Subeta -

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Awesome

I love the new one.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Great improvement, but I think it needs longer/less stocky legs and should keep the collar. C: The wing overlapping the ear looks slightly odd too. Other than that, great job!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like -parts- of the revamp, but I would definitely not be happy with that as the end result. I agree with many of the other comments saying that it looks too "chibi," at least in the body, and the face doesn't seem to fit the rest of the revamp. It's certainly flatter than the rest, but it also seems -larger- than the rest; it's out of proportion. I miss the swirls in the fur and the collar on this version, but the rest of the fur patterns look fantastic! The wings are lovely, though I agree that the ear would look better in front of the wings, and the white fangs are a HUGE improvement.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It looks nice (as does all subeta's art) but it looks a little stocky and while the old Clawsion's legs were short, it didn't look quite so... chubby.
It's by all means very, very cute, but from the look of the old Clawsion, the species was supposed to be more cool than cute. =)

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I can see where some folks are saying it has a 'chibi' aspect, but the artwork is lovely, and I see it as an improvement. The increased detail adds a lot.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I don't like it.

The art is huge improvement, but it looks more like a revamp of chibi than the whole species. I'd like for it to keep the collar. I don't like that it was changes into a fur pattern. I also don't think that the shade of purple being used works well with the blues. The extra markings look like an accident to me, and it's missing the knee swirl. I liked the eye marking as a triangle/arrow type thing. Now it looks too similar to the Anyu's eye markings. The pet looks chubby, and the legs look blocky.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

dont know how to post an image, so http://tinyurl.com/clawsionfix thats how i'd imagine the eyes to look better as except obviously less squished and pixelly cause im bad 8D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I say... longer legs, keep the collar, and - didn't it have a line over its eye before? Keep that, too. Otherwise I think it's great! ^o^

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Quote By Typhoon_Muffin:

; border: 1px solid ; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;"> Overall I really like this revamp but there are a few nit picks, so another redline O:

The legs were botheing me a bit as they seem rather chibish, I like the eyes alot but that one little pointed part the corner of the eye should be rounder in my opinion. Also I guess the collar is going away but I wanted to see what this revamp would look like if it still had it and I have to say I'd like it more if it kept the collar c: One last thing someone pointed out: The ear I think would look better in front of the wing instead of behind. And the most important thing is that the face looks very flat, if you were to put in a line ontop to show more of the muzzle, i'm sure alot of people would be happy ^^

A few problems but I really do like most of it O:

Wow, you took the words out of my mouth.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Hm. Wait, what about this stunning concept?

Long legs, smaller hed, happier...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Well, there are a few things I think need a bit of work. 1st: It looks WAY to chibby to me. 2nd: You took away its collar?? Why?! All the old ones have a collar. 3rd: Legs are a bit to thick and the eyes are a little big. Other then that, good job.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The only thing that bothers me about this WONDERFUL revamp is the eyes. They do seem a little too big.

But I think the rest is great. =D About time to get rid of the yellow teeth!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Funny this comes up now; just the other day I was looking at my GY clawsion and thinking it needed retouching... or gorification.

The eyes and the stubby legs keep screaming 'CHIBI' at me. So I'm going to have to vote old.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

i love it O: though! the eyes are a bit too big, i think and the face seems a bit flat..

but. it's still pretty cute. C:

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like the improvements, I think the eyes could be a bit smaller. To big for the face.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

all-in-all I love the revamp...the shading is great and I love how they now have the little purple collar and the diamond markings are a little clearer...the eyes seem a little too large or maybe too much iris and not enough white? I'm not sure, they just seem that kind of creepy doll large...the kind that follow you everywhere and give you the heebie jeebies...that could just be me though...but even with the eyes, it's a beautiful revamp!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I'm sorry to say that I voted old, not that I prefer it over a new version, but because I feel(like others) that while this is great base for the Clawsion, it needs some small improvements. The ones that bother me the most are the fact that face looks flat and that it has no collar. But I really like Typhoon's red-line, it provide a nice look at some of the small improvements.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Ooh, I love Typhoon's improvements.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

o That...is an awesome Clawsion.... My only suggestions are: Move the wing behind the ear and either somehow space the eyes further apart or make them smaller. I also wish we could see a little more of the tail, but I don't mind it too much... Voted new.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This is DEFINITELY an improvement. My main critique would be the color choices. I would get rid of the purple all together and male the darker "blue" actually blue. The eyes and earring are now also too much of a clash. There are just too many colors going on, especially when they're all so bright. I'm also wondering, why are the pupils not black? It gives it a bit of a dead look and doesn't seem to work for this pet.

Altogether though, this is obviously much nicer, I just think it needs some minor tweaking

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

awww how precious ^^ Only thing Id really say is speaking loudly is the wing placement, maybe look into lowering it (both vertically and horizontally down his back)

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Very cute, but I think that this Clawison looks a bit too chibified for the common color. I think that the eyes should be a bit smaller. Also I think that it should have the collar because that is what made the clawison unique.

Otherwise, this is an awesome revamp that keeps the same personality as the current pet.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I think the collar should be there, as well as a bigger nose... but it looks amazing; especially the wings and purple highlights in the fur. You're doing awesome. ;D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Pretty...chibi-ish. But I like it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's needs the collar and a bigger nose, just like everyone else said. I don't even know what the Purple Strip was put there for... It looks weird. And the face is definitely creepy looking. It's better though...

I'm voting New I reckon.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Once the graveyard clawsion isn't changed [drastically] I agree that it is a great revamp. Yeah, the collar/ear/face thing is a bit uh, odd? but overall, yay.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Love it. It's beautiful. I would however, like to see that ear in front of the wing.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Whoa, shinyshiny animu. I think its eyes are way too big. :/

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Overall I really like this revamp but there are a few nit picks, so another redline O:

The legs were botheing me a bit as they seem rather chibish, I like the eyes alot but that one little pointed part the corner of the eye should be rounder in my opinion. Also I guess the collar is going away but I wanted to see what this revamp would look like if it still had it and I have to say I'd like it more if it kept the collar c: One last thing someone pointed out: The ear I think would look better in front of the wing instead of behind. And the most important thing is that the face looks very flat, if you were to put in a line ontop to show more of the muzzle, i'm sure alot of people would be happy ^^

A few problems but I really do like most of it O:

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I don't really like either of them. I just don't care for Clawsions, though. :3

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I think I'm in love. :'D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Do not want True, it's cute...TOO cute. It is much better art, but it looks way too chibi.

Ways this could be improved (most suggestions are by way of getting rid of chibiness):

-The ear goes in front of the wing -Smaller eyes -Smaller head-fur tuft -Add a bit more cheekbone

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The front legs look a little stubby but other than that its cute!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I voted for the new one but I'd do have this to say:

I like the idea of a 'fur' collar, but purple doesn't do it for me, I think a dark blue would look sharper.
The Ear should cover the wing I think, it would give them more weight/balance.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The Clawsion really needed a revamp! It looks so outdated compared to the others. xD

I really like it. I'm with some of the other people in wondering where the collar is though..?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I really liked the gold teeth on the old ones, but these are simply amazinggg.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like it, but I feel like I'm the only one who misses the yellow teeth. ;A; added more character, like the collar, imo.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This is great. I love it. It kept the bright colorfullness of the old one, and its attitude. The old Clawsion was just so hard to look at because the art was so outdated. I always wanted one but just... I couldn't bring myself to get one xD

But this is very cute, I like it. It probably will get some minor tweaking to please the picky people, but that's fine~ I love it.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It it 95% more better than the original, by far. I think that the missing collar is a bit... eh. Because if that disappears, that means the collars in the themed versions would go away as well... to fit with the current revamp like all the other pets. And, I must say that I got the Bloodred Clawsion because the spiked collar was just a bitchin' idea. Sooo, It is a great revamp, I'd just hate to see the collars go on the default, as well as the potential possibility of them disappearing on the potioned colors.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love it and think it's a much better version than the previous one. However, I think it still needs a more protruding snout than now. The face looks a little bit flat.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's so cute~ c: I would totally get one if the revamp took place and I had more space.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I'd LOVE it if the ears were in front of the wing, but other than that, MASSIVE improvement.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like the clawsion who seems to go into mischief. But, new clawsion is gentle and obedient face XP

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

i think it's great! i would definitly adopt one if the revamp took place

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Pssh, I love it. The head's a little big, but I love it overall.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Whatacutie. He looks like a teddy bear! ♥ I especially love the fluff on his chest.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I miss the collar ;-; It looks awesome...but, the collar please?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Hmn...I really like it, but it does seem 'chibi-ish' o,o Maybe longer legs, it just seems...A little disproportionate though ^^' With some minor changes it'd be great, good work :3!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Oops! Sorry for blank comment. What I wanted to say was:

I would like a bit more purple, please!

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