8/10 i love the rich colors, but i feel like you could make the face darker/more intense

10/10 no critique, you always have the best HAs!

9/10

Love the splash of pink you put in! I think you need darker eyes but other than that, you look amazing

8/10 Love the whole look of your HA. Though she could use some eyes and maybe a golden or brown colored lips. Loving the colors though, reminds me that Fall is just around the corner! :)

I'm not a huge fan of the sandals going all the way up the leg. Maybe add some tights. Also, the butterfly hanging thing detracts from the line of the dress. I like the facial expression.

8/10

Very pretty, although I feel like some sort of held item might add a little bit of action to it. 9.75/10.

I like the overall theme, but it just seems to busy. I would put on a simpler outfit (especially the skirt is busy) and maybe have it match colors better. Other than the outfit the colors go quite well. Also maybe ditch the arm tattoo.

8/10

Nice and clean... Solid color scheme, cool items. There is an overall "deadness" in the items you picked, for example the rendering on the skirt is flat, the hair feels really static, and the facial expression is really dull. It's very pretty, but lacks liveliness.

8/10

8/10 I like the theme and i thinks it's really cool how the wings match the tights, but I'm not a big fan of the shorts and the giftwrap(?) on the head looks a bit weird to me.

I like the theme, but it is super busy! Ditch the lyb sheer skirt and the tentacle ribbons and it will probably look much better.

7/10

9/10 as simple as beautiful, but somethings missing. I can't put my finger on it though. Maybe a bracelet?

- Hehe, just did the same for you in another thread. 8/10. I mentioned clothing with less-bold artwork, so perhaps something like the Fallen Fallacy Faith Vest? Or...Black Goffic Jacket, Black or Dark Gray Trenchcoat, Elegant Death Silver Embroidered Long Jacket, Shadowglen Privateer Second Map Piece, Embroidered Black Riding Coat?

8/10 i like that elfish look you have going on, but something about the legs doesnt fit, maybe the shoes? also what are the ears you are using i love them

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9/10 I love your overall theme, except I'm not a big fan of the mask. :P

9/10

I love all that pink together, but i recommend finding lighter tights or layering over transparent white ones so they fit a bit better

7/10 I really love the colours you have going on here, but those pants stand out like a VERY sore thumb. I'd suggest a softer looking blue for the pants or hiding them on a further back layer so you can cover over them to make them more pastel looking. Same could go with those ankle bracelets. Great use of hair layering though!!

I actually just saw your avatar on style file!

I really like it. The hair does a great job of tying everything together. I know the Escaped Aura is meant to make your avatar more Morostide-y but I really think it would look better without it.

9/10

9.5/10

I really enjoy the colors you have used here! I would try to find a skirt a bit closer to the color of the bottom of the wrap, though. I know it can be very difficult to find something that will match a color though, and if that was your situation, then you did a very good job working with what you had!

Really the only thing that kept me from giving you a 10 was how bright that white background is at the bottom compared to how dark the rest of your HA is. Perhaps you could make it more uniform by lightening the top of the back drop with something like the arid lightbulb? It will lighten up just the very top (and mostly the left) so it won't interfere much with your over all design. Or perhaps wou could darken the bottom just a bit with something :)

9.7/10 for

If Nightmare before christmas met Mad Max: Fury Road this would be it I see Sally in those rebellious themes with the dark nightmarish feeling. The only thing I'd think is the extra space in the foreground or ground could be (but doesn't absolutely have to be) played with, maybe fog or mist Possibly skulls or more blood. :D