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May 3, 2016 9 years ago
Johnny_673
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Perfection, as always. Nothing I was expecting, but much better. Do you want to make a bigger, more detailed ending? I don't mind paying more, I don't feel it's incomplete, but looks like you were limited by the number of words.

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May 3, 2016 9 years ago
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I love it! Can I request another story? One for Evalise?


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May 3, 2016 9 years ago
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I've made a few updates to the ending to give Polca a little more personality outside of the journal writer's description of her. If the addition looks good, I have Lot and this was a long story for 3 mil.

I'll be happy to slot you again once the current story is paid for and I have the form for your new order. For Leonie's story, I've set up Lot and this was a standard story for 1.5 mil.

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May 4, 2016 9 years ago
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Akaw

Wonderful!!! As always!!! Offered on the lot, thank you so much. :')

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May 4, 2016 9 years ago
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Khan

Next pet, when you have time.

Quillbo Baggins

Pet Name: Quillbo Baggins [pet not found]

Setting: Riverside (Shire) in his Hobbit Home. Flowers everywhere and shaded by several big trees; nicely kept and beautifully made. His pottery workshop is to the right with a connecting door to the house. He has a nice barn built into the hillside on the left next to his house that opens into a grassy paddock for his wife's small prize ponies and stores their two carts, tack, and lots of hay and oats.

[spoiler=Images] House:

Ponies:

Personality: He is cheerful and happy, loves his wife and children, good disposition, even temper, intelligent, artistic, and creative.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult male Lilac Priggle

Likes/Dislikes: Loves his family and proud of them. While not nearly as famous as his cousin Bilbo, he is quite well known for his pottery that is beautiful yet strong and can be used everyday. He makes everything from flower pots to mugs, bowls, and plates to fine porcelain vases. He also works for the museum on occasion to repair and/or piece back together assorted archaeological pottery finds.

Other characters to include: His minion Daphne the Danphe, his wife Glory, an Aqua Priggle, and their three young children, Quinbo, the middle and only son, Iris the eldest, and Rosie the youngest. The kids can sometimes pull something on their father, but never their mother. She always knows. Glory raises and trains small ponies to ride and pull carts. She loves paints especially, and has won many prizes at fairs with them. Her stock is well known and sought after.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long, wherever your creativity leads you. lol

Anything else?: Have fun. [/spoiler]

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May 4, 2016 9 years ago
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Required Pet Name: Evalise Setting: 1867 Personality: studious, takes learning seriously.

Optional PoV: 1st Physical Traits: 19th century: In 1837 (Victorian) she was 22 -teaches French to children -sews, embroidery -dances -learned music

Likes/Dislikes: reading and music, dancing... Other Characters: none Preferred Length: Standard Anything Else?: no


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May 4, 2016 9 years ago
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Required

Pet Name: Botanize

Setting: A meadow of various types of flowers.

Personality: Very sweet, soft-spoken, isn't really social with others since she tends to be around flowers a majority of her days. Will even sleep in the meadows.

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PoV:3rd

Physical Traits: here is a picture of her

Likes/Dislikes: /likes/

  • sweet and sour foods
  • napping amongst the flowers
  • making daisy chains/other various necklace and bracelets
  • whispering to the flowers like she has a secret
  • sunshine
  • rain showers
  • bugs

/dislikes/

  • loud sounds
  • people trampling through the flowers
  • super hot and dry weather
  • salty foods
  • crowds

Other Characters: Her minion, which is a 'crowned chip (the squirrel). Her name is Iris.

Preferred Length: Standard

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May 6, 2016 9 years ago
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Skula

First draft for Quillbo. I did a light reference to his inspired origins but I didn't think you'd wanted a story that was heavy on LOTR lore, since that would require a credit. Please let me know any changes you would like.

First draft for Evalise. I wasn't sure if you wanted the story to cover both parts of her life (at 22 and 52 years) but the way I have it set up now gives both her position at middle aged and a bit of background into her past. Please let me know any changes you would like.

First draft for Botanize. I didn't know if you had a nickname in mind but I can easily change the one in the story if you like. Please let me know any other changes you would like as well.

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May 6, 2016 9 years ago
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Awesome as usual! Love it, and the reference is perfect. But do you think I should include a credit?

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May 6, 2016 9 years ago
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oh wow, that was beautiful! I haven't really thought of a name for her, could you change the name to Talia? But other then that, it looks pretty amazing.

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May 6, 2016 9 years ago
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I suppose you could include a note that his character was inspired by Tolkien's LOTR (or The Hobbit might be more fitting.) I don't know that you need one for such a slight mention, but it couldn't hurt. I have Lot and this was a long story at 3 mil.

I went ahead and updated the name. I have Lot for you and this was a standard story at 1.5 mil.

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May 6, 2016 9 years ago
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I like it! My pet Airian needs a re-work of her story, if waiting list slots are available.


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May 8, 2016 9 years ago
Pureflower
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I've set up Lot for you and this is a standard story at 1.5 mil. I can work revisions on an existing story but you'll have to let me know if you want just section updates on existing writing or a complete rewrite. (Or I can do proofreading, if you like the story body but just want someone to check grammar.) I'll be able to slot you in a regular slot tomorrow.

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May 8, 2016 9 years ago
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A short story would be great. I've this pet forever and her story is incomplete.

This is currently what I have for her:

Personality:

Upbeat / Creative / Bold Eccentric / Charming

Body: Airian wanted to leave her foot print in this world - she just wanted to be noticed. Going out of her way, she did just that, and made her own fashion statement. Born into a family of fashion designers, Airian took on her own creativity and brought new products to the table. At the age of 17, she introduced her clothing line "Impargo" designed for adults and late teens. From bright and bold colours; to absolute subtle, she hopes to expand her line of clothing to suit the needs and ages of all patrons.

Can I also grab another story, since I'm here? This one will be fantasy for Adrina.


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May 9, 2016 9 years ago
Pureflower
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First draft for Airian. I'm happy to expand if there is anything else you want added to the story but this one seemed fitting as more of a summary.

I can certainly write another story but I would need Adrina's info. I read a lot of fantasy, so it's a genre I'm very familiar with. I can hold Airian's story and do the two in the existing slot or if you would prefer, I can slot you again.

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May 11, 2016 9 years ago
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I like it, thank you.

I can give you a rough idea of what I'm storming up for Andrina. She's a mermaid and has fallen in love with an angel.


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May 12, 2016 9 years ago
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First draft for Andrina. I decided to do the two stories together in the slot you have rather than bothering with two separate lots. I wasn't sure if you were looking for a story that was more happy or tragic so I went with happy, though I can alter if you like. Please let me know any changes you would like.

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May 12, 2016 9 years ago
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Perfect as always <3

I'm keeping you busy writing for me lol. I have another story that needs to be done ;)

Can I pay you for three stories all at once?


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May 12, 2016 9 years ago
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I usually keep it to two stories per slot, but I don't mind in this case. (I will have to set the limit at three though...I wouldn't want to lose track of the active stories I have for you. xD) I do have quite a busy weekend coming up so it will be early next week before I'll be able to post another draft, but you are welcome to post the information for the next pet at any time.

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May 13, 2016 9 years ago
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I'm thinking a standard story. Dorin is an Angel of death. This is what I have for him so far.

DOOR-in The Angel of Death,

Dark | Sadist | Bitter | Genius | Mysterious Twisted | Angry | Morbid | Aggressive |

I live in longing. Do NOT deny me! I'm foul as sin and horrible Come to me, your strange Angel For I am darkness itself....


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