Rate and Critique the Above HA
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Rate the above HA on a scale of 1-10.
Then give a critique. The critique can be good and/or bad things. You can also suggest specific items that might help. If you rate below 7/10, your critique should specifically state what needs improvement.
Example: 8/10 I like the overall color scheme, but the layering is a bit off.
Example: 7/10 The pinks don't match very well. Have you considered (item name) instead of what you are wearing?
Example: 9/10 Absolutely love it. Practically perfect. Maybe consider adding some jewelry.
Example. 6/10 Could use some work. It seems a bit disorganized, the (item name) doesn't really add to the avatar.
This is kind of a combo of the suggestion and what you like/dislike threads.
9/10
It's a bit simple for my tastes, and I feel it could use some accessories, but overall, it matches very well.
7.5/10 Maybe try the shirt over the skirt as it looks too non-crumpled to be tucked in. Or you could try another belt that covers the overlap but I feel the items might be too different to make it cohesive. I also think the fairy anklet is un-necessary but it isn't one of my favourite items.
9/10 I adore the theme, its beautiful, definitely get a background!
7.5/10 The frog seems out of place and the layering between the top and the shawl/neck wrap seems odd, but I like the overall feel of it.
7/10 I like the majority but I think eyes looking straight forward would be good and maybe a purple hue to the eyes
It's not very polite to rate the same exact avatar twice (whether or not it's on different threads.)
I like the changes you have made to this avatar. Other than possibly adding some jewelry or something to the arms, I think it's great. 9/10
I only rated again in this thread because this one gave the opportunity to give advice, sorry about that.
That's okay. I just want to hear an opinion from more than one person. :) Also, you can always give advice on the other thread too!
The matching is pretty well done, some of the color scheme seems slightly off, but it's hardly noticeable at a first glance (and is tied together when you further analyze it by the hair) 9/10
9/10. On the surface it's really well put together, but I think the eyes are jarring since they don't match anything else in there. I'd change them to brown eyes if possible, and perhaps add some dark red accents to your outfit to match the roses, other than the blood.
This is just my first attempt at trying to work with these fans, so I'd appreciate critique and item suggestions.
8/10 I think a brown belt would help break up the green and make the overlap of the corset and skirt a bit less awkward. Perhaps try and use a bit more of that burgundy from the hairclip elsewhere on your HA. Maybe a touch of eyeshadow would be nice.
9/10 I love the cyberpunk look you pulled it off so well and with great placement, absolutely radical. It is hard to find something negative to say but I think if you could build off of it as well and maybe get some effects for a foreground, ground, or background that maybe could develop a character to her.
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8/10 The warm tones are matched beautifully! I would, however, probably go with a background or add other elements to incorporate a little more of the golds and reds.
10/10, sooo pretty, which makes critiquing hard. The only thing I could suggest is adding a ground item, like an animal or something.
8/10 the Rolling Stone on her face really stands out too much, and I'd either give her a darker skintone or remove that item. Other than that, she is lovely, nice work
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Not bad I would die for any of those items but I think the puffy skirt you are wearing is to bright in contrast to the rest of the tans in the shoes, bow and hair. 9/10
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8.5/10 Very subtle and pretty. I think maybe revise the jewellery though. Perhaps go for a ring in the colour of the rose, maybe the argo white noise ring ad perhaps a more subtle anklet.
