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Sep 26, 2017 8 years ago
Oh My Shinwa, we thought
Fahdastic
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9/10

I like the background and how it matches with your sleeves and shoes. But it's not too damaging or noticeable anyway. The cap and hair are a good match too. I'd say you need something more in the back or foreground. It lacks depth.

Oct 5, 2017 8 years ago
Abaven
did the monster mash
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10/10 You got a great creepy vibe going on overall, and I like how you used the slick hair, mesh shirt, and clean cut border in front of the monster one. It gives your HA a sort of fabulous psycho look.

[edit]I wanted to give a suggestion, but I couldn't think of anything to improve. A+

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Oct 5, 2017 8 years ago
Spolicer
is lonely
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9/10 I really do love the theme you have of alien princess and the color scheme is very pretty with the cool colors. I think my only suggestion that comes to mind is I feel you are a little top heavy, maybe just adding a brooch or something to simulate jewelry to carry the weight evenly.

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Oct 18, 2017 8 years ago
LilBabyFatArms
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VivanneDecember

10/10! I don't like spiders in real life but I LOVE the little spider on the hat! I love everything about your look

Oct 26, 2017 8 years ago
Chocolate
needs more chocolate
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Well to be honest, I'm not totally sure I follow the theme here. You've got some interesting greys and blues up top and in the skirt that I'd love to see more of. But the green lantern kind of throws things off balance. I'd also like to see a different backdrop- I think the warm colors kind of conflict with your outfit. 6/10


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Oct 26, 2017 8 years ago
Amme
has been spooked
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Somas

So very beautiful. You kept a nice theme and the line weights of your chosen items make it look very put-together. The bright eyes are a nice touch as well; they're sunny and pop without clashing. 9.5/10!!

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Oct 31, 2017 8 years ago
ZORO
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10/10 Your HA is absolutely gorgeous. I love everything about it. It's soft and gentle and beautiful but still a bit spooky and intriguing and I just.... I love it so much.

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Oct 31, 2017 8 years ago
stars_water
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8/10: I like the idea you have going on, but I feel like the crazy lines on your avatar don't work quite so well with the straight vertical lines of the background you've chosen. Perhaps something softer in the background would make you avatar pop more?

Also happy birthday and Halloween both!

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Nov 2, 2017 8 years ago
PsychoticGiggle
ate their feelings
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7/10 a little simple but at the same time a little too much. Not sure if the face paint fits but aside from that I think everything else is gorgeous and simple.

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Nov 3, 2017 8 years ago
Star Captain
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Space Kid

8/10 I really love the concept and colors, but I feel it needs something to tie the balloon in more. Maybe a belt over the dress, something on the arms, or some blood spatters. Those red lace ankle spat things might look nice layered under your shoes as well.

Overall it's a great creepy yet cute avi~

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Nov 5, 2017 8 years ago
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Selilah

9/10 I like the whole look of the avatar, and I think that everything matches together quite well (colour wise) The only thing I disagree with is the face. I feel like there's just something off with the eyes and the nose, otherwise, great job!

Nov 16, 2017 8 years ago
Chocolate
needs more chocolate
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9/10 Nice and simple, with well matching colors. I'm not so sure about the jewelry choices, mostly with how bright the pink ring is. Similarly, whatever shirt you have on under the skirt seems a little too salmon colored. But overall, it's a very nice HA.

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Nov 17, 2017 8 years ago
Kaila442
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9/10 Very nice overall. I like the fall theme; it makes me feel ready for the cooler weather lol Maybe just a bit more splash of colour..? Not much, but maybe a little golden/darker yellow accessory..? Other than that i love it!

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Nov 23, 2017 8 years ago
Perpetual
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8/10

Your HA has a Alucard feel from Hellsing (is that where you got your inspiration?). I like it, but I would suggest changing the background to fill in all of the leftover white, and also perhaps change the glasses to something slightly smaller. Other than that, I love the concept!

Nov 25, 2017 8 years ago
Eye_468
is fashionable
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8/10

I really love the flow of the HA and how the gold is appearing throughout the whole thing. I'd personally change the hair into one of the Redeemable Hair Salon Hairstyles and color it to get that ombre effect of the bottom of the cape (better color matching, this hair right now is too purple) and put some gold accessory on the head layer as well. Awesome job overall :)

Nov 25, 2017 8 years ago
radiocomputer98
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Pumpkineater

9/10 adding a dark background might create a nice contrast from the mainly white HA, but thats a personal preference

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Dec 5, 2017 8 years ago
stars_water
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9/10 Your avatar is almost solid - the colors work well together, the idea is clear almost everything about this avatar just works even if it's not in my personal taste. The only things offsetting it are the horns and the ears. They're small details, but the layering on the horns and the abrupt color change of the ears (to what seems to be a color that doesn't appear in the rest of the avatar), they just don't quite look like they're actually a part of this character. I realize that's a tough thing to help, though. Perhaps, if you are using a separate blush item, it would be worth considering layering the blush/ears a little differently.

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Dec 11, 2017 8 years ago
LilBabyFatArms
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VivanneDecember

9/10 I love how everything works together! I would give you a 10 but the facepaint(skin?) throws me off, doesn't match for me

Dec 11, 2017 8 years ago
MEAN
won't sugar coat it
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Insults

i need some help with this one , folks

cute n festive Not a big fan of the eyes since the hair and shoes and legs have this kind of street modernity Honestly it kind of looks like he's mid-transformation into a snow queen which is great 5/10 for me

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Dec 11, 2017 8 years ago
Seva
gets around
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Your avatar is so well matched overall, I'm just not sure about the shoulder drape thing, maybe a leather or cropped jacket would work a little better? I give it a solid 8/10 though.

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