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Jan 12, 2016 10 years ago
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Gazing upon the shelves upon shelves of loose-leaf notebooks and scattered parchment, you feel an overwhelming sense of peace. The hall is void of all life, aside from a tiny, encased plant in the window. Silence rings angelic voices in your ears, as the scent of mildew wafts gently to your nostrils.

"Ah," you think to yourself, "technology has ruined this feeling long ago..."

You walk slowly down the wooden pathway, finding yourself immersed in the many worlds surrounding you, looming like a lonely demon. Finding yourself closing in on the tiny plant, you reach out to touch the clear glass...

"Don't touch that!" A voice exclaims. You turn abruptly, shocked at the sudden noise. The sounds of heaven no longer echoed in your mind, instead replaced by your pounding heart.

"O-oh! I... I'm sorry!" You wave your hands in front of you, trying to show you meant no harm. A shorter woman appears from behind a door you had not noticed before, closing it slowly behind her. Dark circles lay embedded deeply underneath her eyes, as if she has not slept in months, scrying the endless plains of her thoughts for a new journey.

"Beautiful, isn't it?" She motions gently towards the soft, immobile creature in the window. "It will never wilt."

"It... never wilts?" You turned to gaze back to the joyous flower, trapped in the glass before the window. Well, why not? It looked plenty happy enough!

"Mhm," she mumbles, walking closer, "It breathes the air of the beloved, drinks from the wine of the gods, and eats the dreams of the waking."

You were taken aback by the sudden morbidness of her attitude. Her blue eyes turned a deep gray, matching the chasms that lie beneath. You studied her and the plant, back and forth, back and forth, hoping to find something to break the thickening ice.

"I... Don't understand," you say bluntly.

"Of course you don't. You are mortal. Not even I can quite understand the workings of this divine being. I just ensure that it is the sunlight that we all desire, to be in view of the gods above us." She reaches down, peering longingly into the glass. You inch a bit closer, to see what beauty the woman sees before you. As the seconds roll by, you begin to see the world. Grass is creeping along the edges, waving at you from the inside. A rainbow gleams a brilliant light, shining directly into your soul. Your heart warms, bringing the peace back into your mind. Heaven's angels begin to sing again, shattering the angst within with a high C.

"I see..." You speak softly, focused entirely on the fragile world before you. White clouds drift slowly by, dissipating before reaching the ends of the universe.

"So what is it then?" The woman perks back up, her hair flouncing around her shoulders. A look of determination has taken over the empty vibes. "You're here for a story, yes?"

Novena's Written Relics Welcome to Novena's Written Relics! I am currently taking commissions for written pieces for your beloved companions.

All of my work is COPYRIGHTED and if I find any of my work anywhere I have not authorized, I will hunt you down and skin you alive.

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Lilylune's Lanfan MissEventful's Khloris - "Daffodils." Zerataku's Yashi - "Yashi's World"

Do not let the age of my work fool you - I still very much enjoy expressing my thoughts into words.

Pricing & Availability I am currently OPEN to taking commissions.

Pricing

Short Story (250-1000 words) - 1.5mil sP Medium Story (1000-1750 words) - 2.5mil sP Lengthy Story (1750+ words) - 4mil sP Poetry (Any length) - Varies.

The cost of poetry for your pet profile will vary, as poetry is versatile.

I will also accept CSC instead of sP. Please smail me offers for written works in exchange for CSC.

[U]WIP:[/u] 1. 2. 3. [U]COMPLETED:[/U]

  1. Zerataku's Yashi
  2. Lilylune's Albina
  3. Zerataku

Rules & Regulations Please remember to abide by allSubeta Forum Rules.

My work is my hard work. By accepting my services for you, I expect credit to be left. It will be included in the piece, with a link to this page. Don't be a thief!

Please remember that some requests may speak louder to me than others. I will do what I can to get things to everyone at a reasonable pace, and most of all, in order. If I accept your commission, you will get it.

Once the work is completed, I will smail you to inform you of the completed work.

Please expect 1-7 days for the piece to be completed. Writing takes a lot of effort and I do have other responsibilities.

Commission Request Application This must be completed to the best of your ability before I accept your commission(s). Please fill out two separate forms for more than one pet.

Pet URL: Personality: Hobbies: Favorites: Did you adopt or create this pet?: Is the current color of the pet the permanent one, or will it change?: Does it have a job? Is that job important to your pet?: Does this pet have a connection with your other pets?: Any other important info regarding your companion?: Lastly, what type of written work are you looking for? See options under "Pricing & Availability" above. :

If you want a story or poem written for something that is not pet-related: What type of written work are you looking for? Please see options under "Pricing & Availability" above. : :What is this for?: Please list any and all info you are requesting to be included in the written work. Please describe this part to the best of your ability for me to get a clear mental image. :

Jan 12, 2016 10 years ago
Lilylune
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Marinn

Yay! I love the piece you did on Lanfan <3 I'll have to get a commission soon for sure. :D

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Jan 13, 2016 10 years ago
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Northeastern

- moved this to the pet profile subforum, since stories are mostly for pet profiles :)

Jan 13, 2016 10 years ago
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Oh, okay. I had seen some in here previously, so I assumed. Sorry! >-<;

Mar 6, 2016 10 years ago
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Adelay_654

Hello there. I'd like to request from you. Are you familiar with the Mario world?

Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Hello!

Mario, such as Super Mario, etc?

I grew up on Nintendo if that's what you mean. I know the basics, I suppose, but am more than happy to do research to provide a better story with the proper references. :)

Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Pet URL: Khloris Personality: Goody Goody? (not really sure, lol) Hobbies: Manipulating Nature Did you adopt or create this pet?: Create Is the current color of the pet the permanent one, or will it change?: Color will stay as is, unless I do a custom recolor. Does it have a job? Is that job important to your pet?: Yes, currently a Horticulturist. Yes, it is important. Does this pet have a connection with your other pets?: No. Any other important info regarding your companion?: I have some details listed in her profile for a little back story though you're welcome to do your own research. Lastly, what type of written work are you looking for? Poetry.

If there's anything else you need let me know. :)

Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Thanks for your response!

Let me take a look over everything and write up a few things and see what I can come up with. I will send you a sMail once the work is finished. :)

edit: I've done my research... This will be a fun piece to write. I may need all day! Hohohohohoho. I will get back with you ASAP.

Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Well I've got an idea for a pet. His name is Yashi, and I want him to be Yoshi's evil twin. Perhaps he was working with Bowser all along, set up the obstacles that Mario and Luigi had to go through to get to Princess Peach, followed them around to spy on them and told all of the enemies what part of the world they were in so they could find them, and other things like that. I'm not sure how that's going to translate into a story, but that's what I have in mind.

Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Ooo, evil twins are always fun.

I can most definitely see what horrible, scheming plot I can come up with in story form. I'll have to do some reading on the story of Mario to refresh on some things. Is there a specific period of time in the Mario world you want referenced, or would you like something as unique as possible? ("Yashi's World?" Muahaha.)

Is the pet already made? If so, do you have a link to the pet profile?

I'm assuming you'd like this to be in story formatting. Any specific length?

Mar 7, 2016 10 years ago
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Kahrmuh

awesome, take as much time as you need. I am liking what you have thus far and can only imagine the final outcome!

Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
Novena
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I've sent a new sMail with more information - your commission is complete!

Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Kahrmuh

thank you very much for the poem, I truly appreciate it and will be back soon. :)

Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Thank you for your commission and glad you like it! Will be looking forward to working with you again. :)

Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Oh yay ^_^ No I wasn't thinking of a specific time frame although I'd like for it to coincide with the Super Mario Brothers. I adopted Yashi a few days ago so there's nothing going on with him right now. You have free reign on the length. I can pay for however long it becomes. :)

Mar 8, 2016 10 years ago
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Thank you for your response.

I'll send a sample once I have some typed up to get your thoughts and make any adjustments if necessary. Please give me a few days at most for it to be totally completed, as writing can take a lot out of me sometimes. :) I'll do everything I can to keep in touch with you during that time and keep you up-to-date on the progress.

Mar 17, 2016 10 years ago
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Pet URL: Albina Personality: Very derpy and silly, she is the drawing creation of Marinn Hobbies: Going on silly adventures (looking for starfruits) Favorites: Starfruit Did you adopt or create this pet?: She's adopted, but for her background, I'm having Marinn be her creator :) Is the current color of the pet the permanent one, or will it change?: Permanent Does it have a job? Is that job important to your pet?: Nope Does this pet have a connection with your other pets?: She is the drawing that Marinn made, the great adventurer Albina. Her story doesn't coincide with any of my other pets. Any other important info regarding your companion?: Not in particular Lastly, what type of written work are you looking for? See options under "Pricing & Availability" above. : Anything you want to come up with is great <3 I had in mind that it would be like a really silly children's story about her and her adventures :)

Can't wait to see more of your work <3 <3

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Mar 17, 2016 10 years ago
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I really thought about writing children's books, so this will be super fun and challenging. Give me a few days to toss around some ideas and get some drafts written up. I've been sending about half to each person as I complete them, so expect a sMail with an unfinished idea sometime or another soon.

You want to do an art trade? I'll just turn it into a straight up book! Well... As much as children's books will let me anyway, hohohoho

Mar 17, 2016 10 years ago
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Haha yes absolutely :D :D Go wild, I can't wait to see what you come up with <3

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Mar 17, 2016 10 years ago
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Brace yourself, a novel is coming.

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