:3 I'm ready!

I believe I have it finished. I'll send a sample your way now.

Word count is 2512, so it's definitely a mini-novel. ;)

Hello again! If you're good with a little bit of humour and can finish a UP TO 2000 word story in two days (it's a birthday gift, so I need it by that timeframe which would be the 25th) then I've got a comission for you! :)

Two days? Date for the deadline? (it's midnight, on the 23rd here, just want to be sure.)

I can sure try. What is it you're looking for?

the deadline would be the 25th, sorry about that! i accidently put the 23rd when i edited it. it's something for my sister on her bday (though i would still credit you to it, wouldn't say that i wrote it). Here's what I've got in mind:

Cindy is helping Adam practice for a dance recital, but he is being very lazy about it. Cindy presses on to help him. During a break, a bumblebee flies into the studio unnoticed and lands on Adam's chair. Adam sits down to tie his shoe, unaware that he is sitting on the bee. The bee manages to find a hole/tear in the back of Adam's tights and flies in. A short while later, after Adam brags about how nothing can make him dance, he gets stung. He dances around and jumps out of the studio into a fountain. Cindy can't help but mockingly congratulate Adam and laugh at him.

it would be 3rd person and, as i said before, up to 2000 words but it can be as few as 500. i just want something cute that wouldn't take too long to read.

She loves Yogi Bear, and this is the idea behind the bee scene: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CnfMoE_U3pc&feature=youtu.be

the only difference would be that Adam falls out of a window, not a door

No problem, I just wanted to be sure on the date.

I can definitely work on this tomorrow (today) and see what I can come up with. As always, I'll send examples via sMail to get your thoughts as I finish it. Please feel free to nitpick at it if necessary. :)

Can I have some details on Cindy and Adam? Appearance? More in-depth personalities? (If these "characters" are based off actual people, feel free to sMail me it if you prefer.)

Cindy -- brown hair, green eyes, freckles; encouraging, bubbly, happy-go-lucky, loves the humour in life Adam -- blonde hair, brown eyes; lazy, like to start things but not finish them, excited easily but loses that excitement about things fast

Great, thanks. I have it added to my info list and I'll get started on this in the morn' or afternoon or whenever it is I wake up. I fear it is too late for my brain to function at the moment, hohohohoho.

I'll have a sMail sent your way sometime tomorrow. :)

xD thank you so much ^_^

I'm awake, had at least one cup of coffee, and am starting on your commission now. :) Expect a sMail sometime over the next few hours.

Pet URL: https://subeta.net/pets/Yoshiko Personality: Cunning and Distant she used to be very caring and loving before her world was turned upside down Hobbies: She still lives as if she was in a past era. She visits shrines in her spare time. She used to spend all her time searching for a cure but she has long since given up hope of ever leading a normal life. She is able to see the shrine guardians due to being half kitsune. Favorites: Tea, roaming the country side and the feeling of being free. Did you adopt or create this pet?: Created Is the current color of the pet the permanent one, or will it change?: Permanent Does it have a job? Is that job important to your pet?: When she was cursed she had to promise that she would always watch over the land. Her job is to protect those in need including herself. She has had centuries to practice and she has all but forget that she was once a normal human. Now though that is starting to change..she meets someone who is bringing back her memories for better or for worse. She gets headaches and flashbacks to time long lost. Does this pet have a connection with your other pets?: No Any other important info regarding your companion?: Yoshiko used to be a normal human leading a normal life. Her father was one of the best samurai and she lived in a high class family. One day she wandered to far from home and found herself face to face with a band of thieves. They quickly grabbed her and tortured her before leaving her to die. She was weak and unable to do much more than hope to the gods that they would save her. Her wishes were answered by a kitsune that promised to save her in return she would live but with a catch. She would be unable to die and she would become the new guardian taking the old kistunes place. She never did fully become a kistune though leaving her with a mortal mind and weak kistune form. Her family was unable to see her from that point on. She slowly began to forget she ever was fully human. Now in the modern day she still only wears kimono she does not let herself become visible to others but only day she meets someone that reminds her of someone in the distant past. He can see her even when she is hidden from everyone else. He brings out her memories slowly and from then on he vows to help her find a cure to her everlasting conflict.

some other random things she can see the guardians of shrines and she quite often will help them when they are in need. Her kistune form has grown quite slowly she only has 5 tails the other 4 are very short in length. Over time she has gained the ability to control the weather more or less the rain and thunderstorms. when she uses her power her fur color changes from white to grey and electricity can be seen around her. smoke will start to drift around her as well. she has a pair of wings but she hardly takes to the skies.

Lenghty story please I really want the story to get all of the details in both before and after the curse Hopefully the details make sense

Sorry for taking awhile to respond, I haven't been on Subeta much lately.

Thanks for all of the details. It definitely gives me plenty to work with. It may take me awhile to get this completed, but I will keep you up-to-date as it progresses!