know what the dress is supposed to look like. Our right side of the coat thing could just stay where it is, if it's supposed to be like that.

pinging you all because each and everyone of you, has helped,thank you so much guys. Thanks k1m and kirin for the red line, I am very happy to know i just need some minor adjustments, i wasnt sure exactly but i will definately understand better now.

<3

I'd say something like Moonlight Frame of Memories ? ;P im lame with names too ahahaha

Id call it "Moonlight Memories Memento" but waijay's name was good too :)

thank you, both of them are great. looks like you both are on the same wave length. :P

as i love both, got to think about this. thanks again

Reflecting Moonlit Love Moonlit Reflection of Romance <- this is my favorite Mirror of Dreamy Romance Moonlit Mirror of Dedication

I'm completely in love with that BG btw ;-; saw it on your facebook! (If it ends up private expect me to be attempting to bribe for a copy because you have no idea how much I love the BG/CI xD)

can anyone help me with a denial I have? id appreciate it!!

it got called out on pillow shading, and grey lineart(however since i need to redo my lineart, i have it untoggled at the moment)

here is the original submitted -- here is what i did to it after

is my edit taking care of the pillow shading? and if it still looks bad, how can i improve it? thanks if anyone can shine some light on this denial as im not used to making wigs! thanks again

Pillow shading is referring to how you have each strand of hair outlined in a dark color and then have the inside highlighted. This doesn't take into account the actual texture of the hair or the light direction. To help I've toggled off the lines of a couple of the wigs I've gotten on site and hopefully this will give you an example of how to work without the pillow shading! [IMG]http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l77/Zombeeism/hairinside.png[/IMG] Ping me if you're still confused / need more help / want an opinion / etc [edit] click and drag to make that bigger / full size

thank you for the input!! I have to say i understand in theory but when im shading, im not sure if the pillow shading is gone. or if it improved at all.

i do appreciate your help, thanks so much

That looks a LOT better. C: You know, when I shade, what I typically do is block it out first and then start to shade the individual strands. I think I have an example of this... lemme see.... Okay yeah kind of haha not the blocking, but the kind of step by step So here is an each layer example; [IMG]http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l77/Zombeeism/Heirloomtutorial.png[/IMG] And here is kind of the difference between starting out making something look a little pillow shaded (left) as opposed to shaded with a light source (right); [IMG]http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l77/Zombeeism/Shadeasone.png[/IMG] (probably need to click and drag them to get the full size again lmao)

wow,that helps even more. I get it now. thanks for step by step process, your amazing :D

No problem If you need more help in the future (even if it's not with this CW) feel free to ping me. As long as I'm not super bogged down with work I will find the time to reply C:

HOw about Heart-Caught Moon? I don't know it's what popped into my head and seemed to fit your description. :D

thats actually really cute too. thanks !

You're welcome, hunnie! ^__^

chibiusa/princess lady serentiy tribute(sailor moon) commission--

I asked mesmer but i figure more eyes the better just in case she is busy?? Mind you, i cant make big repaint changes as it is merged(except for the lineart) hopefully minor tweaks(or even better, I hit it on the nose,and dont need to make changes) im a worrywart so i figured id ask for opinions since hair is still is weird for me.

hello, thanks for the advice. the wig got approved, im working on a new tribute wig. if your not busy can you look over it? i wanted to add shadow under the bangs but i didnt know what perspective would be best. or if i should bother at all?

here is what it looks like..and ill throw in the ci. when your free, can you let me know what you think. id much appreciate it but no prob if you cant/or cant right away.

I need to walk out the door in a couple of minutes, so I don't have time for a super in depth critique but I can say that the lines and shading look really good! The CI too! The only thing I'm unsure of is how stringy some of the curls look. they look a bit more like streamers than hair at the moment. I don't know if they have a ton of time but and are suuuper good at drop curls like these so maybe if either one of them have got a bit of time free they can give pointers. If not, I'll go tutorial hunting for you this evening when I get back! Just ping me again please so I remember because I get a bit distracted and forget! C: