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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I uhm... im not sure I understand what they mean with the perspective issues, or how the string looks very straight D| I think I can see a bit what they mean, but im not sure how to fix it to make it look 3/4 view, if anyone has an idea perhaps? Thanks B)

Your custom clothing Graceful Silvery Corset was denied for the following reason(s): OVERLAY: Overlay perspective conflicts with the 3/4 angle of the avatar base ITEM: Item name does not accurately represent the item image NOTE: The ribbon on the corset especially seems to be straight on, rather than going with the 3/4ths view of the avatar. NOTE: The item is a fine representation of the wearable, but as the item itself is not a corset, it will need to be renamed.

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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can't help you in making cw sorry dear

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I would love to claim an interest slot for Brunette PeekABraid Wig. Gorgeous.

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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~ Disclaimer: Not an artist For perspective perhaps moving the circle in the middle to the left slightly (HA's right) and maybe make the stripe on the left thinner and the strip on the right thicker?

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I'm sorry, this was a commission I did for someone else, I'm not the one handling the slots :( Also, the person only made one batch of this particular colour, which was sold a while ago. A red version of it is available in the cash shop however x3

Ohhh the circle, hadnt thought about it x3 I'll have to try that (: And your HA is adooorable! x3

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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~ Thank you! ^-^

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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They don't mean that the string is straight, but that it's straight on, as in, it's centered in the overlay. Since the HA is in 3/4 view, if circle thing is supposed to be in the center of the corset, then it should be moved to the left a bit in the overlay.



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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I think what else could help with it is moving the line on our right/HA's left more towards the center of the breast. The other line seems to be dead center to it.

Also, if the Rainyday Light Corset can be called a corset, this item can be.

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I think this would be more 3/4th view: The center of the ball is closer to the left than the right (leaving less space on viewer left than right), also the strand is dangling over the HA's right leg rather than straight down the middle.

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I agree about the top outline being more centered, now that you point it out x3 I'll definitely have to fix that!

Oh and they are talking about the item being a box I believe x3 The overlay is a corset, but the CI is a box, so they're telling me it cant just be called 'Graceful Silvery Corset' when the CI representation is a box (I suppose I'd have to add 'in a box' or something like that xD)

Thank you for the pic! I see what you mean about the strings being more inclined, I'll have to fix that ❤️

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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No problem. I might have put it a bit too center myself, but the gist of it is to leave more space on viewer right than the left and it'll be more angled then just drop the strand downward from the new position of the ball c:

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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Oh and they are talking about the item being a box I believe x3
The overlay is a corset, but the CI is a box, so they&;re telling me it cant just be called &;Graceful Silvery Corset&; when the CI representation is a box (I suppose I&;d have to add &;in a box&; or something like that xD)
I think is right and that they are referring to the actual item not being a corset, rather than the item image not representing it because they said "The item is a fine representation of the wearable", so you won't need to change the CI. I am guessing that they are saying it isn't a corset and it has nothing to do with the item image?. Does it still count as a corset if it is below the breasts (I have no idea xD). But Sui does bring up a good point because the Rainyday Light Corset is below the breasts as well :/ Maybe mention that when you submit again?

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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NOTE: The item is a fine representation of the wearable, but as the item itself is not a corset, it will need to be renamed.

Hm, I personally really read it as 'the icon represents the overlay (same idea, same string with the ball in the middle) but since the CI is a BOX and not an image of a CORSET, the name must be different (ie: Corset in a box or something similar)

The Rainyday light corset's CI is a representation of a corset, it's not another item, so it can be called corset x3

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I think I would ask for some clarification in a ticket, just to be safe, ahahaha XD

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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I forgot that here, people read and review your ticket super super quickly, so I'll do that (: (Im used to neo, where tickets take days to be asnwered, and their reply is usually more than useless lol)

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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Ah, Neo tickets. Sighs They always made no sense to me.

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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Yeahh, neo tickets are stupid .__________________. Sometimes they dont even read your comment and assign a generic response, which sometimes doesnt even match what you ask (ie: there is a bug with this item. Response: thanks for the suggestion! OTL)

I got a response from my ticket (already!) I was right, it's because my CI is a box, and the item of my name is 'Graceful Silvery Corset'. The name of the item must be related to the CI, and since it's a box and not a corset, said name must be altered (:

Now, I need to figure out how to call this item with the word 'box' in it ._______________________.

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Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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Good thing you didn't listen to me :P As for the name, maybe just stick box at the end (so Graceful Silvery Corset Box)? They let that pass for the .

Jul 20, 2012 13 years ago
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Ahaha, yep !

Ah ! Hmm, well, you could call it 'Boxed Graceful Silvery Corset' or (like you mentioned) 'Graceful Silvery Corset In A Box' ... Maybe 'Graceful Silvery Corset Gift' would work ?

Jul 24, 2012 13 years ago
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Eep, I need help again .________________________.

Your custom clothing Golden Blind Roxy Wig was denied for the following reason(s): OVERLAY: Thick or heavy lineart

http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww299/nemossan/CathiiArt/commissions/Fool/mohawk_overlay-1.png"> It's the second time it is denied for thick or heavy lineart, but I'm here trying to guess if they mean the outline or the inlines because they didnt note anything additional :/

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