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Dec 12, 2017 8 years ago
MEAN
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I took your advice I like both ways!

Yours looks like a cute cartoon. The only part that sticks out to me is the tights. The webbing / fishnet pattern is kinda creepy / swampy and not really the girly candy cute vibe of the rest of the HA. Maybe something plain, floral, or lacy?

6/10

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Dec 12, 2017 8 years ago
Seva
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Much better without the cape! 10/10

I took your advice, ditched the fishnets and decided to add a bunny to my little picnic scene.

Dec 12, 2017 8 years ago
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Super cute! the bunny is a nice touch. 9/10

Dec 17, 2017 8 years ago
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6/10 I think you have an interesting approach / start, though, your HA isn't too much to my tastes. I think the thing that throws me off a bit is the green eyes - I like the warmer tones that are present elsewhere, and the only thing that the eyes are really matching to are the earrings. Perhaps change them to purple, to match your boots? I might also suggest layering the belt over the bottom.

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Dec 18, 2017 8 years ago
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It's a starfire cosplay

Dec 20, 2017 8 years ago
Perpetual
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7/10

I can definitely see that your HA was inspired by Starfire from Teen Titans. I do like it, but I don't really see the anklets working around the boots. I also think some more purple would work nicely on your HA. Overall though, I like it!

Dec 22, 2017 8 years ago
Dumbledore
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6/10 The colors match but some of the items look dated and it's ruining the flow

Dec 22, 2017 8 years ago
Chocolate
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8/10 I like what you're going for, but doesn't quite seem complete to me. Perhaps adding something on the arms, or another texture to the legs?

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Dec 22, 2017 8 years ago
Dumbledore
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Thanks :) I added some sleeves and I do think it looks better now.

Yours is very cute, I like the colors and it fits with the season. I think the shoes are a bit strange though... Maybe you can see a bit of the foot behind them, or the color isn't quite right? 9/10 though :)

Dec 23, 2017 8 years ago
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Loewe

9,5/10 Love the color themed outfits and the dragon detail, I think your HA would look better if you add some background :)


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Dec 23, 2017 8 years ago
lotus737
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Bhaag Rani

9/10 Very nice overall and well coordinated. I personally think the eyebrows are a little strong, and you can see the hair between the face and was (but I get that you may not be able to prevent that layering the way you want to!)

Overall nicely festive without being over the top :)

Dec 24, 2017 8 years ago
MEAN
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I need help, especially on if the footwear is good and whether I should change out the two foreground items for instead.

The background seems very disconnected from the feel of the rest of the HA I love the colors on her tho and the hair Looks very authentic ; though not super original in concept 9/10 for beauty

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Jan 3, 2018 8 years ago
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6/10 Mostly, my issue is that with the glittery foreground, it's nearly impossible to see much at all. From what I can see, it seems you're going for a merman type of HA, which does look interesting with some great items! I just can barely see it! Perhaps dropping the liquid shadow would be in your favor?

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Jan 4, 2018 8 years ago
Perpetual
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9/10

I love your HA! The only thing I would probably change is the green leggings, other than that your HA looks amazing (especially the hair)!

Jan 4, 2018 8 years ago
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Love the color scheme! everything goes together really well! I would just add a background that fits your look!

Jan 8, 2018 8 years ago
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torqourse

9/10 nice HA. Only thing I'd change would probably be the lips, the color stands out the most and maybe get rid of the dog on the ground

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Jan 9, 2018 8 years ago
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Pougie

9/10!

I really like it. I'm a huge fan of the earth tones. I think the only thing that I'd change would be the background. I like the more foresty/woodsy backgrounds and I think one with less water would match, although maybe that would be too much green.

You guys have awesome HAs in here! Mine are always so simple haha.

Jan 9, 2018 8 years ago
Leila
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6/10 The casual clothes fit the snowy background well, but your hat and your eyes really threw me off. You might want to try experimenting with different styles of winter hat and eyes and found some better suiting ones.

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Jan 9, 2018 8 years ago
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NoctisLucisCaelum

9/10 Very cool outfit. The only thing I would change is maybe something to fill the white space around the legs/shoes area? It seems a little off-balance. Super busy at the top, empty at the bottom.

Jan 12, 2018 8 years ago
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Midnight Star

8.5/10! Love your color scheme and how futuristic everything looks. I would change the makeup though, especially the blush and eyes, because they're very warm-toned while everything else is cool. The color in the eyeshadow and the bright pink doesn't really match the rest of the HA. Maybe go for the Mocha Body Blush (I think that's what it's called)? The lips are okay, but I think perhaps something that isn't smiling would add to the futuristic-warrior vibe you have going on here. Overall, though, I love it and the frame is perfect! :)

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