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December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Hmm ;/ I'm not really keen.. I preffer the look that was given to the galactic Clawison.. longer thinner legs and a smaller head with a really cute look. This just looks too stocky ;[ Fluff up the tail too! :c

Votes for older look

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Not a fan of this particular pet, but the revmap is incredible. A wonderful improvement! ^^

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

In comparison to the old one, it's definitely lacking a chin, but otherwise, it's a vast improvement.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Soooo much better!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The muzzle bothers me.. I dont know whether it's the top half or the chin area, but it seems.. Stretched.. Or distorted a little. Either that, or the nose is too big. I dont know. Also, where's it's collar?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Make the head smaller. And the eyes - those are way too big. It's pretty chunky, but then again the old ones are chunky too, sooo... yeah. I appreciate how you tried to keep it chunky though, that's cool. But I agree, that purple is out of place. It has to go. It looks awkwardly painted on as an afterthought. Also, the wings look too cramped. You have plenty of space left over in that square - use it! Let's see him spread those wings a little. Also, while the collar may seem silly, it's been part of the clawsion forever, so keep it. It's already got an earring, so a collar would be fine. The art itself is great, but it just needs bigger wings, smaller head/eyes, a distinct lack of purple, and the collar. Then you'd be golden.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I think this is what the clawsion is to look like. Its suppose to have short legs and a kick ass kind of look on its face. My only things with this is that the tail could be shown more and the eyes maybe are a tad to big. But I love it! I don't think it really needs a collar. But if a lot of people want it so badly maybe there should be one. shrugs I love the markings! Awesome job to the artist! =3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

NEEDS A COLLAR!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Aww so cute :3 I love it^^

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The new one looks too chibi...

Never liked them really. =/

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like it a lot. c: Looks a lot cleaner, and nicer.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I never thought the Clawison looked good at all. This gives it some justice, but it just doesn't cut it. Love it's large eyes, though. & Yeah, looks too chibi. =/

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's very cute, but I like the previous fur color; it was more blue.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

... Erk. I really wish you could edit posts. ._.;; I also wanted to say that I am absolutely and completely in love with this guy's nose. X3 It's a little big, but just so cute!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Er... and when I say it's a problem I had with the old Clawsion, I meant the old common Clawsion. ^^; The redraws are just lovely, but the common and colorfill colors aren't as pleasing to the eyes, and I'd like to see those changed.

One thing I forgot to mention -- a slightly more yellow hue to the sabres would look nice. The old yellow is a bit much, but I don't think the teeth should be too white either, you know? x3;

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Well... let's see. The art is fantastic, VERY noticeable improvement and I'm in love with those wings, but I think it looks a bit too chibi -- something I find to be a problem with the old Clawsion as well. The legs could be lengthened just a bit, I think. IMO, the best Clawsion colors are the ones where it doesn't look too chibi.

The face is adorable, but I also find it a little flat. The ears I'm not too fond of; the shading doesn't make them look too furry, so it almost looks as if they're... made of fabric or something. I also thought the notches in the old Clawsion ears were a nice touch, and I'll miss them.

The markings aren't bad, but I don't much care for the purple -- it just seems sort of... oddly placed. I'd like to see a version with faded white rather than faded purple, just to compare and see if it looks better.

The purple around the neck, as well, doesn't look quite right when we have the old Clawsion to compare it to. I thought the collar was nice, but if the collar is definitely out, then maybe try using a dark blue rather than the purple?

Although I don't own a Clawsion for some odd reason, I've always had a major soft spot for the species, and I'm glad to see it's getting a revamp. :]

As always, thank you all so much for letting us vote in polls for the revamps and taking our opinions into account before things go through.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's cute, BUT...It needs a few things.

A Collar
Longer thiner legs
To look...less chibi
Smaller head

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's cute but... not my idea of what a clawsion should be. All of it's other colors have really fierce poses / longer legs / and overall just a less 'chibi' look to them. I love cute pets, but this revamp seems a little too over the top.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Mmn, its ... well how do I put it - okay. Its cute yes but ... too ... chibi. The eyes look like they could use a lor mote life to them. (getting darker and more more lighter to the middle, plus maybe a bit more reflection, but thats just my pickyness with eyes showing) Plus the eyes should be ... smaller .. narrower. At first I thought that the clawsion was already revamped further down the news and this WAS thne chibi redraw.

The mouth looks ... WAY to high and close to the mouth, also, I think it could help some if the mought goes a bit lower and then the sabres, it kinda looks like it has paper cut sabres with the way the mouth is now, also the sabres themselves may look more realistic with a slightly more yellow hue. (Doesn't have to be that much though, but usually teeth are white if they can put them in the mouth, and ... well that wouldn't be too fun for the little guy.

The ears ... I don't know what it is but .. they somehow don't appeal to me, maybe if they had small 'cuts' in them like the origonal, also maybe if the shading made it look more like fur (you know, jagged.) Instead of some ... odd material that you would find if you were cosplaying a clawsion.

The wings... first before I say anything: they are gorgeous now for the but: The way they show over the ear looks a little odd, maybe if the wings seemed to come out a bit more but ... I dunno, I think it would look more neautral if the ear was 'over' the wing, also I think they should be enlonged just a tad.

not that I dislike it but .... why is there a purple line arround the neck instead of the necklace? I dunno where that purple came from. Though the purple diamonds are a nice touch so maybe that neck fur is a nice change too but.. not many clawsions really need the revamp.

And finally: the legs. I notice a lot of clawsions have long legs and stubby tails, like a sabretoothed cat, rabbit mix. Thats' one thing that I LOVED about the colours of the pet.

Other than that, its really lovely, I like the choice of colours and designs. Kudos to the artists!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's much better than the previous one, no doubt... but i don't like the eyes and the mouth that makes the face look too flat (imvho)

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

WOAH! That's sooo cute!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love it! I hope the chibi is slightly revamped The only thing I find is the snout is a bit short and the legs are not quite long enough. But if it's not changed I wouldn't care because it's adorable! Fantastic job!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I really don't like this x_x Don't know how to explain it but I think it's mostly the head and face. The head looks kinda big too

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Omg it's so loveing cute. I love it

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I never liked this species, but this revamp might change my mind...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

also i agree with typhoon-muffin

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

also i guess the bloodred and angelic will be revamped, but please keep the old POSES -.-

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

also I think its head might me to "long"

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

it looks great but I don like the purple thing on its chest...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The purple markings seem a little too "sparkledawg" to me just because they are found nowhere else on the palette. If they were switched to match the dark blue ears (thus tying the ears into the body better as well) I think that's be one small improvement

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Pants: ... No.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I'm not a fan of the purple; the fade from white to dark purple makes it look like it's supposed to be magic, which I've never imagined the Clawsion as... The old markings looked a bit more natural.

Overall, though, I really like it. :3 I just wanted to nitpick at the spots.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The first thing I noticed was that the muzzle is too flat, it should look more... well like it sticks out. And the eyes are a bit glassy

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

One- Keep the collar Two- lose the purple

Then it'll be perfect! I love Clawsions by the way... totally one of my fave species!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

No more yellow teeth = is better But the eyes disturb me. By this I mean the fact that the eyes themselves are huge and cute, but those tiny eyebrows are located in a way that would fit a slightly angry face. Together brought, it doesn't look too good. Other than that, Alzirr approves. W00t. Looks so much better than the Malticorn revamp, and the last polled Hikei. A great improvement. Keep it up!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Touching up the new eye marking to make a Wedjat symbol and making the muzzle more defined would make it = Perfect. Other then that, huge improvement.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

its cutee :3 butt something is deff off i think its the muzzle and the legs (:

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This revamp would be amazing if the face weren't so very very flat. Clawison have muzzle!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Bunny_luv: Lets see you draw any better. At least TRY and be constructive and critique the work instead of saying "This sucks" or "This is horrible".

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

looks awful

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This is a nice revamp and I like the coloring a lot more, but the original marking around the eye showed the Wedjat... I liked that ); Surely it wouldn't be hard to keep that in there.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Very cute, I like it a lot. Though the purple spots seem unneeded.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

BTW, the clawsion's original eye was based on the Wedjat, or Eye of Horus, a symbol meant to ward off evil in ancient Egypt. I'd like it if that symbolism is kept; with the modifications to the eye markings, it's totally gone.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

it seems a little..short? xD; i mean i know it's short anyway..but i think it got shorter lol and the upper/front part kinda weighs it down. maybe make the wings a big longer? and i wish it still had its collar and you could see it's tail and ear. the ears bother me too..kinda reminds me of a monkey lol but yeah..good improvement overall~

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

:O I love this. I reaaalllyyy love ittt <33333 Thanks to whoever drew it; you did a great job .

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This is a lovely, and really needed, revamp. The shading is very attractive to me, and the colors are unusual and interesting. The character of the initial pet is there as well. I like the purple markings on the body, but not as much around the collar. I still like the markings, though.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

LOVE the revamp! The purple accents add the perfect touch to him, in my opinion, and the teeth look much better white. The wings are truly beautiful! Great job with this one! ^^

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ok I am not even going to read all the comments b/c 1) I dont have time and 2) I am not in the mood to be bummed out. But I just love this guy! Everything about him! His ears, his eyes, his cute little fangs, his markings and I LOVE his wings!! Everything! Great work!

And Pants - no. Not IMO.....

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Dont they kinda look the same? XD

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