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Mar 14, 2018 8 years ago
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Leptospilove

9/10 I think the sword is conflicting with the color scheme overall and kind of detracts from the mysterious/serious vibe.

Mar 22, 2018 8 years ago
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Midnight Star

7/10 I'm not sure what you're going for here, but I liked how you have both horns and hooves, which keeps it consistent! Nice overall, just a little confusing and random! :)

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Mar 23, 2018 8 years ago
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Quite lovely! 9/10 I love the pale purple color that you have throughout the outfit, and everything feels rather ethereal. I would love to see more browns integrated though, to match the wig. Perhaps a different shoe? Right now, in my opinion, the wig's color detracts, given its the only occurrence.

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Mar 23, 2018 8 years ago
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Lewd

9/10 Personally I love the unity of the color scheme, it's a bit hard to only use one color and make it look nice but you definitely have~ ^^ I honestly love the face and hair, but you're rocking those clothes too! c: Also it was a 9/10 because I always like to see a background considering it gives a bit more story to the HA but that's just personal preference tbh. c:

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Mar 24, 2018 8 years ago
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7/10

Super-cute HA! Personal preference, but I think it would look even better if you used less items. Right now, there's a lot going on and it's hard to see what the focal point of the HA/where my eyes are supposed to. Also, I personally prefer to stick to 2-4 colors max. Over that, and I feel like it gets difficult all the colors throughout the HA.

Very cute concept & HA though!

Mar 24, 2018 8 years ago
Gemmabee
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7/10

a bit too dark for my tastes, personally. still a really cool HA! despite it being dark, you can still see the details. i like that:)

Mar 24, 2018 8 years ago
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Fawn

7/10 cute! I love that deer ❤️ The creatures being from different places bugs me, I'd personally drop the alpaca + lizard, or the forest critters. But it is very whimsical with all three!

(typed this out w/o claiming, may as well post it P: ) 8/10 i like your style ; ) I'm not a huge fan of the plain base colors, so I like playing around w/ the curious little dolls, layering them can get a lot of different looks. maybe Lonan? Also I personally like a really dark base so I'd try coalti tracks and coal mole, but it looks pretty neat the way it is.

Mar 26, 2018 8 years ago
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9/10 Love the use of the new mask! Looks like some kind of druidic/magical being with a strange body. Lots going on around the HA which makes it interesting to look at, but the colour scheme makes it not look too cluttered. The feet area is a bit strange; I'm not really sure what's going on there or if you achieved what you were aiming for, but overall I like it.

Mar 26, 2018 8 years ago
Dumbledore
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9/10 Really cool use of the new mask, and the color matching is good but it feels a bit incomplete to me, maybe something on the arms? Or bigger hair?

Mar 26, 2018 8 years ago
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Fawn

9/10 lovely! gorgeous colors, the only thing that seems off maybe is that shirt. just seems a little too muted for the rest of the outfit, and the bit of green seems out of place.

Mar 28, 2018 8 years ago
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10/10

I love it. You've clearly put a lot of effort into picking items that have the same colour/shading, and balanced them throughout the HA. :)

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Mar 30, 2018 8 years ago
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Aspity

8/10 An interesting look! Personally I'm not a big fan of the older items (the thick lines don't look good to my eyes) but you tied them together really well. The colour matching is fantastic, and the yellow and pink really complement each other. I like the leg tattoo as well! The only thing I'd say is the pink fringe under the blonde hair looks odd and really out of place. It looks like you were going for a sort of dip dye but I don't think it quite worked out. Maybe try a hairstyle that's both pink and blonde or just pick the one. The bow behind the head also looks strange - maybe layer it over the blonde wig so its more visible?

Apr 1, 2018 7 years ago
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Midnight Star

9.5/10

Love this! I'm personally not usually a fan of demon/scary-type HAs, but you did it really well. My only critique is that the lips look kind of out of place, but other than that, it's perfect! Great job!

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Apr 1, 2018 7 years ago
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I really enjoy this outfit, however the background and white of the shoes seem a little off to me. Maybe it’s the pure white opposed to the pink whites ? 8.5/10

Apr 3, 2018 7 years ago
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Invaders

9/10 beautiful i love the colour scheme :)

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Apr 3, 2018 7 years ago
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9/10 I'm a sucker for simple, pretty scenery HAs! My only critique is that the actual BG looks kind of dark compared to the light foreground/ground items, but other than that, well done!

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Apr 3, 2018 7 years ago
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8/10 I can tell there's a lot of really cool layering and such going on in this avi, but I kinda wish the colours matched more? Like there's a lot of blue and greens and yellows, but I feel like if you tried to match the blue and yellow, and ditched the green accents, it would look so much better. I also don't think I like the headband on top of your hair, I think it would look way better underneath it!

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Apr 11, 2018 7 years ago
Dumbledore
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6/10 The background is pretty and it's nice that you're trying to match it but the colors that you are wearing aren't the same as the bg and the art style on them is outdated and so they look out of place compared to the bg

Apr 12, 2018 7 years ago
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Fawn

9.5/10 really nice! I love the whole headdress/skull and I absolutely envy your tails. I appreciate how the tights match the chest, but I might try a more muted black or light gray, to tie it back into the top half. Or add more purple elsewhere; it's hard to see it in the ribcage at first glance!

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Apr 13, 2018 7 years ago
venus_373
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Leptospilove

8/10 I like the color scheme and the elements you've used, but it's a little confusing. I don't see how the birds or the bat wings can mix with the rest of the set. It's very aesthetically pleasing, though.

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