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Aug 15, 2017 8 years ago
Godzilla_728
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8/10 Gotta love the forest theme (I generally love this theme) and that bug thingy, but the boots are sticking out too much in my opinion!



Aug 15, 2017 8 years ago
moogle
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9/10, my only complaint is the boots look kind of clunky compared to the rest of the outfit.

Aug 16, 2017 8 years ago
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Intercalary

8/10, the spats (? the lace ankle things?) don't suit the soft brown and pink theme as well as the rest

Aug 16, 2017 8 years ago
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SailorButtress

10/10, I honestly can't see anything wrong with it. I also love the colors and layout.

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Aug 25, 2017 8 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

I love the colors but the frame makes it look a little squished to me? 8/10

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Aug 30, 2017 8 years ago
Minks
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8/10 I love the theme and the kitty is cute! If anything, I would say maybe add some jewelry, a headpiece, or a shawl/sash and some contrasting colors, but overall I love it!

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Sep 2, 2017 8 years ago
Siebren
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Aspity

8/10, I really like the idea you're going for!! I just think the wig isn't quite matching the rest of it - maybe something more blue or green would work?

Sep 3, 2017 8 years ago
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Beakers

8/10, I like the theme you have going. I really like the orbs with the background but I am not too sure about that hair with the hat. I feel like they are clashing too much.

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Sep 3, 2017 8 years ago
PrinceofSparrows
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9/10, The colour scheme looks really nice but I think the Arid Lifelike Kumos is a little too white, it stands out a bit too much? One in a more subdued colour might work better.

Sep 5, 2017 8 years ago
Evening
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Dreamfinder_536

7.5/10, some of the colors are very vivid compared to others. Maybe try to tie them into your feet/legs to make things look a little more put together. I also think it'd be kinda cool if you added tattoos or something to your skin? :3

Sep 6, 2017 8 years ago
jumpingbean1838
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Praelia

8/10

I love the outfit, but maybe change the background to something more forest-y or more vibrant? I feel like its a little too pastel for your hair and sleeves!

Sep 17, 2017 8 years ago
MagesTea
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9/10 - great goddess! I love the light rainbow/pale cloud theme. I feel the eyes could have a more rainbow pop. Them being so dark is a bit jarring.

Sep 18, 2017 8 years ago
LexAeternal
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Very cool! 9.5/10

That mask and that hair together are sooooo awesome. (I don't know if it's alll one item or not but it's WONDERFUL. The background and he robe and the necklace all tie in together well. I think the tail could be better. Maybe if there was a tail/bottom half that matched the steampunk sort of situation you've got going on the top half?

I also love that your HA goes well with your name. :) All very lovely.

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Sep 18, 2017 8 years ago
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8/10 Cool idea! I really like the theme you have going here, and thing it's overall very cute. Very good use of the Broken Charcoal Sticks!

I am a bit confused by what is happening beneath the jacket, however. Wearing only the black lack bra and babydoll makes the layering look really bizarre. I think you really should have something a bit less opaque on. You could potentially throw it under the babydoll if you really like the texture. But definitely lose the bra. You'd probably be golden with any grey tones, or potentially pale pink. (Or the Black Simple Bandeau if you have it.)

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Sep 19, 2017 8 years ago
LexAeternal
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Thanks, I think you're right.

9.945985/10 I like the fall colours and the punk style. I feel like if there was a tiny hint of green somewhere on top (like eye-shadow or something else on your head) it might pop a bit more and tie in the pumpkins.

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Sep 20, 2017 8 years ago
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9/10 Overall I find your HA to be very cute. The pinks blend well with the black, and I love the charcoal effect/placement. Nothing that really needs to be added. I can for some reason picture your HA chewing bubblegum though. :D

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Sep 20, 2017 8 years ago
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8/10 Love how he looks simple, and then just covered in blood with that grin! I love the backdrop, I just don't think it goes that well! Something a touch brighter, and a little more in-keeping with the overall colour?

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Sep 20, 2017 8 years ago
poop
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Thanks, I thought so too. Do you have any suggestions for a nice looking backdrop that would match better. :)

Love your HA too btw. It all flows together really well. 11/10 bonus point for the saw doll. hehe ^^

Edit: Oh that looks really cool. I will give that a try. ty ^^

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Sep 26, 2017 8 years ago
jumpingbean1838
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Praelia

9/10 While the theme you picked isnt super my style, its done really well, and something about the eyes, the smile and the blood works really well together!

Sep 26, 2017 8 years ago
LexAeternal
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8/10

I love the princess in the clouds theme. The layering of the dress looks nice. I think some earrings would look good. I also want to see more of those colours from your dress on the top half. A head accessory maybe? Ohhh... what about

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