outer lineart, definitely. it stuck out to me immediately. it's got the 'sticker' effect going on.

I'm guessing the outer lines. They look a bit thick to me, too, but the rest looks good.

Thank you very much, I'll work on the outline then x3 I've done many wigs that had a similar outline and it was never denied before, im thinking it might just be because the colour is really pale this time.

[edit] I hope it's okay that I pinged you again B)

Is this better? D|

noticeably much better! 8D

It looks much better now! :)

Hello guys! I made that necklace a while ago but somehow forgot about it until now. It's the first time I make something as small as this, and I'm unsure of what to change/add. Is the outline too thin? Is it too blurry, too sharp, too anything? D|

[edit] Tweaked here and there, and now taking slots for the necklace x3 Also released a golden colour. There will be no other recolour.

asgfaghafghafh i want that necklace when you release it oh god @ __@

OMFG that is awesome!

It is very pretty! I like it over the dress. Yes, not sure if I will get it but I would like to be pinged. Thanks!

oh, oh and if you ever decide to make a pale gold or copper one, i'd be interested in that, too! i'm such a sucker for fantasy-esque jewelry +__+

~ It is very pretty, and I would be interested in one ~ :) ~

-Guru Alrighty, I'll ping you once I release it!

I'm just looking at advice concerning the actual lineart, I'm not sure if it's too blurry, too thin, too anything. Necklaces are hard to do ;_____;

-- Might do a golden recolour, yes! But not more than that. Silver and golden! ❤️

~ Thank you, I look forward to your release ~ :) ~

Oh god. I'm not sure if I'll be able to get it, but I'd love a ping when you release it. It's amazing. ❤️ And a gold recolor would be even more tempting. >.<

Very cool! My main critique would be that it doesn't seem to hang quite right on the HA--the top portions are fine, but the bottom chain of the necklace is super straight in how it hangs from the shoulders and doesn't look like it takes the HAs chest into the equation since it would either curve across the breasts or hang off of them, etc rather than being perfectly straight from the shoulders to the middle of the chest.

perspective issues, why do I always struggle with this :________: Thank you very much! I definitely see what you mean about the necklace being straight, I'll try to curve a bit the angle (:

Awson... would like to have one.. _

Because perspective is evil. That's what I've decided anyway, lol.

No wonder I gave up on making backdrops. That's the top of perspective evilness xD Thanks again! x3

i would love to be pinged ^-^