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Mar 27, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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8/10 The face looks a bit harsh, not sure if that's intentional or not? I'm not a huge fan of this skirt, as the completely straight top looks odd to me, perhaps add a belt. Maybe a bit more blue near the legs area would be nice.

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May 5, 2016 9 years ago
Kenda
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6/10

I like the colors, but I feel like you have a lot going on with your overall outfit.

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May 6, 2016 9 years ago
Tenka
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7/10

The purple of the flower throws off the light down to earth colors you've got. I'd also swap out the shoes if there's a better choice - the lines of the sandals feel just a tad too thick compared to the rest of the outfit. Otherwise though it's pretty cute.

May 6, 2016 9 years ago
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Strawberry

9.9/10 The only suggestion I could make is adding some more, I'm not sure how to put it, Mythical shoes(something that has a magical feel?)

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otherwise I'd say everything is perfect. the layering is amazing and the colors go together nicely. I love the flowers in the hair, they really bring out the golden and yellow accent colors. Very, very well done HA!

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May 7, 2016 9 years ago
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9/10 Looks like she is about to skip down the sidewalk to a party. I think maybe needs a dog to go bounding along with you. And shirt is just a little not so much pink. Needs pinker.

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May 7, 2016 9 years ago
Maximoff
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Ratu

I don't actually get the theme. The preset eyes are not so good maybe you should try some make ups. The dragons are functionless(?) like I don't really know what they're doing there. The color scheme is scattered like it's actually should be black, white and red but then there the autumn dragon there laying with an innocent face like what? LOL.

Sorry if I sounded pretty harsh. I give you 4 out of 10. :)

Jun 6, 2016 9 years ago
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Ooh, interesting. I like the combination of the wings and the waist feathers a lot. The animal legs keep it from getting too busy, which is good because there's a lot happening with the background, overlay, and plants. I'm iffy on that aspect - maybe a simpler shirt or less of something would be better/clearer? However, the robe you have now matches the overall scheme well, and your matching/themes are always pretty good. 8.75/10? ^_^

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Jun 6, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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8/10 Love that hat, excellent statement piece. Not too sure about the collar or that little red piece layered under it, it sticks out too much to me. I'd maybe go for a ring rather than the bracelet as it seems a little awkward.

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Jun 6, 2016 9 years ago
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love it from the waist up. some grungy belts, and definitely busier foot/ankle items would improve it by a landslide. 7/10

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Jun 8, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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7/10 Colours look good but there's way too much going on. I'd try and simplify it a bit. Maybe lose a few ankle items and thing like the horns seem unnecessary.

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Jun 8, 2016 9 years ago
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Ravenhawk

Nice theme and I like the repitition of the red and brown color, but some of the art on the items seem very old, which I know you can't do much about but throws me off. Maybe try a different skirt/pant?

7/10

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Jun 9, 2016 9 years ago
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Florestina

- 9/10 - I really love it! I would maybe lose the Professor New Surf Headdress and the anklet. They're both distracting me for some reason!

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Jun 11, 2016 9 years ago
Maskros
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: 8/10 I really like the simplicity and cuteness of your HA. The only thing that distracts me is the wig. I wish the wig found some balance between its left and right side, as the left side (my left side as I'm looking at it) is a little bit too loose for my taste, but this has something to do with the art rather than the combination itself :)

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Jun 11, 2016 9 years ago
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Ratu

2/10 Simple but doesn't blend. It's pretty much a background and a ground item, the tiger. Plus, the tiger doesn't go well with the misty background.

Jun 13, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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7.5/10 It's a little indistinct with the mist and the gold dots seem a little too sparkly. I think the baby vampire fang is a little unnecessary. I think the hair piece could possibly be replaced with something a bit more navy blue.

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Jun 13, 2016 9 years ago
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8.5/10 I really like the colours. It fits together very well. I don't quite like the freckles, though.

Jun 13, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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7/10 Do you have a mouth under your lips? The layering looks a little off, I'd look for something that fits under the lipstick better. I think for a summery / springy HA perhaps go for a more tanned skin tone. And maybe some of that light gold for the shoes to help balance out the colours in your HA.

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Jun 14, 2016 9 years ago
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; 10/10 I love it I love how the dragon specifically pretty much determined your whole outfit (I'm guessing) and you made it work really well. Doesn't look too crowded at all, my only critiques are that because your HA is overall busy your blank arm looks a little out of place, maybe add some gold tattoos or gold arm bands? I know I have some in my wardrobe so I'll try to edit with the items later and it looks like you're stepping on a rug? Not sure if that's just a layer of the skirt you're wearing (which is beautiful btw) but it looks just a lil off. <3

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Jun 24, 2016 9 years ago
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Aspity

9/10 Ah, I adore the brown colour scheme! It's gorgeous! However the bow behind your head kind of throws it off. It doesn't work very well with the wig you're using in my opinion - maybe try a headpiece that is more on top of the head rather than behind? I really adore the presentation of it other than that - not too busy, but still complex!

Jun 24, 2016 9 years ago
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Behemoth Archangelo

Ok go gentle, I have just gotten back on this site after a few years absence. I worked with what I had lol. 8/10 I love the headpiece, I think the only thing I wish is that a little more was done with the body. I feel like with such an elaborate head piece, the bottom should not be super busy, but maybe just add a little more. Other than that it's a really cool avatar. Love you guys!

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