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Jan 17, 2018 8 years ago
BaileyBoo
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August Rush

9/10 I love the colors and how well put together the whole thing is! The theme is lovely!

Jan 21, 2018 8 years ago
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RootCanal
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Olsen

7/10, this looks like something I would see in a fairytale RPG game! Avery interesting character! The only thing about it I don't lover is that the difference in how dull the face/skin is vs the colorful details throws off the flow. Either add more color to the face of put some more subdued tones through the outfit/background!

Jan 22, 2018 8 years ago
Peachy
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Thoughts

7/10 I love how well the colors all work together, it's very... serene I think is the word I'm looking for? Both muted and bright, I like it! I think I would add a nose an different eyebrows. Also there is something about the dress that makes the HA look kinda stumpy? Cute HA c:

Jan 22, 2018 8 years ago
Siebren
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Aspity

I LOVE this avatar. 9.5/10. The colours flow wonderfully into each other and the face fits really well with what you've made. The only thing I would change is the wings on your back? I don't think they fit with the avatar and they just clutter it a little.

Jan 22, 2018 8 years ago
Cub Scout
RootCanal
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Olsen

10/10 I adore the flow of tone and color, she looks like the peaceful ruler of a far away galaxy. Only critique is that the shoes don/t flow with the mood of the outfit for me. I love it!

(your post loaded after I posted mine) 9/10 The avatar is very cute and B.A. only critique is actually the shoes on yours too! they're too cutesy for the oufit in my taste, maybe a brown boot or even flats in a darker color!

Jan 24, 2018 8 years ago
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Kylo
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Rumancek

7.5/10 I love your overall look, it works really well with the background, especially your hair and make up. But the dress is a little dark heavy, which would be fine, but if I were only going to change one item it would be the shoes. They don't match the dress, only the kitten which doesn't need to match as much as the outfit does. But otherwise I love the look and scene your avatar makes.

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Jan 30, 2018 8 years ago
Oh My Shinwa, we thought
Angelica_467
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Midnight Star

7/10 I like how you used a muscle thing, but I kind of feel like since the pants are, well, pants, and a big higher on the waist, and because there's no top, it seems a bit unbalanced. That might just be me, though, because I'm a maximalist and your HA is very minimalist haha. Overall, though, there isn't a lot to critique! I think the hair works very well with the look you're going for!

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Jan 31, 2018 8 years ago
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Rumancek

(xD I'm so sorry you caught my Ben Swolo meme avatar last time!!)

10/10 I think thats the first 10/10 I've give in forever? Seriously, your HA is gorgeous, the colors work so well together and the entire look is on point. I think the only thing to critique would be maybe a warmer skin tone to match all the warm purples? Or maybe some kind of jewelry or 'bedazzling' on the legs since they're so long and uninterrupted but you can take that or leave it. Seriously though, 10/10 HA over all.

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Feb 6, 2018 8 years ago
Siebren
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Aspity

10/10 I LOVE this avatar. The theme is so interesting- it's almost as if there's a whole story behind it. The filter really brings everything together, but I can also tell that the colour matching was wonderfully done under it. I don't see people using those eyes since they're very subtle, but you did a great job with them! The only thing I'd say is that if that's one of the two piece hats with the back and the front as separate items, putting the back on the hat would bring it together a little more. But that's your choice!

Feb 7, 2018 8 years ago
Tomorrow
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Love it! 9/10. Very horror vibe-y. It'd be a 10/10 but there's something a little off that I can't quite put my finger on...


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Feb 12, 2018 8 years ago
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Rumancek

9.5/10 I love your entire aesthetic, its so great. You make everything work super well and the wet stormy look is so well done. The only thing that bugs me on this one is the necklace, it just stands out as oddly bright against everything else. But thats a super minor detail, and otherwise, great HA.

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Feb 13, 2018 8 years ago
Pseudonym
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Califia

7/10

I like the Medusa vibe and playing with clothes, but the wrist cuffs and shell circlet don't match very well. Would also love to see something in the background/foreground, but of course that's your personal choice. You still did well ^_^

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Feb 14, 2018 8 years ago
JayJays
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6.5/10 The layering between the skirt and the wrap doesn't work, it's cut off and reappears on one side. I think the roses in front of the veil is also a little odd. They don't seem to be a cohesive item so look a little like they're floating.

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Feb 16, 2018 8 years ago
Oh My Shinwa, we thought
Angelica_467
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Midnight Star

8/10 I love everything in this avatar besides the tights! The red is a little bit off, but I understand it can be hard to match colors exactly. I also think a little bit of a BG would help, but other than that it's very well made! Impressive how you got the Lunar Wig to actually work; I couldn't for the life of me because the art is a bit older XD Overall, it looks great!

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Feb 16, 2018 8 years ago
Allexandre
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I am afraid of posting here and receive tons of low rating but my curiosity is screaming for this lol I think it's perfect! The red in the dress isn't the same as the red in the headpiece, but it's ok. The only thing I'd change is the eyes because I think they say your avatar is moiling a bit. I would put flaming catching eyes but it's your choice. I'll give 10/10

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Feb 23, 2018 8 years ago
Zeptonyx
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The wings and dream catcher head piece look disconnected from the central part of the HA, perhaps because of their soft colors, but that is the only criticism I have. I like the theme of the avatar and the rich colors you've incorporated. At first I was unsure of the blue skin tone but it grew on me the more I studied your HA. All in all, I think I would rate it 8/10

Feb 23, 2018 8 years ago
Korosan
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Love the outfit- the cloak/undershirt combo fit very nicely together- plus the face and hair create a very mischeivious/ ominous feeling~ I think I can see the edge of a weapon handle- but as you can see such a small part of it I would just leave it out- it feels a bit off-balance! Overall an 8/10! The hat seems a bit darker than the rest of your outfit- maybe try to find a lighter version with similar colors? Or a solid black- so it ties in with your shoes. :3

Feb 24, 2018 8 years ago
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Angelica_467
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Midnight Star

8/10 Love the simplicity of your HA! I'm a sucker for simple scenery avatars. The only thing is that the items other than the BG look kind of random against it, since the art style (?) is different. I would recommend either changing the BG or the foreground items! :)

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Mar 8, 2018 8 years ago
Lexy
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i would say 10/10. Simple yet complex and your color matching is on point!

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Mar 9, 2018 8 years ago
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Selilah

7/10 The blues don't exactly match.

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