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December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

So that's what happened to amy! I was wondering why she had been replaced. And..."took the news well" what the...? there's something wrong with her sister if she took the news well. I hope that was a mistake on the part of the writer/story creator. LOL

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

omg! such a sad ending

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

That's so sad :O

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Quote By Ovation:

; border: 1px solid ; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">Veeline, the new, actually good god could be a boy. :O And he would have taken the form of some non-human thing, like a mouse or a rock dove or a rabbit or a marmot or something small and defenseless-looking, which is why nobody ever heard about him before. He didn't talk to anyone before since there was no need to. Buuuut, because of THE FORCES OF EVIL that are strengthening on Subeta, he's had to come out of hiding temporarily to kill some peepz. Also a good place to designate the difference between evil and beneficial killing, and evil-leaving-alive so that they hurt someone else worse, as happened with Merana. (Optional: cue Sacred Potion color.)

Shinwa gets like WOAH jealous because he's stealing her spotlight, and tries to seal him away, leading to... what? WELL DRAMA AND GOOD TIMES, THAT'S FOR SURE

That would be awesome

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I wish i had participated in the war. Had i knew the ending i would have chose the pirates.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ovation, as they say in Subetapedia Sinwa came from planet Selenis (which Maleria somehow destroyed). so this "the good god Whatshisface" can be the original god of Subeta, who was (till this hour))) too afraid to oppose Shinwa and Maleria altogether. (that would be nice)))

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

OH NOES! AMY AMY AMYYYYYYY

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

couldn't that dumb writer do something? he did witness the whole thing

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Sarah paid off Merana to get Amy's job. Just admit it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

and she dies... the end. I was expecting more.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This IS random, just because killing off a child NPC on a petsite is totally unheard of, even if there was a long plot leading up to it. I'm weirded out by the ending but not annoyed or anything. It's just weird. :p

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ah, sad. :/ It's nice that Subeta isn't afraid to kill off some of the characters, though.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

She ... DIED! O.o

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Also: RS war next year could be between the good god Whatshisface and Shinwa. Shinwa RSes items with 'Light' in the name, and Whatshisface RSes items... like that. or something.

Eh, it could work, but only with a lot of jiggering.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Veeline, the new, actually good god could be a boy. :O And he would have taken the form of some non-human thing, like a mouse or a rock dove or a rabbit or a marmot or something small and defenseless-looking, which is why nobody ever heard about him before. He didn't talk to anyone before since there was no need to. Buuuut, because of THE FORCES OF EVIL that are strengthening on Subeta, he's had to come out of hiding temporarily to kill some peepz. Also a good place to designate the difference between evil and beneficial killing, and evil-leaving-alive so that they hurt someone else worse, as happened with Merana. (Optional: cue Sacred Potion color.)

Shinwa gets like WOAH jealous because he's stealing her spotlight, and tries to seal him away, leading to... what? WELL DRAMA AND GOOD TIMES, THAT'S FOR SURE

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I think subeta has made like pet game history by killing a NPC child, lol

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I'm still hoping that Amy will return one day as a denizen of the deep, raised as Merana's heir with no memory of her former life on land.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

nooo!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

and also people (this might be wrong) but there are 11 stories, and it does feel a little incomplete, this is just an idea, so maybe its not done yet??? idk...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ovation, this is a nice idea)) btw (i know it's offtopic, but still) why isn't there any male gods?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Awe. Looks like I made a few people mad. =P Sorry, but not everyone can be a drone and have the same opinion on things.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

cries Amy...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Aw, poor Amy.

But do I sense an epic face off between Merana and Shinwa in the future?

Quote By Chrisabel:

; border: 1px solid ; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">Let's see, Conspiring, Kidnapping, War and Murder all in the same event where there are children present, not to mention probably feel horrible now since the murder victim happened to be a young girl. Personally, I wasn't thrilled with this particular plot at all and I certainly wouldn't let a child follow along with this kind of story either. If you wanted to replace the NPC Amy, you could have done it another way. It's just my opinion.

I'm sorry, what? This is one or the more rediculous things I've heard recently. This story was actually rather tame compared to what normal people/teens get into and are reading nowadays. Anyone young enough to be bothered by this are probably too young to legally be on Subeta anyway, and it's their parent's job to monitor them.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

i chose the islanders 4 the war. now i gonna use that to avenge Amy! hey, next time, can you release the story BEFORE the war, so we won't regret the side we chose. i soo wish i chose pirates oh, and i so thought she would be ok at the end...so sad

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Augh- now I'm /really/ depressed that I missed the majority of this plot. I got busy for a little while, came back, and the war was over. I never even got to join a side

But anyways. Amazing story. Generally I get bored with these sorts of things so quickly, but this plot was incredible~

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Shinwa was worthless. I shall continue to worship Maleria. At least she can get stuff done. scoffs

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Oh my god, they killed Amy. -cue someone saying "You bastards!"-

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

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; border: 1px solid ; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">lol amy dies. how random. xD

Random?? Dude, there was just a huge plot over this. Theres nothing random about it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I just reread it and I realized Emma seriously rocks. Coolest NPC ever? Oh yeah.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

-O.O- falls off chair Oh My Gawd! Amazing Plot. Really took me away. Very unexpected. So.. Now.. No More Newbie Quests huh? How sad. I though she would be rescued by Shinwa..:/

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Kidnapping is no big deal to read about. There are people in 5th grade learning about war. And murder? I'm pretty sure there was no mention of it.

There are kids on here that followed this, and did not see it as a big deal; trust me.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Well, I am surprised that they actually did it, but it looked like it was coming to that anyway.

Bye Bye Amy quest achievements....

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

i love this story because it doesn't hide anything. and it shows that everyone's got flaws and we're all capable of making mistakes. good things happen and bad things happen. it's life o_o

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love you for that post. You're right.

Kids SHOULDN'T be on subeta, anyway. And this isn't a big deal. Good lord.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Chrisabell, dude, seriously. Kids are a lot tougher than you think, and you'll harm them more if you try to shield them from reality; it makes them absolutely self-absorbed. I would be grateful if you'd STFU, since kids under 13 aren't allowed on Subeta in the first place.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Then why can't we fight Shinwa in the Coliseum, Luxe? I hate Shinwa with a passion. Merana may be a total tool, but at least she's known as evil for a reason.

OMG PLZ BRING IN NEW, ACTUAL GOOD GODDESS OMFG THAT WOULD BE SUCH A GOOD FRIGGING PLOT

Veeline, let's make a Shinwa Intervention Club! It's clear that Shinwa just has a severe social anxiety and agoraphobia. We need to cure her! THIS IS AN INTERVENTION. SHINWA, WE'RE ALL VERY WORRIED ABOUT YOU.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This is really, really sad. But this is a reason I love subeta.

The site doesn't always have happy endings and doesn't make you feel like a complete idiot watching Barney. Even though this was really sad, I think this plot was beautiful.

It goes along with the whole islander sacrifice thing everyone talks about. It's really unfortunate the islanders think they did nothing wrong, which is why people usually view sacrifice as wrong and awful.

A LITTLE GIRL DIED.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Let's see, Conspiring, Kidnapping, War and Murder all in the same event where there are children present, not to mention probably feel horrible now since the murder victim happened to be a young girl. Personally, I wasn't thrilled with this particular plot at all and I certainly wouldn't let a child follow along with this kind of story either. If you wanted to replace the NPC Amy, you could have done it another way. It's just my opinion.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Quote By Ophelia:

; border: 1px solid ; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;"> I wish the Islanders hadn't been portrayed as evil. They worship the sea, and the pirates crashed a party. If they hadn't done so, they would never have brought Amy to Merana's attention.

Yeah, yeah, blame the victim.

If you islanders had gone ahead and tossed someone else into the sea instead of making such a big fuss over some missing gals, then perhaps this whole thing could have been avoided in another manner. Seems to me the victim was already picked out whether Meranaâ€™s attention was on her or not.

Barbarians the lot of ya. Really glad I followed the side with the Torrey now.

Anyway, I liked it. I enjoy a sad ending and certain amount of character death from time to time, because I am morbid that way. As others have said, it was beautifully illustrated as well.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Wow. Didn't think they'd actually go through with it. Very sad. Who will conduct the newbie quests now?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I won't believe it until I see a half shark eaten body....

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I feel so bad.

But amazing plot.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Wow, amazing plot ending! I think Sarah should take over Amy's quests.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

i dont like how you have to be poor to do the quest seriously why cant everyone do the quest

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

lol amy dies. how random. xD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I regret joining the islands now :C

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ovation, so true! "On top of that, she keeps losing her goshdarn bracelet and is incapable of walking over to the Wizard to ask for her piece back!" Right! If she hardly ever leaves the shrine (because then she'll loose her powers) - how she manages to loose the bracelet every day??

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Quote By Ovation:

; border: 1px solid ; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">Veeline, I have never ever ever liked Shinwa. She's conceited, arrogant, and lazy/inactive to the point that it makes the first two traits into something a lot like narcissism - expecting worship without actually doing anything to earn it.

That's quite an accurate description of Shinwa, actually. She does have a very vain streak, and I suspect that for all her going on about being the ''good'' goddess, the reason she troubled herself at all to make a statement is because Amy looked like her. Something needed to catch her attention, and that was it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

why iam i not a pirate

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

the** Darn typos.

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