hi!

i wrote a really big explanation in response to this, then backspaced because I realised I wasn't making any further sense haha xD. Yeah I think that sums up my overall thoughts c: the 3rd version I think is the most likely to comply to subeta standards (color and depth wise especially where the pink wig is concerned). i recently submitted a very very light pink wig in the same color range, so i know that the darker the pink is the more likely they "accept" the shading of it not being sticker-effect or missing inside lines etc. the brunette one in row 3 (the last one) has my vote though if you're only releasing one color.

Ahhh I hate when that happens, clicking on the damn back button and getting all the message erased lol :K

I added a few more black lines inside of the wig, and made the light on the last wig a bit more orange than yellow x3 That darn sticker effect is so hard to work with. I'll add your name to the interest list hun, I might actually release the wig sooner. I'm waiting for a mod to lock my current thread, which is on page two. Been waiting for a day or two :(

(Speaking of stupid computer stuff, guess who just cropped the rose bun version into the final size and not the huge size OTL Thank god I had most of the tweakings done atleast)

i like the icicle wig and the bow by it self

Love it, love it, love it! Definitely want to be on an interest list for when your shop reopens. :D

I love the pink one :D and the item image is super cute too ^__^

and OMG I am forever saving it as the smaller version and then when I open it to edit again I'm like D'OH lol XD

Cupcake You found me! xD T.T I do that from times to times, saving the smaller version and closing without realizing the mistake. Urghh! :K

[edit] Of course I was the last to post, so I cant repost with info about new WIP lol

HOly CRAP I love the blonde/Angelic version!! Iwant it SO MUCH! Sign me up????

I'll add you to the interest list hun! x3 It'll prob be released when the last slots for the Rose locks are filled, in a few days (:

Love the Blacklight Wig, especially the slightly darker version. At least, I think it's darker? The one up top.

Im not sure haha I mean, I did make a few strands a bit lighter, but when I try to compare them, one actually looks paler but I never touched the entire wig. Or I added something, I'll have to recheck (: Thanks for your input though, I'll probably shift towards the first top picture, and just fix one or two odd highlights on it x3

I love the colors on the blacklight/nighttime with the purples, pinks, and yellows, as well as the shadow depth. It's very nice. Just wanted to say.

i liked the brown the best

I like the style of the angelic and blacklight wigs, but yeah, they need more shading, plus maybe some lines around the back of the head (esp for the light one), so the ponytail doesn't blend into the rest of the hair so much? I love the colours in the blacklight one, though it doesn't really speak "blacklight" to me, the colours need to be more pronounced? Either that, or it's too purple.

I might release two natural colours later on, I know people are very fond of those usually x3

It doesnt speak blacklight to me so much either, I think. But that's the first word that come to my mind, and now im stuck with it and cant find another one lol :K

As for the shading, I'll add more black lineart in the pale wig (kind of hard to see on the dark one already) (:

[edit] Just uploaded a third version in my first post (: Made the blacklight highlights a bit paler, the whole wig a bit darker. Im still not sure if that reminds me of 'blacklight' though. Mind you, it's the only word stuck in my head right now so I cant seem to think of anything else lol :(

And also added lineart to the white one x3

Thank you very much for your feedback by the way, it's much appreciated x3

[edit] Whutchoo think? :(

For the white one, I think you solved the shading and lineart issue overall, but the ponytail (purple arrow) looks a little smudgy. Also, where I've pointed to with the blue arrow, I think you need outline the ponytail more, so fix the issue with those 2 sections meeting.

For the whirly bun I think it looks good! But the section where I pointed too needs more lineart work it kind of just blends together at the moment, you can't really see what's going on? Maybe consider a couple of highlights too :)

Don't see any issues with the blacklight, the pony tail thing isn't a problem on this one because of the darker colours (:

[edit] I haven't put an arrow but on the whirly bun I think there is the same issue on the other side, the fringe but could do with a darker outline so it separates from the bun

Updated my first post with the whirly chocolate bun! I wanted more shine too, but they said I had too much highlights, so I didnt want to put too many :/

Gosh, you deserve an award and tons of cupcakes for being so patient and helpful to me .________________. /hugs you

Ahhh, it looks fantastic!! I don't see any issues so hopefully you have more luck this time ^^ I think the highlights are different this time, they are more of a "shine" than highlights all over, so I don't think it will be a problem ^^

I updated the angelic/blacklight icons, but they're a bit choppy I think? :/

And thank you, I really hope they accept it :(

Ooh, I forgot about the items! Looking at the white one, the lines look thinner at the top than they do at the bottom, it's quite noticeable on the white but not really an issue on the black. But on both, I'm not sure about the shading? I assume these need to be top-left too, I can't remember, but they're not really showing that at the moment. I'm not sure... they've definitely improved on the previous versions though, the white looks better with the darker outline.

Hello guys! I figured I'd stack all the wigs together so I just need to ping once, because they were denied again and I just... don't know what's wrong, maybe I've been staring at the wigs for too long, I dont know. I tried to fix most of what I could think of, but I'd really love your input to be /almost/ sure that they wont get re-denied again :(

Thanks so much ❤️

BEFORE > AFTER

Your custom clothing Blacklight Updo was denied for the following reason(s): • ITEM and OVERLAY: See denial reasons on the recolor of this item • OVERLAY: Dodge/burn look or too much contrast in shading • NOTE: This version, much moreso than the white version, has a very very dodged/burned appearance.

Your custom clothing Angelic Updo was denied for the following reason(s): • ITEM and OVERLAY: Thin or weak lineart • ITEM and OVERLAY: Shading is too faint • OVERLAY: Not enough area shaded (too much left flat and unshaded) • NOTE: The ponytail seems to overlap and fade back into the main part of the hair, giving it an almost melting appearance. • NOTE: Lineart and shading need to be thickened up all around.

BEFORE > AFTER

Your custom clothing Edgy Crimson Strands was denied for the following reason(s): • OVERLAY: Thin or weak lineart • ITEM: Sticker effect: flatness due to black lineart around the edges and colored or missing lineart inside • OVERLAY: Overlay light source not from top left • NOTE: We are still getting very thin lineart on the ponytail that goes over the shoulder, and the tangent of the shoulder is still there as well. • NOTE: Although the shading around the bangs and back of the head is okay, it seems the entire overlay isn't taking into account the light source coming from the left. There's no shading or dark spots to show the shape of the head around where the ear is, which makes the wig look very flat. • NOTE: I'm sorry for this not having been mentioned until the third denial, but the item overall suffers from sticker effect and blurry lineart. The hair looks softshaded and the comb suffers the most from the sticker effect.

^ Would this be accepted also? I think the lines might be too thick, but they always tell me they're too thin usually.